Displaced Story
Maretropolis. A town unlike any other. A town which is phasing a new mutant problem. A town with a suddenly increasing crime rate. A town with a new furless deformed Minotaur habitant. A town-
Well, you probably get the gist. This town had seemingly a lot of challenges to face. Increasing crime rate, the unrest of their citizens towards mutants, and even a growing price for potatoes. And god knows potatoes are awesome.
One of the few well accepted mutants, the Power Ponies have a lot on their hooves, and they certainly don't need anything more to worry about.
Too bad it wasn't meant to be as they encounter a strange furless thing, that can only be described as furless black deformed Minotaur in one of their missions.
This is a direct response to the ridiculously low number of fics with the tags: Power Ponies, Human, Comedy, which is up to six. At least up until now! But this changes now with this one, fic number seven is now on the list! So help us fight against this low number of fics!
Crossover: X-Men
Nice job. I like it!
very cool
Point of view not few
I haven't read this yet, Is saying fuck the potatoes like killing a chicken in skyrim. Will comment after read.
7668695 Ok just finishing reading this. I will say the bit when they were talking about the eye patch had me saying. "you are going to die here sir, that will never fool anyone or anything who was seen or read about a movie."
Intriguing, but look for a proofreader.
His love is his hat?
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Steam Gear likes wearing clothes, so I wouldn't call it love.
And Nightcrawler is asking for something differently. No one knows yet what he wants since "Where is she?!" can be interpreted quite differently.
I hope that answered your question, but feel free to clarify it further if I missed it.
WHERE IS MORE OF STORY!?!?
I cannot resist:
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Kurt is funny!
I need a drink.
I don't know what to say it was good it was a long time since the last update and this chapter didn't turn out like I thought it would but it was still good
new world, not place.
Umm... Nightcrawler is NOT hairless. His entire body is covered in a light coat of indigo fur.
Beats the snot out of two innocent evil henchmen over the lose of his beloved mid-day snack, then uses the third as a grumpy snuggle pillow because that one has fluffy ears...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
How will he react to Fluttershy?
wooooooooooo! fluffy eared snuggle pony is best pony!
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Glad you liked it! And I guess it is hard to guess how things go with a character that wasn't introduced properly until now.
Though I'm now curious what you thought it would go like.
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Corrected! Thanks!
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Do you mean Beast/Hank with that? Maybe you mixed these two up? In any case I didn't notice any fur on him in the movies, or that one cartoon.
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Glad you guys liked it! Kurt is a sucker for all things cute and fluffy! About Fluttershy, he probably wouldn't mind snuggling her! But then again there is fluffy mane pony too!
8097342 Have you ever watched the X-Men animated series I thought you were going to make him kind of like the Nightcrawler in that one bat a little more joking around and having fun but still kind of serious you know not go to Pinkie Pie on crack who has Discord powers Now that I think about it that's a scary thought Pinkie Pie on crack with discord's powers I can't say that without a shiver going up my spine
8097342 kurt is best Nightcrawler
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I watched a bit of said series. I'm also trying to get his character like that in a way. Funny and silly, but also series at times. Though since he is a Displaced, he also has other character traits, like being more aggressive sometimes.
In any way I hope the character will be enjoyable for everyone!
8097342 it's in the comix that he actually have fur but really short.
... is it bad that dalek music started playing on my playlist as Steam Gear was dragged away, and it fitted almost perfectly?
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That's good to know. I mainly operated on the movies, and also a bit on the TV series I have watched a tad and there was no fur as far as I noticed.
I honestly think that I will keep it furless though. It's just a small detail, and I like him to rub a furless cheek against furry ones and all that.
Mane-iac should have said "Fluffy" has the pretzel, That way when Twi-I mean Matter-Horn showed up all she saw was kurt chasing him screaming about a snack.
love this! more please!
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Luckily I only have two more chapters to go before I finally close the gap in my story. Gap since I have already a lot of chapters written and finished. Four would follow shortly after said two chapters were finished. So, there will be quite a bit more once I close the gap!
kids, this is called, an ass kicking, and for some reason i want the Kurt x Mane-iac, reformed of course
8140541 yay!
do bad guys cuddle? why yes, yes we do
hehehe fluffy ears
He has done the impossible! Getting displaced by someone other then the merchant!!
Scootaloo!
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XD hahahahahahaha i loved this chapter
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE sisterly conversations and plannings :P don't ask about the 'yeeeee' thing
The next one is gonna be good
PS. I can't stop grinning
the last words of this chapter should have been "But he also hoped to see him again one day. With that last thought he drifted off to a peaceful slumber barely noticing the blue hands cuddling him from under the bed.
FOR PONY!
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BUT WHERE IS THE REFERENCE???
HE LEFT FLUFFY EAR BEHIND!!! NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
I stayed up until 2am to read more of this story, the only problem was... THERE IS NO MORE STORY TO READ!!!
As an american I can vouch that knowledge is only known by the elite and the people who make the simpsons. (The simpsons popularized the term meh in America.)
at first I was thinking of the darkness but this sealed it he's Jackie Estacado.
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trying
tights
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Tights are a type of clothing not a fabric so I'm not sure what that sentence means.
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Superheroes are said to wear underwear or tights. Spandex is a stretchy fabric. I kinda imagine superhero suits to are like that, like the Incredibles.
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Corrected the last one a bit. You know, her getting on her hindlegs before falling with her back on the bed.
8544503 I know but tights are a type of clothing while spandex is a fabric the way your refering to them sounds like tights are a type of fabric there are spandex tights.
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Switched it around. Now it should be okay.
Me encanta el personaje, pero esperaba mas RGRE.
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Except that one guy from X-Men origins.
You know, the spikey dude?
Reminds me of an episode of The Agents of S.M.A.S.H. The Leader planned on fusing everyone in a large radius with gamma radiation making them just like him. He believed that if he did that there would be no more discrimination but in doing so he’d have control over them.