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Upon promptly marrying Princess Luna after a delightful whirlwind relationship, Twilight Sparkle finds herself pondering and caught in the webs of the past. What should be the happiest time of her life turns out to be one of the most stressful, but why is this so?
The answer lies in what she thought would be a secret she could keep.
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....That...was...*sob*...so....beautiful....I kind of liked the way how Twilight had to confess of her past to her newlywed wife. As newlywed couples, you need to learn how to trust one another and share your emotions if possible. Also the problem with Twilight's parents, that tends to be a problem in the world as well...
What does the world view marriage as? What does the Godly life view marriage as? And what do you view marriage as? I have to say this story just got a big round of applause by me. Love the story, adding it to my favorites. Stay awesome and keep up the good work!
Whoop, new story!
It's well written; I can appreciate the flow of words and Twilight's disjointed thought processes. I would've been interested to get Shining Armor's take on the situation, but that would've interrupted the stream. Either way, well done.
Night Light and Velvet's marital situation hit pretty close to home for me; both sets of my parents alternated between all lovey and screaming matches depending on the night and level of inebriation. Sometimes I just had to wait it out. Twilight counted; I focused on my anger while my brother focused on his sadness. It took a long time for me to accept that a relationship doesn't have to be characterized by strife and argument. Still don't know that I do.
This entire story hits pretty close to home.
Well done. Excellent story. Its also wonderful to see more from you.
I totally read all of Twilights lines in her voice :)
Same with Luna, but Twilight was the star of the show here.
I also can see this as being entirely plausible with her parents too... explains a few things on the show.
This is surprisingly relevant.
Dear god, that was like a gut-punch there. Wonderful story, Toni!
I can relate somewhat to Twilight (there are a lot of things I struggle with in my marriage due to the less than great example I have of my parents), so this really resonated with me.
Also, TwiLuna is adorbs, no matter how much parental pain preludes it.
Twilight's got a backstory that nopony knows.
Thankfully this time it doesn't involve a garden hose.
The story was beautifully written like characters themselves.
This story should be not be here, it should be out there, sitting upon a shelf!
A problem a two
Is something the characters sort through.
They get over it.
And they will not quit!
Though a Luna and Twilight ship is not my fav,
the story was really fun to read in my cave.
I am a Raichu, you see.
If your story is loved by a Pokémon, then it that's good enough for me!
6631408 why did two people dislike that? Makes no sense.
6678523 beats me...I'm religious so...
6680834 between you and me, so am I
"(...) how you have those tiny stardust freckles nopony else sees,"
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This site contains gems. This is one of them.
Sad backstory for my favorite bookworm, written in ways I can only describe as "realism put to great use".
Happy relationship slice of life of Twiluna with overcoming problems.
Romance did wonderfully...
I have no idea how to describe the feelings I have now. It's sign of a great fic. THANK YOU for the amazing moment i passed reading it.
A line near the end of the fic really ticked me off (they only decided to marry because of Twilight, so what does that make of Shining Armor?). Perhaps I'm applying the wrong logic here, but for me it feels like a big omission -- too big for me to ignore. Which is a shame, because the writing and characterizations themselves are very good.