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[Note: Spoilers for Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel included. To be safe, it is suggest to read to at least the Interlude, though reading beyond is recommended.]

Frost Windchill isn't the only one in the Wasteland with a story to tell. With many years under his belt, the storyteller has met many others during his travels. Some were heroes. Some weren't. The Wasteland, after all, isn't kind to heroes.

Off the Record is a compilation of side-stories that take place in the universe established by The Last Sentinel, ranging from post-apocalyptia all the way to before the Lunar Exile. Posting will have no regular schedule but instead will be done on the author's whim. Voting for the next segment may also occur, so keep your eyes peeled on the author's blog.

Cover art courtesy of Pantzar.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Well, I was hoping for another chapter in your main story, but got a whole new story.
I'm tracking it...
:twilightsmile:

We were aboard the OMS Leviathan, crown jewel of the Aldornan Navy. With a displacement of over seventy-two-thousand tons at full load, a length of over a quarter-kilometer, nearly forty meters tall from the waterline, and featuring a main battery of four-sixty-millimeter rifled guns in three triple-cannon turrets and an array of secondary batteries consisting of one-fifty-five- and one-twenty-seven-millimeter guns and thirty twenty-five-millimeter BOFORS autocannons for close air defense, she was by far the largest battleship ever constructed. Her main and secondary batteries were even capable of firing incendiary cloudburster shells designed for the sole purpose of destroying Equestrian Raptor-class and Thunderhead-class cloudships. Heh, you’re drooling, Griseis. Mind yourself. The Leviathan outgunned, out-ranged, and out-armored both the LVS Valvuis before her untimely demise and the HMS Warspite, and she was built in complete secrecy over the course of five years. She wasn’t even finished- another rear-mounted triple-cannon turret was in production, but it couldn’t be mounted in time before her emergency deployment. And she was built as a precautionary measure of all things.

I read this description and immediately knew what ship you based this off of. I call your IJN Yamato with my USS Iowa

This is an fantastic start of a new story. Tracking...
But what time is the ship set in (160 years), in comparison with the main story in Rig's time (160 years - stated in chapter 1), was it the same year or are these years rounded? Just in the same decade? This doesn't matter too much to me since your leaving that time frame for the next chapter... at least that's implied.

Griffon-made Yamato? I would have put them more along the lines of pseudo-german, but that might just be my own desire to see a Bismarck analogue. I can dig it. Lookin forwards to seein' it in action, even if not in this particular episode (or maybe we will? I guess we'll see).

I'm really looking forwards to these. I can definitely see why you want to write these off-the-record stories, I forsee some really fun combat, interesting perspectives and lots of guns coming up.

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

“Well some stories need to be told, and that sounds like one of ‘em,” Griseis said, crossing her arms.

What she said! I know that your life is busy, schooling and what not, but I hope that I one day can see a notification with your name and a new chapter on.

"and I looked up to find the griffin ghoul extracting the biomass cell from her weapon"

Biomass? Unless this is something new that you have introduced, which I must admit that I can't remember since it have been so long since I last read your stories, do I not think that biomass have ever been used as ammo. I mean in general would biomass properly also make for pretty bad plasma ammo, it being biological matter and all that.

NOES! Its not fair getting to the good part and then disappearing like this to do real life stuff! Bad Adder1 bad!

Nitpick
" I said before switching off the headset and turning to face the griffiness She was still pacing around agitatedly," Its rare that I find one of these in an Adder1 production, but you are lacking a period here.

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