Pretty good. Had me going for a bit there with Blueblood.

D'AWWWWWWWWWW

...holy shit.  Its 2 AM.

Being three hours past midnight in my part of this world and having work I must commence upon in the morrow, it is with reluctance that I place this upon my "read later" list and promise unto you that I shall return at a later date, read this tale of Appledash, and if the mood strikes me solidly, write a respectable comment in opposition to this previous sentence of wasted words and long winded eloquence.

No idea why I did that, but it was fun.

Yeah I'm gonna read this later and probably write a fairly lengthy comment depending on how much I like this fic.

Edit: Oh... Apparently I read this already on fanfiction, I remember liking it there so good job!

I like the idea of Rainbow Dash with a diary, it seems like the sort of thing she'd do but keep secret.

Finished at 3:50, just to stay in sync with the other comments. awesome story i gave it a like, watch, and fav and here, have 10 moustaches  

Warm and fuzzy, while some conflict at the same time, KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS

Aw, that was really good! I liked how the story progressed in 3 parts, kinda like a play. It was adorable, and well written, and you can never go wrong with Appledash Awesome work

There were a lot of moments that made me go beyond facepalming (at present, thats facebedding) but regardless this was still a good read

Fair story with some great romantic elements. Definitely worth reading

*applause*

A lovely cute fanfic that warmed my hearth and made me hate Gilda even more than I already did. It is a good story and I liked every second I read of it.

I really liked this, whenever you can make one of your readers want to kick something in the balls, then your doing something right.

It did seem strange that while rainbow was being held back that her friends did nothing to stop gilda, but other than that, this story is perfect.

You're over populated

so I slaved for days creating gays

but your ended up hating them

SO FUCK YOU

"Oh My God" Bo Burnham

Great story had me goin thinkin Blueblood was all nice and a gentlecolt,but alas it could not be.

I hate such prejudiced ponies

Great story, a perfect example of a good AppleDash

I hate Blueblood and Gilda even more now.... Have 10 Spikes with Mo's

da fuq @ last part

>>709393709393 He's a stuck-up posh jerk. The SEED version of him had a silver spoon in it's mouth.

>>693762693762

Wow. Im in the exact same situation as you

Time t' hit the hay

Great story, by the way!

-Jrzfine Out

Nice! Only, in the beggining of the story , you wrote "man" instead of "stallion" or something. Jus' pointing out :)

Brilliant job. This is one of the few stories that inspired me to write my FanFic. This is so awesome and romantic. So sad when 'Dash though AJ was cheating.

Applause are in definite order. You done good.

EDIT: Reread it. Finished at 2:25 AM. Still just as great as I remember

D`AAAAAAAWWWWW I STILL LOVE YOU

>>693762693762

...holy shit.  Its 2 AM.

that's me every night when i'm writing my stories. lol.

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I hatee Gilead even more now

Good story and its actually finished. Blueblood is homophobic (I could predict this when it said both couples would go on a date at the same place.)

*wanders in*

Oh hello, what's this? An Appledash? Whee! Do like the concept. A bit clichéd, but hey, it was pretty darn well executed.

OK, so the formatting could use some work. I found it kinda irksome to have to parse through all this. Your writing has DEFINITELY gotten better; I read Remember a while back and I think that it's much improved from this. Maybe take the time to edit this.

Oh yeah, I think this has been mentioned before, but try to stay in Equestria. That means no hands, arms, or stuff like that.

But hey, well done!

Hmm, It seems that I have another reason now to try some honey roasted griffon glazed in a smokey applewood BBQ sauce.

     Great story so far.  I have read quite a few that have someone "coming out of the closet" and this is the first where a lot of people end up disapproving of it.