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MY LUNGS

I approve.

I'M THROWING MY BITS AT THE SCREEN, BUT NOTHING'S HAPPENNING!!!!!!

"MUFFIIIIIIIIIIINS!

LMAO

"-Find A Newborn Foal And ‘Return To Sender’."

ROFLMAO!

Oh thank Celestia, I wasn't sure how people would respond to this, thank you guys so much!

SO funny and so deliciously evil

>>732208732208 Why thank you

My stupid friend Hans said it didn't work with graphic violence and comedy, and that I should choose just one genre

This sounds REALLY COOL, so I'll put it in my read list.

EDIT

Moral: Let the villians be nice if they want to, or else they will be even more evil than you'd expect.

Also, I LOVE your tone.

minor issues: "want to [do] a dreadfully mean thing like that "

"what is heaven’s name" I think you mean 'in'

"burn with [the] building"

"looking any potential victims" looking for, maybe?

But definitely tracking this one.

Seriously folks, feel free to request and evil deed for her list

Dark comedy dark comedy...DERPY!!!!

I have the strangest feeling you feel sorry for Derpy

-Steal Food From Orphans So They Starve, Read Them Horror Stories, And Burn Down The Orphanage.

That's funny.

-Make A Pegasus With A History Of Self-Esteem Issues Feel Worthless.

NO. I SWEAR TO GOD...

-Booby-Trap Bird Nests With Incendiary Devices.

This made me laugh out loud. I'm pretty sure my family heard my laughter from downstairs.

-Find A Newborn Foal And ‘Return To Sender’.

Same as above.

I'm....what that' buck just happened.

Twilight, you're an idiot!

>>732348732348 How was she supposed to know? There's no book on that!

>>732347732347 It must be done, I apologize in advance, but it may break your heart.

*Infect unsuspecting pony with Poison Joke

*Spread rumors about a Zebra living in Everfree Forest

*Help an old pony cross the street (but not the street they want to cross)

Try some of those?

Eat all of the cake at Sugar Cube corner?

>>732385732385 Hmmmmm, I'm intrigued by those deeds

>>732387732387 How would that be evil?

>>732358732358

Is there a book in that library on common sense?

The only reason I'm really following this is to see the end ^^

Because all books are true and any observable fact is just a figment of your own imagination. Yup, totally true.

Silly Twilight...

>>732408732408 I'd actually perform the third task, if I was evil. Oh, and one more to add to that list:

*Sing a song about how evil I am (this can be done by singing When You're Evil)

>>732410732410 ask Twilight as soon as she stops drowning in blood

>>732416732416 You... I...

How would you like to guest star as a Pony who had a liver transplant?

(I love your suggestion about the song )

>>732442732442 Cool, I get to be a victim of Nightmare Moon's evil! YES!

.........wait...

(That'd be awesome, go for it!)

>>732454732454 Is Garino fine? Or do you have a specific OC you like to use?

>>732475732475 Garino is good enough. I look forward to where this goes, Roxxi.

All righty then, preference of pony type, color and mark?

>>732494732494 Earth, orange, but no cutie mark preference.

>>732083732083 That's the same thing Twilight thought after Nightmare Moon smashed her ribs.

So you read a book that described a pony being completely evil and used that idea to change a very good hearted pony into a villian...because she wasn't acting like the book said...curse that bookworm...

Oh and one more thing....MUFFINS!!!

And now random thought time:

*Insert Nightmare Moon emoticon here*

"This day has been just perfect,

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small

Every pony I'll soon control

Every stallion, mare, and foal

Who says a girl can't really have it all!"

*Insert Queen Chrysalis emoticon here*

"Hey! You stole my song!"

*Insert Nightmare Moon emoticon here*

"I know.  It's because I'm evil."

>>732419732419

When would that be? Before or after the burns heal?

Also, something I was thinking; another similar story idea where Nightmare Moon is the protagonist, and twilight is the bad guy!

>>732911732911 Are you making it? Cause if not, I wanna use it

>>733012733012

feel free to use it!

what i was thinking was something similar to this, except twilight doesn't sway N.M.M, and Twilight turns into the bad guy while trying to prove that Nightmare Moon is bad.

*sigh* Nice job, breaking it Twilight.

I'm looking forward to what happens next.

Nice going, Twilight.

Possible evil things for Nightmare Moon to do:

Order a giant statue of herself to be built. Nitpick at every stage of development for painstakingly difficult accuracy to measurements. Once the Statue is complete, decide that it looks wrong, destroy it in front of the ponies who worked so hard to build it, then make them start all over again.

As a grand final, I can foresee Twilight's involvement in the state of affairs getting out, resulting in a lynch mob after her head.

>>734464734464 Delightfully evil, I like it.

Want to be an orphan?

Only if I can be a minion. I'm something of a fan of the Morbid and Dark.

Besides, what kind of evil overlord would Nightmare Moon be if she didn't have minions?

Hmmmmm... I'm not sure, I'll have to think about it

Ooh! Can I be a worker at Hooves Across Equestria?

Chapter 2 needs bdsm clop.

Huh, I'm afraid I have to agree with Hans on this one. I'm not saying that the fic was bad (return newborn foal to sender ftw,) but in my subjective opinion the violence is too graphic for a simple [Comedy] fic. I'd either rewrite the violent scenes to be less bloody and more 'cartoony', or add a [Dark] tag. But then again, maybe that's just me.

Also, you want real evil? Make Sweetie Belle the head chef of a school, hospital, or something similar. Her victims will beg for death!   <Oh, come on!

>>735083735083 Do you mind donating blood?

>>735399735399  Say what?

>>737486737486 Definitely you, but I wasn't sure if Dark Comedy was a legitimate thing, I suppose i can change the tag, but I'm probably goig to tone down the graphicness. A bit. Maybe.

>>737655737655

You know you want it.

>>738212738212 I don't know if I can do it properly

>>737655737655

Always willing to do my part for the community!

>>Airstream Be forewarned, Nightmare isn't exactly trained in this stuff, so there might be minor complications