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Starlight Glimmer hears an unusual and mocking voice while fleeing from her old home. Much to her dismay, the voice might hold the key to escaping the dry, brutal desert and she'll need to listen up in order to make it out alive. However, the voice has more to say than just general advice to Starlight.
Does the voice have her best interests at heart? Can Starlight find a fix to her struggles?
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Well that certainly was a mysterious story. It's too bad the voice was on her side, since I wasn't quite sure if it was against her or supporting her until the end. Great job on this story!
6674219 Yeah, it was fun to write the more mysterious components of this story. Thank you for reading and for commenting as well! I highly appreciate it!
And that was how Starlight became the ultimate ninja stalker.
6674462 Yeah, she's quite good at sneaking around.
And thank you for looking at the story. I appreciate it.
Wow, so Starlight in your story is bonkers. That explains a lot.
Figures it was a figment of her imagination. I have to admit, I like this idea of her being crazy and going insane form it to later be saved.
6675800 Yeah, Starlight depicted in such a matter does explain quite a lot about her demeanor and who she is. She's an antagonist I've always wondered about to some extent, and I sometimes find it interesting to take an established character and delve into different possibilities regarding said character. Anyway, thank you for taking a look at the story. I highly appreciate it!
6675817 To be honest I more hyped for the next season finale so I can finally get answers about Starlight. I wonder how it will all end?
Good job giving more description to what happened to Starlight. I wish the writers could've done that. Also, it was an interesting idea that Starlight's own mind was giving her ideas and information.
6677445 Yeah, it was enjoyable tinkering with this premise and interpreting Starlight's character in this particular manner. Anyway, thank you for taking a look at the story. I highly appreciate it!
Perfect sense, here. I can see this happening in the show itself.