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  • E The Three Sisters: Extended Family

    A pony has arrived in Ponyville looking for her 'auntie Purity'.
    28,565 words · 17,636 views  ·  2,339  ·  31
  • T The Sweetie Chronicles: Fragments

    Sweetie Belle must find Twilight by travelling through different Fanfic worlds...
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  • T The Three Sisters

    Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected.
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  • E The Three Sisters: Like Fudge

    Chrysalis' daughters are serving their community service in Ponyville. Nothing can go wrong.
    12,947 words · 4,355 views  ·  855  ·  14
  • E Running

    Octavia decides to run away from her life in Canterlot.
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  • T The Changeling Queen

    Chrysalis has to choose a successor.
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  • T The Empty Room

    An ancient enemy; a family secret; a plot to overthrow the Princesses...
    150,436 words · 9,751 views  ·  1,894  ·  68
  • E X is a Changeling

    There's a lot more going around Fluttershy's cottage than anypony knew.
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  • 1w, 17h
    43 Students Killed

    I normally don't use my blog for this, but if I don't say anything about this, I'll regret it.

    Now, some of you are probably aware of what happened in Mexico with the 43 students gone missing in September and what happened afterwards... the fact that it basically exploded into violent riots is not surprising.

    A couple of years ago, a friend of mine decided to drive from Mexico City to New Laredo, a drive he had done several times before. We never heard from him again. A couple of cartel members were caught at one point and identified his vehicle and confessed to shooting him because they had felt like it.

    Several years ago, the cousin of a friend of mine was abducted and killed by kidnappers seeking money. Another acquaintance at the time got shot for bumping someone on the road. And those two were before the Cartels became the big news item internationally.

    This might seem distant and possibly irrelevant to you, since you're most likely not in Mexico and who cares about other contries right? Well, there's plenty of us who do care, who have friends and family there, and it affects us. You know us. You read our stories, and blogs and share with us pictures and memes on Tumblr or the Social Media site of your choice.

    Tragedy happens all over the world, but remaining silent and doing nothing, is not a good way to deal with it. I'm not advocating violence here, either, but I think, that if I have about 3440 followers here, all of you with contacts and all of them with contacts of their own, we can do something. Something small, maybe, but perhaps enough to add up to what's happening out there and make a difference.

    So what am I asking for? Get informed, see what's going on, how others around the world are already protesting it, from South Korea to Brazil. Think how you would feel... if you're a student, the morning after you said goodbye to your friends, they're gone. A classroom full of empty desks, save for you and a few others.

    If you're a teacher, you've thought about this when you have seen school violence in the US, for example... the lives you're helping shape, the families you have affected... broken and gone. You wonder what happened to them... and you find out. Ashes. The rest? Thrown into the river to hide evidence.

    If you're a parent... last night your kid called you, "Hey, dad/mom, I'll have to call you later, the police is picking me up."

    I'm a parent. Whenever I see news about school violence here, I freak out about the future of my son. I have a sister... and parents in Mexico. Cousins, uncles, aunts. I know, one day, I'll find out that someone they know has gone missing, if not something closer to home.

    So what am I getting at? Once you get informed, once you decide that yes, that is shit you wouldn't want happening to you or those you love, do something simple. Create more awareness on your blogs, tumblrs, imgur, reddit, facebook, etc. It's a corruption that won't be gone until we all, Mexicans and The World put pressure on until we crush it. Make memes pointing out what's wrong with this and why we're all together as part of this same crazy-ass world and that we don't want that crap happening to our neighbors and friends any more than we want it happening to us.

    Don't get in trouble, but make some trouble, as we can and peacefully, for those that need to be in trouble.

    59 comments · 1,067 views
  • 1w, 3d
    A curiosity from back in 2008

    I wrote this little piece of sci-fi-thingy back in 2008... it still functions as a bit of a novel seed for me, don't know if I'll ever really go back to it. It's nothing too special, but I thought about it today and figured I'd share it here with you guys. It's just a curiosity, really.

    ALONE

    Drip…

    Time to wake up!”

    Life frizzled into white existence once, then disappeared into darkness.

    Don’t you want to eat something before going to school? Wake up!”

    Consciousness remained. Certain bits of information poured like green and red raindrops, flashing against the darkness; only to vanish in the unending abyss beyond his vision.

    He couldn't move yet.

    With pulsating slowness vision returned, still blurred, still pixelated on certain areas… but he could see as well as hear now.

    He moved his eyes, roaming across the remains of the warehouse for possible enemies.

    Drip…

    None, but he could see the result of his battle.

    The warehouse floor was a sea of mist, waves crashing and flowing around the few concrete columns still standing. Sunlight streamed down from holes in the roof; it made him think of clouds letting light through for a second during a storm.

    Clear sunlight highlighted swirling mist here and there, or reflected off the armored remains of his enemies.

    The scrap carcass of an almost arachnid metal monstrosity, created either to fight in tournaments or for military use, had crumbled in the middle of the room.

    Among the mist it reminded him of a ghost ship, like the ones in the old pirate novels he used to read when he was a boy.

    He closed his eyes, but darkness was replaced by opaque windows of several colors, all of them detailing just how bad his situation was.

    Drip…

    He ignored them, instead concentrating on sudden images that came to mind. The girl… had she been really a red-head? Had he been human then?

    He opened his eyes and tried to move his neck. With a whirring protest, he positioned his head downwards, now able to asses the damage visually.

    A steel pipe had run him through the stomach, and the remains of a wall had encased much of his shoulders and arms in the metal framework of the warehouse’s wall.

    One of his legs was useless. Sparks and metal clicks came from within the joint when he tried to move it, but it remained in place.

    He had once broken that same leg while playing football.

    The other leg simply did not respond. One of the many windows in his internal vision was loading a bar labeled “Extremity Usage Percentage.”

    He was singed and soot covered most of his otherwise black and red armor.

    Don’t worry we can get the stains off your uniform… you’ll see.” A smile. “It will be as good as new.”

    Drip…

    His eyes noticed the oil accumulating on the tips of his left hand fingers, then falling down in a black drop into an equally dark puddle.

    He had wailed and cried when he had cut his finger with paper a long time ago. His father had put down the mug of coffee and told him that it was alright, that the pain would disappear soon.

    His father was dead now. His brother, his friends… the red-headed girl...

    A green light on the periphery of his sight…

    He experimentally closed and opened his right hand. Then the left.

    Now count with me using your fingers, one…” a voice echoed in his head. He tried to follow along with the sentence, but he couldn't. Speaking was not an imperative process for a machine. It could be delegated to follow other, more important, internal repairs.

    What do you want to be when you grow up? An astronaut? Fire-fighter?”

    His functioning leg slowly dragged back, scratching the concrete floor with a metallic whine until it settled down, bent at the knee.

    Static crackled inside his head. “… are you there?”

    Are you there?” The red-head climbed up the branches to where he hid, holding his knees against his chest. “What’s wrong?”

    Rubble fell as his arm reached back, his hand opening to lay palm down against a large segment of concrete wall.

    Lie down, dear…” He couldn't remember her, just the voice. “The doctors say the cure will be available soon… you just need to sleep until… until then.”

    Static again, then followed by another voice. “…are able… your signal… conscious? ...answer us? …on its way… help!”

    I’ll help you. I promise!” The red-head swore. He felt cold as more scientists poured ice over him. “I’ll find a cure…”

    His right arm forced his malfunctioning leg into a similar position to the other one, then grabbed the jagged corner of the concrete wall.

    These people are responsible for her death.” The memory was clear in his databanks, or was it his mind? The voice mingled with the static-distorted words that reached his internal receiver. “We can’t cure you now, but there are other ways… it wont be the same… I’m sorry.”

    The servos in his legs started working full force. One whirring, the other click-clacking in a mad tempo as it tried to perform a task it was not able to do. His arms tensed as his elbows bent then stretched, pulling him up. The metal pipe scratched inside him, setting off sparks and making him vibrate as it slid down the way it had come in, in a slightly different angle.

    Warning lights flashed and flooded his vision.

    Why that model? It is designed for combat.”

    He invoked a picture from his archives. It covered the warning lights; the mist rolling off the extremities of the destroyed robot-tank faded; the sight of his armored body spewing liquid and sparks disappeared.

    She had long red hair, reaching past her shoulders. She was wearing a white lab coat, covering whatever clothes she wore underneath; she held a medical chart in one hand, the other rested on the top of a cylindrical tank, big enough for a small child.

    She was thirty in this picture.

    We will do it, she asked us to give you whatever you wanted… but why? Please?”

    The noise stopped, the lights died out and the image faded, leaving him staring at a group of people. Another red-headed woman stood before him. Her hair reached just above her shoulders.

    Around him and around the remains of the robots, disturbing the mists as colossus wandering in the sea, were scientists and armed guards.

    His vision blurred as his neck vibrated. She was doing something. When she finished another green light popped up for a moment.

    “Why did you come alone? Why do you keep doing this?” The woman had tears in her eyes.

    “I don’t know anymore,” He answered.

    5 comments · 363 views
  • 2w, 3d
    Gothic: Magna Anima Nocte

    9 comments · 445 views
  • 3w, 12h
    And you could have it all...

    ...my empire of dirt.

    34 comments · 857 views
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This story is a sequel to The Three Sisters

What if... After "The Three Sisters" Rarity managed to find Chrysalis and talk to her?

A definite sequel.

Now with a TV Tropes page! Warning: Will Contain spoilers.

First Published
1st Aug 2012
Last Modified
1st Aug 2012
#1 · 120w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Oooooo ... sounds like a wonderful concept.  Must ... read ... now....

Yay. My first first post ever.  Someone call Pinkie its time to party! :pinkiehappy:

Well, with first comment, I guess there comes a responsibility of letting you know what I think. See seperate comment below...

#2 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

I read!

#3 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

When i read a title that makes no fucking sense but still pulls me in

I know its going to be a feat

#4 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Mind = blown.

Edit: I just couldn't let it slide.

“I really won’t look good on you!”

LOL

#5 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow! I love this! It's great to see Chrysalis as was written in Three Sisters after the wedding!

#6 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

And headcanonized.

a3V
#7 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Noticed a typooooooo.

She’s mercyless

:derpytongue2:

#8 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1008203

No editors, no double-checking, it’s as it was written.

#9 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

D'awwwwwww! :rainbowkiss:

Seriously good story! A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but for a unedited fic it was entirely readable.

I would actually like to see this continued! Find out how the family reunion went...

Bravo, good sir! :moustache:

#10 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

... Meanie Head. Writing this off-screen like that! *Huffs*

... But it was still good. Jerk.

#11 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Darn it D, ya keep making changelings look okay (creepy as hell sometimes but not pure abominations)

a3V
#12 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1008217

I know. Just pointing it out so he can fix it later, if he wants to. :eeyup:

#13 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

This is now head canon.

More of this story line please.

#14 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Sequel. Get to work slave.

Wanderer D
Moderator
#15 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1008203 >>1008173 heh, thanks :twilightblush: that's what happens when you don't send stuff to pre-readers and editors...

#16 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Neat little read.

#17 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

That was great. I loved The Three Sisters. I hope there is more stories set in this world. :twilightsmile:

#18 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

The first was wonderful. This is just as good. I do wholeheartedly suggest you continue using this as the start for a continuation. Granted, it may not run more than an additional chapter or two, and it could go quite a few ways, but the start is great in any case.

#19 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

I wish of a sequel! :moustache:

#20 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

:fluttercry: MORE:flutterrage:

#21 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Quite impressive. A few spelling issues, but it flowed so beautifully.

The Three Sisters was good, and this only makes it better, even if it isn't "canon" it does have emotion.

Just awesome.

#22 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Interesting... I will watch this carefully.

#23 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

First time making it before a feature! And hole CRAP is this going to get featured! I loved it! Make it official! I was so engrossed with the idea of a reunion of the two sisters, that I didn't even see your errors. I might have to go over it again.

Also damn you. This is one of those things that I would LOVE to see continued, but feel that perhaps a continuation from here wouldn't necessarily be the right choice.  :twilightangry2:

Great job!

#24 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

"Purity" - what a peculiarly ironic name. A combination of Pupa and Rarity, that provides a reminder that she does not belong to either race, neither changelings nor ponies - that a "pure" creature is the one thing she cannot be.

How peculiar indeed...

Frostwyrm

#25 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

... You should have random ideas pop into your head more often. Three Sisters was amazing, and I'm glad to see it continued, even if it isn't strictly official. It would be interesting to see how Sweetie reacts to Rarity's explanation too. Anyway, great story.:twilightsmile:

#26 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

You just hit straight to my heart good sir! Bravo!

#27 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1008149 I guess being the first commenter comes with some responsibilities...

"A/N: So... this popped into my head today and wouldn’t leave me alone. So I wrote it. No editors, no double-checking, it’s as it was written. So pardon the lesser quality XD"

Really??!! :pinkiegasp:  This is amazing.  Definately not lesser quality at all.  In fact, the only error that came to my notice while reading it was the following:   “I really won’t look good on you!” --> 'I' should be 'It.' The characters feel plausible, the flow is consistant, and the dialouge feels authentic. It definately was a wonderful inspiration that you got! Thank you for writing it down and sharing it with us! Its definately getting a thumbs up and a fav from me! I hope to see this in the Feature List soon and for an extented period of time.

The story was great and I think it makes a wonderful continuation to your "Three Sisters" story-arch, if you ever choose to make it official.  A sequel to this story would probably require Sweetie Bell to be told the truth, and that could get a bit messy and complicated, though it would be interesting to see what effect Purity had on her sister and how things changed in the Hive.

The only question I have is whether Purity intentionally sought out Chrysalis in the forest, whether she simply stumbled upon Chrysalis, or whether that was simply a 'Deus ex Machina'/'plot device' to get the story started.  I, personally, think that after having revealed to her friends her secret, and having seen her sister after so many years, that there would have been a desire on Purity's part to seek out, help, and reconnect with her sister after she got defeated inCanterlot. By the way, I love the name Purity for your character.  I can't recall if you used it in your previous story or whether that was something that got created in the ensuing comments to that story.

I also like the added depth you gave to Chrysalis in both this, and the previous story; making her more than a stock villain. I don't like purely evil monsters ... I like the complex, deep, realistic, believable ones. Those are the interesting ones.

Anyways, great job with the story! It was a pleasant surprise to see that you made an (un)offical sequal to "The Three Sisters." Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

#28 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

I would love to see a small series of chapters about this. maybe 5 or so IF that. just something that has them meet and everything.

#29 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

i want to sleep, but  Wanderer D have a new story = no sleep

yo queria dormir, pero Wanderer D tiene una nueva historia = no duerno

:fluttershysad:

Rarity --- a crown made of jade ---  Jade :derpyderp2:

#30 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

> “Sweetie Belle,” Rarity rolled her eyes and sighed as she followed her sister down. “Didn’t I ask you to tell anypony that came over that I was busy today and to leave a message?”

I see what you're trying to do, but the comma doesn't seem to belong. A period wouldn't work either. I dunno - but I'd reword that.

#31 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Now for a threequel :raritystarry:

#32 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Purity as a nickname. Nice use of irony there WD. I really liked it.

Also:

Sweetie said in awe. “I really won’t look good on you!”          the "I" should be an "It"

Obselescence
Moderator
#33 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Wanderer, why do you insist on making me look bad? ;_;

#34 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

XD   :applecry:  realmente bella la historia XD.... le dara un infarto a bell al saber la verdadd e su hermana :derpytongue2:

#35 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Wunderbar! That was brilliant! Would love to read more of this sorta stuff, sequel maybe? :duck:

#36 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

don't suppose chrysalis would consider sending her youngest to live with her aunt.

#37 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

What do you know!  I just saw the story in the Feature List! Congrades! Yay! :yay:

#39 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

One word, threequel.

#40 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

damn we need the family party:raritystarry::pinkiehappy: please?:fluttercry:

#41 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Dear Diary,

Today I spit out my drink and read a good book.

#42 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Continuation. This is what this story needs. Now have a like, fav, and a stache. :moustache:

#44 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm gonna go ahead and favorite, in case you decide to write more.

:ajsmug:

#46 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1008608

Wanderer, why do you insist on making me look bad? ;_;

Why do the both of you insist on making ME look bad? :fluttercry:

#47 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Personally, I would love to see more of this.  

#48 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

Aaaand now I want to know what would happens when the family reunites. I bet the less serious daughters would love to spend time with their aunt and cousin. I smell a spinoff series!!! :raritywink:

#49 · 120w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

:twilightangry2:WHY YOU END ONE-SHOT WITH CLIFF HANGER?!! :flutterrage: HOW SHE EXPLAIN LETTER TO SWEETIE?!!!!!

>>1008591 Noooo, Sweetie Belle really won't look good on Rarity. I mean really, who looks good wearing their little sister?


EDIT: I give you like anyway.

#50 · 120w, 2d ago · · ·

MOAR!!!!!

.......

okay, now that i've calmed down a bit. I must say that this is a truly interesting concept here. I'd probly give all my bits for more Changeling Rarity fics.:raritystarry:

Good Work Wanderer D!

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