Twilight has been messing around with some dark magic in her back room, but when the dentist stops by for some help, her experiments get a little out of hoof.
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Twilight has been messing around with some dark magic in her back room, but when the dentist stops by for some help, her experiments get a little out of hoof.
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Okay, this has been up for over a week now, and it still has absolutely no comments... I don't know if that's good or bad. I really need feedback folks so that I know what I need to improve on! Criticize me for Celestia's sake! If it's not good, tell me why. I want to know! I can't get any better if I have no idea what I'm doing wrong, so please help me here.
I think that was pretty good. I'm not good at being critical.