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In the ruins of embattled Lunangrad, the proud city of Equestria's most northern climes, a Dashite finds an injured pony alone and helps him, despite the risk to herself, holding the example of a certain Lunagrad Crusader before her as a shining example. But this pony, a stallion who's not truly even fully grown quite yet, is more than what meets the eye. Two ponies each face their own struggles: one must learn to overcome her own disappointment and fear to help a stranger, and the other must come to terms with his own motivations, and face an ugly truth behind at least some of his bravery.

(A Oneshot set in the Fallout Equestria Universe.Credit to Kkat, for this dark chest of wonders. Credit to MasterJosh140 for the AWESOME picture. Go look at the gallery! Go!)

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Ooh, up and down votes changed! :D

Thanks, you few that have read it. Please, comment! Tell someone else! IF nothing else, comment. :D

Good enough to put on my Kindle, right beside FOE, FOE: PH, FOE: FL and FOE: H, well done good sir.

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Well this was a great comment to wake up to! :D Thank you!

You gave me a nice big chunk of entertainment, a compliment was the least I could do.

1818685 Hey! Thank you! I liked this story a lot, and was always sad to see it never did very well. I'm really glad you like it.

I've talked about it before but I'm sorry that I've never left an actual comment please forgive me :pinkiesad2: But now I'll tell you my whole opinion :pinkiehappy:. First off I just love this story it's why I follow you because I hope that someday you'll come back to it. Tell us what made the Crusader a legend the stories that made him a hero. I honestly be leave that you have a lot of potential. Maybe you won't make one that's Kkat approved but you can at least be as good as New Roam, or Just Like Clockwork (in my opinion two of the best stories in this fandom). I would be willing to offer assistance in making it canonical but that's the best I can do (I really need to work on my own grammar). Please keep the Crusader alive I know I'm not the only one who would like to know of his deeds. And remember if you do work on a sequel I'll aid you cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye :pinkiesmile:.

Signed: G-man64

1922375 I'm glad you like this story... I still do.


I'm actually working on a sequel to it called "Flirtin' With Disaster"

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Sweet I'll be sure to read (and review) it when it comes out. If it's half as good as this one it'll be a great ride.

1989308 I actually like this one.

One time I had a character who's motivation was justice, the rule of law and....
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Working my way through the backlog of all the stories on my RIL list...Go go gadget necro comment!

That was the story the DJ told, after he finished reports of strange happenings on the Big 52, or the adventures of Security and the Stable Dweller.

Wow.

There are some blasts from the past...

It was a blood bath. Patrols came in to find the camp in ruins and the survivors fighting, and they started tearing each other apart. Those reinforcements from the raider crews closer to the Zebra Fort took one good look at the proceedings and simply turned around. It was effective.

*Crusader used False Flag Fratricide*
It's super effective!

“So… this whole time, you’ve been doing this for a mare… who is more interested in mares.”

Hell Tartarus may have no fury like a mare scorned, but the Wasteland better beware of a lovelorn stallion!

Weezer - Pink Triangle

That certainly was an enjoyable one-shot! Thank you for this entertaining trip down memory lane!

8067343 glad you liked it. I wish the story of my lovelorn teenage stallion and his inability to shoot things had gained more traction but I still love him

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I wish the story of my lovelorn teenage stallion and his inability to shoot things had gained more traction but I still love him

This particular story may not have go traction, but it appears this particular archetype seems to have reappeared in many of your other stories...

8067408 there's definitely the young foolish lovesick character in a lot of stuff. Rarity did it a few times, actually. Two too but way darker.

I didn't read FO:E so umm

Oops

I missed a fair deal

But it was also nice

The story is pretty rough, prose-wise. Somewhere at the start, in one paragraph, it felt like it went from third person to first, and then went back to third.

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Yeah, six years ago it was one of the first things I had written in a long time.

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I like the concept of a pony getting to meet a Wasteland legend and getting to know him though.

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