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OH CHIT HERE WE GO!
OH SHIT SON!
*insta like*
Ever since I saw that pic on EQD i was waiting..............dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
Shit would've just gotten real but thats the end of the story.
This would have been great if it had been revealed that Trixie filmed the whole thing!!! Oh good times! Great Fic though, Well done.
Nice one!
SHIT JUST GOT FAKE
Maximum TROLLING ACHIEVED!
I swear to Celestia, I bit my tongue with laughter at the start of the clubbing. It was fucking hilarious. This and getting my stroy up with three chapters done in just a morning have made this day perfect.
Trixie working as a stripper. Why am I not surprised?
I got one word for you Trixie, nice.
Human Great and Powerful Trixie STRIPPER! jackiephantom13.deviantart.com/art/Stripper-MLP-FiM-Trixie-265000075
Loved the end, say hi to Twilight Sparkle for me!
Though the end seems very rushed and short,
Great story though!
I feel ashamed for enjoying this story
Great story. Except one thing: Horses have no gag reflex! Nopony is happy.
Twi got trolled
Dat endi
I just realized it's rather silly that she's wearing underwear.
What he didn't mention was how after all this happened Twilight sent Trixie to the moon for still speaking in third person and not for having sexton with her brother.
Edit sexton to sex stupid auto-correct.
The picture and what Trixie's ass is supposed to be are completely different. Just pointing that out.
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You and me both. My morality is scolding me, but the part of my brain that enjoys most forms of entertainment is telling that part to shut up because it's only a story.
And for a brief moment, Trixie had two horns!
Dubstep animation. FUCK YEA
Also, I HAS MUSTACHE
693533 Twilight doesn't have the power to send a pony to the moon... yet. Besides, it will probably be Cadence sending Shining to the moon after she finds out he cheated on her the night before their wedding.
709299 the show is full of lies because it doesn't tell you twilight has a shuttle rocket
MOAR
SEQUEL THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL
Nice!! I admit to once
.
Technically he didn't cheat on Cadence the night before the wedding because if you look at the story the Changelings hadn't invaded yet. So it was still Chrysalis impersonating Cadence. You can tell at this line...
"Besides, Cadence has seemed rather cold lately. You can't be getting much affection..."
This proves it was before the REAL Cadence was rescued.
THE FJ ARMY IS HERE!
http://www.funnyjunk.com/channel/ponytime/Trixies+current+occupation/rxyYGek/3#3
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that was
................hmmmmmmmm
.............FUCKING HOT!
692182 TOO BAD!
701655 I dont know...you saw an ass and went for it?
I very much liked this. Well-written, simple, just the way I like my clopfics. Shining Armor could've had some more to say, as he seemed rather bland here and in general it feels a little rushed.
But otherwise, it was good. Thanks for writing this, and here's an 8/10, a like, and a favorite for yer good work
"But Twilight could give me a mustache and..." Spike began to reply as the door shut.
Best line of the whole fic!
trixie is not yellow,or has red hair
oh no but Twilight you shoulda seen trixie's ass it seduced me noo
Pretty entertaining.
"Ziggy Stardust"
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Heh, gotta wish that more strip clubs actually did that kind of thing. Oh well, pretty women stripping off their clothes will have to do.
you named one of shining armors friends Ziggy Stardust
please tell me he was doing the magic dance with the other stripers
I only see one problem. The Sparkle look alike was only mentioned once. You should have had Trixie say something to her after exiting.
Filthy, dirty, and horrible!... Write more please?
This was good! I hope you keep writing!
"walks over to the ponyville library"
hey... i fucked your brother.
"walks away like a boss"
Well you've got my
bonerlike.Oh, and boner too, of course
*Trixie walks up to Twilight*
Trixie: I love and tolerate...your brother...with my vagina!
*runs away laughing*
Twilight:*scarred for life*
I loved this but i only saw a couple minor problems with this:
1. You keep saying "Shining Armor" way too much. I'm not saying its a bad thing but we kinda know who he is after the first "Said Shining Armor." After that just "Shining" would work. Although you can say "Shining Armor" again after a while. Also, same for Wind West and Ziggy Stardust (love the David Bowie ref).
2. You put about the Twilight look-alike but she dissapears after that. Was it supposed to lend creedence to the story at all? Like someone told me.... If it has no real context other than for the guys to mention about Twilight being there then what's the point? It really serves no purpose.
3. Horses really dont have gag reflexes, but this is mostly overlooked in fics so im really not complaining.
Hope this helps!