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Stegtorn


Short Dio.

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This story is a sequel to Horse La Horse Season 1


Who would have thunk knocking Celestia unconscious and allowing her to get caught by the worst Villains on the planet would have repercussions? Now Anonymous must right his wrongs and atone for his crimes, WITH HIS FISTS!
Follow him, Iron Will and Sunset Shimmer as they make their way through a Very Violent Villainous Competition, and work together to come out on top before the Mega Forces of Evil take over and transform Equestria into a hellish nightmare.

Cover art by Eighth, thanks Eighth!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 29 )

It's still the fucking best, love those little intro pictures for each character joining the fight.

It's back! How delightful, keep it coming.

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Aren't they great? The little tagline puns really seal the deal. Credit goes to Eighth for those, naturally. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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Hey! Nice to see you returned for the sequel.


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Surprised to see you here. How are you?

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Eh. I exist. And yourself? I hope you're doing well, nice to see you're writing and such.

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I live in a maelstrom of memes. And in the milky center, nothing.

Good to hear you're persisting and updating semi-frequently!

Why doesn't this story have a sex tag too, like the previous one?

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Well that was mostly there for the sexual innuendo, and brief locker encounter at the end.

I'm not certain it needs it for just innuendo, do you think it's necessary?

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Dude If it's even half as entertaining as the first was then I'm here for the long haul.

"Princess Celestia may or may not even know about something that I need. Or even have the power to perform even if she does know that thing.”
“What?"

Aaaand you've sold me. Can't wait for more!

"spam of r1s to the abdomen"-The best combo description in written word that I have ever read.

Nice parody of cadance and I accepted Twilights way to make the suit transform into his ultimate form.
I can see it like it was her crazy mind searching for a solution for her crush with Anon there and so she made the suit work that way.
Either she was honestly angry at Anon at the beginning of the chapter or in her mind they are already married and far further in her relationship than Anon things they are.

Just to be sure since I probably forgot to mention it in my last comment. I have nothing against the sex, but I take a few good storys more serious and prefer it in a more meaningfull and romantic way. I would even say I take it more serious in stories than in real life

You really can’t go home? All this for nothing? You curl into a ball, dragging the dust and bits of stone around you like a bed.

as far as I noticed he still haven't gotten an answer to that, if Celestia can't do it I think there would be no reason to say that she can't say it.

What actually activated Fluttershy? I liked her and how Anon was reacting to her, it nearly was sad that he didn't liked her:heart:

But where are Twilights real friends? She hasn't put them all into clothes right? I think I remember she made the clothes like them

Soooo she put some sort of cheat into his suit which allows her to take it away all the time? I mean the others could have done the same thing as soon as they figured it out the first time.

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Glad the two of you stuck around for the sequel!

A fight against a living slime monster... Just like in my Chinese cartoons I hide under my bed then...

8001341 In other words; "I've seen enough hentai to know where THIS is going."

How did you feel about this first fight? I would very much like to know.

It was alright, definitely could have been a little bit longer but it's not bad for what it is. Not sure how you'd extend a fist-fight Vs smooze though so you get a pass from me.

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It only occurred to me about 15 seconds after I posted that it would have been really cool if Discord got on the mic and started talking trash to Anon.

This would have added a second element to the fight, good opportunity for some banter, maybe build up Anon + Iron Will's relationship a little when Will comes in a backs him up verbally.

And then, when he defeats the smooze, who could have been Discord's personal pick for winning the V3C, it builds up their rivalry later when they fight again.

Maybe I should go back and add that stuff in.

8009897 That does sound good, maybe take the chapter down for a bit then make a blog post about it and put it back up when you're done so more people are notified.

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I really didn't even know that was an option. I will do that, thanks.

Well, at least Iron Will will not need to scrape goo out of all his orifices like Anon will XD

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I mean who else is in besides Anon, Sunset Shimmer and Iron Will?

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As many villains and baddies as I could make work I threw into a bracket along with Anon, Sunset and Iron Will.

Gen 1 Villains and mentions are in there as well, including Lavan being the most important. But the Kinguin ice man is in there too.

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Sure if I could find it and scan it. It's on paper. If I can reconstruct it online somewhere that'd be great but I couldn't find and easy to use and free one.

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Please do so. I won't rush you.

This is some good stuff right here

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