Oooooo ... sounds like a wonderful concept.  Must ... read ... now....

Yay. My first first post ever.  Someone call Pinkie its time to party!

Well, with first comment, I guess there comes a responsibility of letting you know what I think. See seperate comment below...

I read!

When i read a title that makes no fucking sense but still pulls me in

I know its going to be a feat

Mind = blown.

Edit: I just couldn't let it slide.

“I really won’t look good on you!”

LOL

Wow! I love this! It's great to see Chrysalis as was written in Three Sisters after the wedding!

And headcanonized.

Noticed a typooooooo.

She’s mercyless

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No editors, no double-checking, it’s as it was written.

D'awwwwwww!

Seriously good story! A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but for a unedited fic it was entirely readable.

I would actually like to see this continued! Find out how the family reunion went...

Bravo, good sir!

... Meanie Head. Writing this off-screen like that! *Huffs*

... But it was still good. Jerk.

Darn it D, ya keep making changelings look okay (creepy as hell sometimes but not pure abominations)

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I know. Just pointing it out so he can fix it later, if he wants to.

This is now head canon.

More of this story line please.

Sequel. Get to work slave.

>>10082031008203 >>10081731008173 heh, thanks that's what happens when you don't send stuff to pre-readers and editors...

Neat little read.

That was great. I loved The Three Sisters. I hope there is more stories set in this world.

The first was wonderful. This is just as good. I do wholeheartedly suggest you continue using this as the start for a continuation. Granted, it may not run more than an additional chapter or two, and it could go quite a few ways, but the start is great in any case.

I wish of a sequel!

MORE

Quite impressive. A few spelling issues, but it flowed so beautifully.

The Three Sisters was good, and this only makes it better, even if it isn't "canon" it does have emotion.

Just awesome.

Interesting... I will watch this carefully.

First time making it before a feature! And hole CRAP is this going to get featured! I loved it! Make it official! I was so engrossed with the idea of a reunion of the two sisters, that I didn't even see your errors. I might have to go over it again.

Also damn you. This is one of those things that I would LOVE to see continued, but feel that perhaps a continuation from here wouldn't necessarily be the right choice.  

Great job!

"Purity" - what a peculiarly ironic name. A combination of Pupa and Rarity, that provides a reminder that she does not belong to either race, neither changelings nor ponies - that a "pure" creature is the one thing she cannot be.

How peculiar indeed...

Frostwyrm

... You should have random ideas pop into your head more often. Three Sisters was amazing, and I'm glad to see it continued, even if it isn't strictly official. It would be interesting to see how Sweetie reacts to Rarity's explanation too. Anyway, great story.

You just hit straight to my heart good sir! Bravo!

>>10081491008149 I guess being the first commenter comes with some responsibilities...

"A/N: So... this popped into my head today and wouldn’t leave me alone. So I wrote it. No editors, no double-checking, it’s as it was written. So pardon the lesser quality XD"

Really??!!   This is amazing.  Definately not lesser quality at all.  In fact, the only error that came to my notice while reading it was the following:   “I really won’t look good on you!” --> 'I' should be 'It.' The characters feel plausible, the flow is consistant, and the dialouge feels authentic. It definately was a wonderful inspiration that you got! Thank you for writing it down and sharing it with us! Its definately getting a thumbs up and a fav from me! I hope to see this in the Feature List soon and for an extented period of time.

The story was great and I think it makes a wonderful continuation to your "Three Sisters" story-arch, if you ever choose to make it official.  A sequel to this story would probably require Sweetie Bell to be told the truth, and that could get a bit messy and complicated, though it would be interesting to see what effect Purity had on her sister and how things changed in the Hive.

The only question I have is whether Purity intentionally sought out Chrysalis in the forest, whether she simply stumbled upon Chrysalis, or whether that was simply a 'Deus ex Machina'/'plot device' to get the story started.  I, personally, think that after having revealed to her friends her secret, and having seen her sister after so many years, that there would have been a desire on Purity's part to seek out, help, and reconnect with her sister after she got defeated inCanterlot. By the way, I love the name Purity for your character.  I can't recall if you used it in your previous story or whether that was something that got created in the ensuing comments to that story.

I also like the added depth you gave to Chrysalis in both this, and the previous story; making her more than a stock villain. I don't like purely evil monsters ... I like the complex, deep, realistic, believable ones. Those are the interesting ones.

Anyways, great job with the story! It was a pleasant surprise to see that you made an (un)offical sequal to "The Three Sisters." Keep up the great work!

I would love to see a small series of chapters about this. maybe 5 or so IF that. just something that has them meet and everything.

i want to sleep, but  Wanderer D have a new story = no sleep

yo queria dormir, pero Wanderer D tiene una nueva historia = no duerno

Rarity --- a crown made of jade ---  Jade

> “Sweetie Belle,” Rarity rolled her eyes and sighed as she followed her sister down. “Didn’t I ask you to tell anypony that came over that I was busy today and to leave a message?”

I see what you're trying to do, but the comma doesn't seem to belong. A period wouldn't work either. I dunno - but I'd reword that.

Now for a threequel

Purity as a nickname. Nice use of irony there WD. I really liked it.

Also:

Sweetie said in awe. “I really won’t look good on you!”          the "I" should be an "It"

Wanderer, why do you insist on making me look bad? ;_;

XD     realmente bella la historia XD.... le dara un infarto a bell al saber la verdadd e su hermana

Wunderbar! That was brilliant! Would love to read more of this sorta stuff, sequel maybe?

don't suppose chrysalis would consider sending her youngest to live with her aunt.

What do you know!  I just saw the story in the Feature List! Congrades! Yay!

One word, threequel.

damn we need the family party please?

Dear Diary,

Today I spit out my drink and read a good book.

Continuation. This is what this story needs. Now have a like, fav, and a stache.

I'm gonna go ahead and favorite, in case you decide to write more.

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Wanderer, why do you insist on making me look bad? ;_;

Why do the both of you insist on making ME look bad?

Personally, I would love to see more of this.  

Aaaand now I want to know what would happens when the family reunites. I bet the less serious daughters would love to spend time with their aunt and cousin. I smell a spinoff series!!!

WHY YOU END ONE-SHOT WITH CLIFF HANGER?!! HOW SHE EXPLAIN LETTER TO SWEETIE?!!!!!

>>10085911008591 Noooo, Sweetie Belle really won't look good on Rarity. I mean really, who looks good wearing their little sister?

EDIT: I give you like anyway.

MOAR!!!!!

.......

okay, now that i've calmed down a bit. I must say that this is a truly interesting concept here. I'd probly give all my bits for more Changeling Rarity fics.

Good Work Wanderer D!

There was something in those yes. Something very familiar.

I think this should be eyes?

Cry in shower mode activated.

Oh good, I was worried that would end on a sadder note for both of them! I'm not going to put any hope on a continuation of this, considering it was just a spur of the moment deal, but I'd like to imagine that maybe...just maybe...Chrysalis will go along with that 'peace over war' idea.

Who knows? Maybe you'll get another one of those ideas that you just can't get rid of, and write more to this fun little alternate universe of yours.

!!!!... Awks

TURN THIS INTO A SERIES!, this is beautiful and hearthwrenching, mix the two other stories anmd make them into a full saga!

This should be part of the "Three Sisters" canon.

yes MORE i must HAVE MOREEEEEE!!!!! i must feed

She vaguely a little unicorn-shaped morsel?

Wat?

More, please, more!

>>10082421008242 I demand a sequel to this lovely story

Pwetty pwease with sprinkles on top

So, just to make the beginning make a bit more rational sense: Rarity, after proving her identity to Celestia and friends. Went in search of her changeling sister, after say convincing a friend to babysit Sweetie Belle or something, travels outside Equestrian borders to find Chrysalis. To pay her back for having the changelings spare the lives of the children. Would that be a fair assessment? Even if this *is* just a what if story?

This is some pretty good unofficial closer for Purity. I can only imagine what reactions Sweetie would have to her big sister being a changeling, and a Queen no less the whole time!

Fun bonus chapter. Even if it's a what if, it was just what I was hoping for. Looks like Sweetie has an extended family now! :P (unofficially, just saying) It was fun D, thanks for writing it.

And so the famous moderator releases another story.

Intriguing...will read later on. Have to go to bed for the moment.

"It's a crown made of Jade!"

itsatrap.jpg

Seriously, walking into the lair of your former rival (who may now see you as a current rival) wearing the jewelry they gave you is a terrible plan. I hope Sweetie is better at this than her half-sister.

I liked the first "Three Sisters". I liked this one.

Bravo sir!

No inconsistencies found. Time spent in Canterlot, time spent by Chrysalis in Everfree forest seem to overlap nicely.

Stories connect in many points, and where they don't connect, is where new possibilities start.

What if... This appeared in your head for a reason?

Maybe write one more chapter and see if it feels right? And if it does, post it.

Depth and length of this story in possibilities are amazing.

Like Empty Room.

Moar, MOAR!

Like incoming! Nice story, i never had a time to read "Three sisters" but it's not a problem. Quite good story. Sad that this is complete I am really curious how would Sweetie react on fact that Rarity is some type of changeling-pony hybrid.... and about whole "trip" to Hive to visit family :P

I was a fan of the first story, and this one's tugging at my heartstrings more so than the first ever did. You've created something phenomenal here, and accomplished a feature within the first few hours of posting. A rare feat, I'm sure. (Even with the updated featurebox) so I commend you. Good job, an engaging story, masterfully told, with fantastic characters.

Bravo.

First was heartwrenching.

This is Heartwarming.

SOMEPONY MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS WHAT-IF! WE HAVE AN AMAZING ALT-VERSE TO EXPLORE WITH "PURITY" HERE!

Your writing improvement is pretty amazing. I've been keeping track of your typo counts because of the swarms of corrections I used to have to make in my TSC feedback posts, and now you're getting fewer fails without any editing than you were getting in the fully edited versions before.

...I hope you took that as a compliment like it was supposed to be, lol.

Speaking of TSC, I can see Sweetie coming into this universe. Sweetie going along with Rarity on a visit to the Hive would be really awesome. Also, it would be a way to do the continuation that everyone seems to want.

thank god i'm not the only person who was curious what would happen if they met again...

I agree with multiple above, a sequel would be much liked.

just saw this in the feature box and thought 'why not read both stories.. concept seems good enough'

i have to say.. great stories and i would love to see what happens when rarity +1 arrives at the hive just as most of the others

To reiterate what others have said upon numerous occassions....

MOAR! I DEMAND MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!

Same as above. However, if you don't want to, that's fine too.

Dude, this is awesome.  You could (and in my opinion should) continue this.

Congrats on another fantastic story!

You WILL continue this.

I own a gun.

I do want to see what happens when Purity + 1 visits.

"Congratulations, Purity." Chrysalis said, "I've convinced every changeling that you are the strongest and wisest among us, so you should be the new changeling queen."

"What?"   "But I don't want to be queen."

"Too bad."

"Very well then, my companion has something to ask all of you."

"Oh yeah! Could help me figure out if I should call it a cherrychanga or a chimmicherry?"   "Cheerychanga? Chimmicherry? Cherry..."

15 minutes later, the hive was on fire and burning

MOAR

Happy end. Very sweet.

This lends itself to an interesting scenario: Rarity is a queen without a hive. What if certain biological imperatives drove her to change that?

Wow, all that in just a few hours?

only issue with this is that chrysalis doesn't feel "in character", but then again, i can't really see a way to actually write this story with a show accurate chrysalis

YOU should TOTALLY continue THIS because IF you DON'T as LONG as THIS story CAN be VIEWED people WILL ask FOR sequels!

But on to more intelligent ramblings, I'm not too sure how I feel about the description of the scene where Rarity/Pupa revealed herself to Chrysalis, it seemed like it could have been much more, but Wanderer did do this in a short time. (At least I think he did) This certainly does have enough substance to become some epic length story, I personally would love to see that happen, but I think Wanderer has other story commitments.

Wanderer D, master of alternate Rarity's!

Ninja/bounty hunter Rarity

Half pony/changeling Rarity

The many Rarity's of Sweetie's adventure

Boy that would make an interesting meeting......

Both characters seem fine to me in how they behave, especially since we know their backstory.

I feel bad for the plants near The Hive. They have a feeling, somechangeling is watching them......

D'awwwwwwwwwww......

There is much potential for a story here, and you definately it's predecessor justice :)

I just read this. Twice. I almost NEVER read the same thing twice.

GAH! Why must you make me cry now i feel the need to beg my parents for a sister again

Now all that's needed is to finish the story with the reunion. ...Which I'm seeing as a sort of messed up 'Guess Who's Coming to Dinner' work.

Awwwwwkwwwaaaaaaarrrrrrdddd.

could you please do a chapter where purity tells sweetie belle and takes her to the hive or goes with twilight so she can see what its like there or something. i want to see purity meet her family

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Wunderbal. Great Idea! If they don't want to be queen, there's someone who lives in Ponyville with the same sentiments.

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Sweetie Hat. One day, everypony will be wearing fillies as a fashion statement.

>>10093631009363

Visionary. Exactly what happens, though radically different Changeling culture.

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I actually have been reading that fic a bit, in segments. Not bad, but I was a little bummed how Chrysalis got thrown to the wayside like that. I'm kind of a fan of characters realistically redeeming themselves. Either way, though, I do enjoy that fic.

Now I really want to know what happens at the reunion

I demand a part 3.

A continuation would be nice.

>>10113631011363 Please, you know Rarity would look best with a "Silver Spoon Fedora"!

I must say i enjoyed this thoroughly. I really liked Three Sisters and I loved this too. Quite frankly I think alot of people would love to have a short series based on this.

I agree with everyone above. this is a great second part and it needs a third. and if you really have written all of this without any editing, I can only say bravo. Grace us with more, you have a talent.

I loved it, and the feedback proves that others did as well.

Would it be too much to ask that you write the meeting between 'Purity', Sweetiebell and the Changelings?

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Through the Eyes Reference.

>>10123731012373 A what now? I just like fedoras and thought Silver Spoon's coloring would make a nice one... what are you talking about?