Big Macintosh has become dissatisfied with the mundane day to day activities at Sweet Apple Acres. When he sees that Applejack has hurt herself while practicing for the Ponyville rodeo, he jumps on the opportunity to do something out of the ordinary. With Applejack in her physically and emotionally weakened state, Big Macintosh shows his sister some tough, rough love.
I threw this together in a few hours to get a reference point for voting. Evidently this community has very low standards. I'm disappointed in you, Mr Reader.
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Get yer mind outta the gutter, Applejack!
Well written but all too obvious. Why mention the splinter several times before pulling it out? Needs moar obfuscation.
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Thanks, I'll bear that in mind the the future. Need to strike that balance between making it obvious and making something that hasn't been previously established massively alter the story. Also, I'm probably going to overuse "obfuscation" for at least a fortnight now
Maybe it´s the fact that these kinds of fics have been in abundance lately. Seems that every single one I read my brain starts a celerious cogitation on the matter of whether it´s a double-take or just straight up nonconsensual coitus. You´ve probably read "Twilight´s first time" right?
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Nope. I really need to read more fanfic, especially if I'm going to keep writing the stuff. I have finals in a week, so I'll probably be reading lots of fanfic rather than studying.