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The 24th Pegasus


Author of the Commander Hurricane series (A Song of Storms), co-founder of the Price of Loyalty universe, and overall world building fanatic. Join my discord!

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Rarity is no stranger to working late nights and burning her fair share of midnight oil to finish orders. Tonight is no different, except that her project isn't a last-minute order for some noblemare in Canterlot. It's for somepony far closer and far more important to her than any customer she's ever had, or ever will have, and for that reason, it needs to be perfect.

For her, she'll burn all the oil in the world just to do it right.


Cover art by Ruirik

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

Bootiful.

~Skeeter The Lurker

You capture Rarity's and Rainbow Dash's personalities perfectly. The whole story is written at such a peaceful pace and with such wonderful images that I had to add it to my favorites. Thank you for sharing this gem.

Nice story. Have a like.:pinkiesmile:

I'm not usually a fan of this pairing, but this fic very nearly made me reconsider. It was excellent.

very well done such a beautiful story! you can be proud of it! you wrote raritys feelings masterfully. well done!

I love it when I find a really good RariDash Fic. It just puts a smile on my face and makes me so happy. Excellent work.

Did I see a Harry Potter reference?

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I'll just say yes even though I honestly have no idea.

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Whipping willows are known to be very violent flora, and of course she thinks she can fly through them like nopony’s business!

The Whomping Willow is a tree that is from the book series, Harry Potter. It is a tree that tends to hit anything that gets near it. That's why I thought, Harry Potter reference!

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Ah, now I remember. Yeah I did think about that after the fact, but this willow doesn't whump so much as whip vines at passerby.

YES YES YES!!!!

Everyone the ship has set sail!!!!!

This amazing, and I love it!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Well then, sir, I believe it is time to ignite the midnight petroleum.

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Whipping willows are known to be very violent flora, and of course she thinks she can fly through them like nopony’s business!

As I stated below.

My first though when I read the title

i.imgur.com/lDwJUR3.png

http://prntscr.com/90omxi

Sorry :twilightsheepish:

Anyways, now onto reading :D

It's well-written and the sentimental value is clear, I just don't see why they're together. I get that vastly different people can be in love, but there's a reason when that happens. What is it about Rarity that a sports crazy, rough-and-tumble, very dissimilar female like Rainbow loves about her? Likewise, what does a refined lady of class and unwavering dignity see in her polar opposite? Not being one of the people that just likes to see these two together for some inexplicable reason, this story felt gratuitous and devoid of substance for me and I couldn't enjoy reading it, even though I wanted to. Maybe you didn't write this with any other intent than to polish your shipping goggles and for your own enjoyment, but in the case that you did, I've shared my opinion and I can only hope that it doesn't offend.

Hmm, ShortSkirtsandExplosions is the only other author I've seen who insists on describing Dash's magenta-ish/dark pink eyes as "ruby". You're not another of his alts, are you? :trixieshiftright: :trixieshiftleft:

(Don't mind me. I am now paranoid that everyone is a Skirts alt. Even me.)

I love this!

I'm not a huge fan of the ship, but this story definitely made me respect it more.

Have all me likes. :heart:

This was a nice cute story, I loved it.

B-E-A-utiful.

Heartwarming too.

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