After wielding the Elements of Harmony once more, they thought things would return to normal. But Twilight Sparkle is still seeking closure after Discord's corruption. Will her friends be able to provide it? Takes place between "The Return of Harmony" and "Lesson Zero."
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“I…opened the carton and put it in the bowl,”
That's fancy cooking for me.
This is a really good idea for a story, definitely original in both concept and execution.
The dialogue felt slightly wooden at times, particularly the "20% cooler" memedrop. Memes don't make a story better, they drag it down and pull a reader away from being able to immerse his or herself into your work.
D'aww. Dat ending.
It was very well written and I found the ponies to be in character. ....DAT ENDING. 
Definitely original, good job!
Man your good i love your storys