Oh Pinkie, you so craaaazy Seriously though, this was good.

Lol, nice!

I like how it starts off normalish, with a slight hint of something wrong and by the middle, I had an idea where it was going.  Nice little POV.

Pinkie is a genius.

The artistry, the elegance, the poise, the preparation, the beauty, the execution, the colors, the flavors, the vision, the PARTY are all so perfectly executed.

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Now she just needs guests, then it's actually a party. The fact that there are no guests, in my opinion, does make this crazy.

Of course, crazy ponies believe they are sane. Take me, for example.

Nice one! Starts off so... normal and just-another-Pinkie-Pie-day. And then it's like... "Whoa..."

Whelp... knowing how the majority of these go I expect this to be featured any day now.

Yipes! Great story! Perfectly executed...

- Better than my party!?

... er, no?

- Darn right... yes, perfect. Mm... *twitch*

Sometimes I wonder why I love Pinkie Pie so much.

Then I read fics like these and I remember.

Alliteration is so fun, isn't it?

The way she explains why she's sane reminds me of "The Tell-Tale Heart"

< Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmares know nothing. But you should have seen me. You should have seen how wisely I proceeded -- with what caution -- with what foresight, with what dissimulation, I went to work!

Nice work indeed edgar allan pone. I mean Pinkie pie

>>693644693644 >>693761693761 I'm so glad you guys made that connection, seeing as that's where I got my inspiration 100%.

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I knew that there was a reason that I liked this so much; Good Old Poe is one of my all time favorites. Anyway, this was a rather intriguing characterization of an even more insane Pinkie Pie that was fun to read and interesting.

Nicely and artistically done. Kudos.

we need more like this. Pieces inspired by classic literature.

Poor Pinkie.

This must have been what she was thinking during the whole "Party of One" incident, and then you wonder why that clip of her break down is used as a first glimpse of the show so much.

Also as I'm sure Pinkie Pie would say "I am Not A MORON!"

Pinkie Pie is right, she isn't alone. We are all there with her. And she knows. Oh yes, she knows.

Huh, a non clop from a pony whos name contains clop in it? This turn out great! I thought I had found some errors, but the ending revealed that where all intentional.

Okay. I expected that ending a little bit. But, I like this story. It's kinda reminiscent of The Tell-Tale Heart. The main character is saying he's not crazy, but does something completely insane.

The beating of the heart grew louder, louder, LOUDER, LOUDER! Until I exclaimed, "FOALS! VILLAINS!"

Sorry, couldn't help myself.

Very well written! The use of rhetoric and the Enlish language is astounding! I love it! Keep this up, you got a thumbs up and fave from me.

I see a Rainbow laugh coming on.

Huh. Well then. Came in expecting comedy, got Poe.... Two Pinkies up!

Yep, she's off her rocker, and we wouldn't have it any other way.

For a bit at the beginning, I thought She had Imagined a party from the bowels of a dungeon. I guess It could still be, though.

Ugh. I was hoping there was a better ending coming, one that I didn't expect. You seem like a good writer though.

Your writing in this plot is quite poetic. I notice the Alliteration on the 'P's and how the happiness slowly trails away. As the plot progresses, Pinkie, peering around, has to assure herself even more violently that she is sane.

After reading this a second time, I think it was beautiful how you illustrated the empty walls.

This is so amazing because this is how I find Pinkie/Pinkamena herself!

She lays out a platform of pretty pink planks. To cover up the horror she is feeling!

Pinkie Pie= Pink walls of stone.

Pinkamena= Empty walls, but a beautiful heart, and soul of a magnificent cake.

I've never seen the essence described more precisely, particularly when this has the misleading (in my opinion) comedy tag.

Marvelous.

Why wasn't Gummy mentioned? This is supposed to be Pinkie's POV during Gummy's after-birthday party right? Still an excellently written story even with the plot hole. Especially with the plot hole, if you know what I mean. Good old EAP, I liked The Bells the best.

and I keep thinking: Poor Pinks

I am in agreement with that sack of flower.

people are saying that this is like the tell-tale heart. I would agree more if pinkie smothered someone under a bed and dismembered them and hid them under the floorboards. Cupcakes anyone?

While this story went exactly where I was expecting it to go, I must say it was well written.  And quite reminiscent of Edgar Allan Poe.

"Sacks of flour can't speak."

Aaaaaand now I have to clean up the Gatorade from my bed (and nose).

If only being crazy was this fun all the time.