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Fluttershy loves all her animal friends. She usually tolerates anything they do just for that very reason. But when she discovers Opalescence has a taste in mice, she is horrified, and tries everything in her limited power to ensure that the cat never catches the mouse.

Silliness ensues.

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7271965

Thanks for the fave(s)!:pinkiehappy:

"Here you go, sweetie. eat up.

Should be:

"Here you go, sweetie. Eat up.

Or...

"Here you go, sweetie, eat up.

THAT ARROGANT SON OF A GUN!!!!!

That was pretty good. I liked the humor, and the dialogue was great, all of the lines sounded like they were from the show. In fact, that authenticity was probably the thing I liked most. Everything seemed like it could have occurred in FiM. Overall, I liked it.

PS: Was trying to find something to comment on in Commence Comments, and this is what I found.

7281397

Thanks.:twilightsmile:

I worked pretty hard on this fic, as I started months ago. I'm excited people are enjoying it.

So is Spike now one arm short of a pair now or what?

7310508

Pretty much.:twilightsmile:

And thanks for the fav!

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