Raised as a high class colt, Dew Drop was always taught that any pony that was not of Pegasus decent was under-class, un-welcomed in society, un-wanted. His parents condemned any talk of these ponies, unless it were to insult them. Dew grew up in hateful house, quite alone.
When his parents agreed to enrol him into Flight School, Dew was elated to know he was attending. It was exciting and all so new to him. What was he going to learn? Who was he going to meet? He was nervous to meet colts and fillies his age; he had never had any friends or ponies to talk to in his life.
Until he met Fluttershy... and then she disappeared.
Chapters (8)
Interesting start, I'm liking the idea of the separation between the Pegasi, Unicorns and the Earth ponies.
Keep up the good work.
Very interested now... Man i feel sorry for dew...
Keep up the good work!
Finally introduced filly Fluttershy.
New chapter might be up in a few days.
really nice chapter, but i would have thought that dew would feel a little more than "something he had never experienced before". i mean as his first friend i think you should have poured a little more description into it.
keep them coming!
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Oh, of course! I'll give it a bit of an edit to give it more feeling
thank you!
Holy mother of D'aww
This could be an interesting idea....I would love to encourage you upon such a great idea like this one as it would be interesting to see how this little filly will take it to an all grown up Fluttershy.
d'aaaaaaaaaawwwwwww
So far so good. Keep up the good work.
This one is a biiiit longer than the others. Not by much. Any feedback is appreciated!
Insta-Watch!
I'm liking the story so far, can't wait for that type of moment where the Parents pull him away from Fluttershy because of [insert reason and plot point here.]
Absolutely loved it! a very nice pace you have going between Fluttershy and Dewy, i really enjoyed it
The only thing i was unsure of was the fathers very quick change in tone when he asked Dewy about Fluttershy... But i guess he has the right to be concerned. Keep it up...Please.
45647 Thank you! And that sounds interesting.. hehe
45654 Thank you :D I'm having a little trouble working with Maxwell's personality... but so far I feel it's going alright :)
Hmm, Have you read Richard Wrights book american hunger? first thing that comes to mind when thinking of the childhood which your trying to pull off, if not READ IT!
46321 Well, I may read it!
this=d'aawww
AWWWW to Filly Fluttershy.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I cannot wait to see what happens next in this tale of yous.
This one was going to be EPICLY long. But I've split it up into two parts, considering the next one involves the bullies you meet in Sonic Rainboom and Cutie Mark Chronicles.
Hope you enjoy this! And yes, I skipped ahead. What I had in mind for that 3 - 4 month gap was all filler... And it was kinda pointless. If you want, I'll write a separate fiction explaining Dew and Fluttershys growing relationship! My intent for this story is the cliffhanger at the end... which you'll never know
joking. you'll find out in a few chapters time. ENJOY
Man i feel really pissed at Dew's parents... NEVER FELT SNOW?!? it is a sacrilege!
Yay! you put cappucino in there! I wondered when someone was going to...
Love it! keep it going please!
Well, this story's pretty damn awesome!
Me gusta. I would love to see the next chapter ASAP
The hell was i not tracking this, when i wake up for school tommrow, i better have a new chapter.
So that gives you about 5 hours...................
STOP READING THIS AND MAKE MORE! *insert random spaz stuff here that i am to lazy to type*
If you couldent tell, i love this story.
After hearing about the new episode coming up explaining the differences between each pony breed, I may have to revise the story if it doesn't fit with my ideas (knowing my luck, it won't be anything like my idea)
So what, all of the luna storys before the halloween ep. stayed the same, they just put a message saying "This was made before the haloween ep." Or you could just make it so dew's parents are the only ones like that.
55494 Yeah I know but I'm a bit of a perfectionist and I like keeping to the original storyline and just imagining filler or another story... Cos this is the way that THIS fiction goes. After awhile, it actually links in with the real storyline of a few episodes
Longest one so far! A bombshell hits in the next chapter :D but also a lot of sadness... so.. PREPARE!
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my body is ready
58666 sadness?
you.
better.
not.
make.
fluttershy.
cry!
"His mind was full of Fluttershy..." mine always is!
58781 AND IF I DO?
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den der gonna be one less writer on fimfiction....
Tissues? Check
Chocolate Ice Cream? Check
Ready for next chapter!
This is adorable! Love it
Great story! cant wait for the next part! keep up the good work, i will have to prepare myself............for manly tears may be shed
The longest chapter so far!
Unfortunately, after this chapter, I probably won't write anymore chapters until the new year. I hope no one minds!
Enjoy :3 I didn't make it as sad as I wanted. Just more character development and background stuff :3
THE D'AAAAAAWWWWWW LEVEL IS OVER 9000!!!
Fuckin' A!
I... can't... hold... it..... D'AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
I (somehow) saw this comming...
I feel sorry for both of them
WHAT! WHAT! WHHHHAAAATTTT!
nope, not worth it....not going to track it anymore.....
*creates new account to track it so can untrack it on this one*
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D: I hate you, so much. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! NOW! XD AWESOME story, I can't wait for the next chapter, and the direction that this story is going. Bravo sir, Bravo.
...that was some plot twist...
poor dewy...
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
I kind of saw it coming, but then the kiss- and- the- whu- wha- WHAT? No, this isn't right! Poor Dewy! SO MUCH PAIN! I HAS A MEGA SAD!
<-- HOW COULD YOU?!
73954 I need to ask, if Fluttershy said: "You promise not to tell anyone? I mean it Dewy!" and had meant Cappuccino?
She must've meant for him to not kiss her... but that's mean... SHIT DEWY DON'T BE MEAN TO YOUR CRUSH!!!!!
93484 Ooooh, nevermind that, I re read and Shya didn't finish as "crush on you" but as "crush on cappuccino"
So is this story dead or what?
what!? how dare you have a real life ;_______________;
jk, its alright, take your time, oppisit to ^ that, real life is a lot more important that pony fics, here is the order of it
Work on genetically engineering a real life Dash > School > Pony fics
I have been working on the first one for a bit so yeah...
MORE DASH TIME!
Bro, I'm in the same boat as you. I've been dealing with depression, school, and family. Just do what you need to do. We should never be your priority. Hope you get accepted!
A few minor errors, but otherwise a good (albeit short) chapter. Thanks for a good, quick morning read!