sequel out? nice

Very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter.

>>683317683317  Well, I hope you like it!  It has seemed to have received a...less than warm welcome by some readers.

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Well, the way it jumps between the "Commander" and Twilight can be a little confusing. I'm assuming that his parts are from the past, but they could present or future as well. Other than that I can't see why people would give it a thumbs down. Don't get discouraged, the thumbs ups will come, in time.

>>684652684652  For that you get all the sunglasses.

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Regrettably, I have to cook dinner. Read later list it goes.  

>>684674684674 I have no qualms about this fic, other than my ponysona's name is Moonfire, not Moon Fire; I saw a few grammar errors as well but will not piont them out

Cant wait for the next chapter! How long do you expect this to be?

>>686952686952  A week, maybe 2.  I still have other things to write.

100 years later? Ain't it 400 years later?!

>>690315690315  OK, let me clarity it.  400 years, they were on the ship.  But it was supposed to be 15 years before they reached the colony, since they had been asleep for 300 years already.  Then, all that stuff last story happened, and they were delayed.  THAT, is the 400 years.

>>690468690468

The spaceship was all the time there ,they discovered that when they got out from the ship. So it can't be 100 years later....

Well anyway I can't force you to change things ,it's just I get sometimes that crazy 'Everything must be perfect' side of Twilight.

Hope ya aren't mad at me.

>>690495690495  Not mad, but I did say it was 100 years later in AtS.  When Whooves and Twilight got on the bridge, Whooves sees the internal clock and it is 100 years overdue....

“It’s terrible, that’s what it is.” he said, turning around to face her.  “We haven’t been here for almost three hundred years.  It has been much longer than that.”

    “How long?” Twilight asked, afraid to hear the answer.

    “We have been here for almost four hundred years.”  Twilight’s heart dropped out of her chest.  She couldn’t believe it.  One hundred years, adrift?

    “That explains why we woke up.” Whooves said, starting to pace.  “The ship is old.  A century older than it should be. "

Sorry, this is my OCD.

>>690549690549

OCD = Original Character Design?

>>690672690672  Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.  I have to prove myself right, if I know I am.

>>690880690880

Oh okay then.

>>690884690884  Yeah.......so.  Like it?

>>690963690963

Eeyup ,your writing skill has got some skill points

>>690993690993 Thanks!

Wow really excited! I just read Among the Stars, and it's my 2nd favorite fanfic, being beaten by My Little Dashie () anyways, extremely excited! *Side note, how did you get those emoticons with the sunglasses? (Question for Doctor Okami)

>>695309695309  It is a script that you have to instal through greasemonkey on Firefox.  Here is the link! Epicness  You will need greasemonkey first, though!  And thank you for liking Among the Stars.  Yes, My Little Dashie does beat it.  I still tear up from that!

>>695630695630 Thanks a lot!

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>>697338697338  You are quite welcome!

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Thanks, and anyways... GREAT STORY! I know I said it already, but Among the Stars was amazing. loved the story, the mystery, and everything about it. I could easily picture everything going on in it. I also like how you made the characters act how they would've in their show

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>>697908697908  Presumed length of travel was 300 years to the new colony.  The first ship, before New beginnings, was sent about 15 years earlier.  They landed and began to colonize.  But here is the part most people didn't get.  New Beginnings malfunctioned.  It didn't unfreeze them when they got to the planet.  So they were stuck for 100 more years in Cryo.  Now, why didn't the colony just rescue them?  You will have to find out?

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Y U NO ADD CHAPTER 2

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>>703467703467  Cause I am still writing it.  And with summer here, I am a little more lazy than usual.

>>704877704877 Yeah, I shouldn't rush perfection... And I definitely understand the whole summer lazy thing. I was just joking around, but I am very anxious to find out what happens next, you definitely have me hooked!

>>708453708453  Just FYI, I finished it at about 11 last night.  So I am probably going to spend the next day or two reading it over and editing it.  So look forward to it by the weekend!

Very interesting. Can't wait to see what they find as they explore the colony.

(O_O)  ...   interesting ....  more  .....

I WAANT MORE! !!!!! ......  please

>>723014723014  Thank you!  And thank you for pointing out my misspellings.  I went over this once or twice to catch the mistakes, but those slipped through.

that...

was...

unusually foreboding coming from me.

I fear where you are taking them

Damn good I can't wait for more ......but I would have to has I don't have internet at my house I have to stay at my step dads. Anyway I love it.

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Can't wait for more! I'm so very glad I decided to give this a read. Will you continue the split narrative between the past and present or are you done with that now its revealed everypony(or most everypony died)?

>>763722763722  Wait and find out!

>>766548766548 Oooooh...your good...

Now I've actually read the chapter(instead of just replying to a comment), I repeat what I said earlier "Oooooh...your good...".

I wonder if that's LG frozen from what I assume was some sort of cryo-stasis chamber.

Amazing chapter yet again! Found a couple small mistakes though: "clinked everything he stepped" I'm pretty sure that is supposed to be every time. Another one: "The split up into ground of two" Not sure if this is an error or me just being stupid... But the ending was just plain incredible...

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The more chapters go by, the more nervous I get about that 'tragedy' tag. I keep expecting them to start dropping like flies any time now.

Im sure the diseas is pretty much dead besides in the labratories and i wonder if there are anymore ponies because there were two otheres left lg didnt mention them dieing.great chapter and im sure the mistakes were because he was either in a rush because of his new comp. Or excited because of his new com.

Dude u gonna need to change it to romance if u gonna have them go smoochy smoochy

Hahaha

>>767509767509 of course it's LG, what other pony could it be?

>>770000770000 well, that WOULD be one way the tag can be justifiedbut I think it's because they are trapped on a planet with a deadly virus with no way of getting back to equestria (if it even exists in this time). I don't know about you, but I would call that a tragedy in and of itself (although I kinda wish I was there instead of doctor Whooves (if you know what I mean)).

>>772636772636 Some freaky zombie pony thi-Oh wait that's FO:E...

>>772712772712 yeah, I don't read the FO crossovers for two reasons:

1. I find them to be... disturbing, to say the least.

2. Don't like the idea of ponies having nukes.

>>772712772712>>772731772731  Yay!!  It's been a while since people have debated in my comments.  That hasn't happened since AtS, so this is welcomed! Continue

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>>772731772731 Well I find the stories(the ones I've read at least) to be quite compelling if you can get past the ideas of the ponies having a nuclear conflict and the survivors 200 years later usually brutally killing each other. Because in each one I have read, Harmony triumphs and everypony comes together to make a better world(hasn't happened in PH yet though it has started).

>>772844772844 Next time we'll try to debate something more relevant to your awesome fic.

>>772636772636 Um, that's sorta my point. I'm referring to the disease killing them off one by one.

And no, I don't know why you would want to be there.

>>774532774532 oh, I don't know, it might be because he's the only stallion there

can't believe you didn't think of that part of the situation

>>775165775165 I did. It's just incredibly stupid.

>>775165775165

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Moonfire, calm your little stallion!

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Damn you and just when I thought I was used to your cliffhangers.

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>>775853775853

Eagerly awaiting the next masterpiece!

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Yay!!!!!!! First  Anthropology, then this!!! It must be Christmas in July!

>>866501866501  Um..What was that about Anthro?  And I am glad you liked it.

>>866610866610 It updated last night, but I didn't read it til this morning , then I saw this. So its sort of like christmas but in July!

I was right I knew who LG was I didn't even have to get to the name.

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It was a good chapter I waited all day to read I can't wait for the next update .

Dude, this is the most awsome plot i have ever read so far, and i love it! Good job, man

this should be a featured story and u should try to get it on ed u need more publicity for this series man!

>>872601872601  Tried to get it on EQD, they didn't take it.  I have a one shot in production that I think will do well.  I will try to get that on EQD.

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Twi's screwed...

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WHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????

dat cliffhanger

>>942396942396>>942505942505  Yeeeep.  I still go it!

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Wow i hate you twis my seconed fav. Pony next to pinkie      

Great chapter.

I'm REALLY glade that was only a dream. If it hadn't been, I would have words!

Awsomesouce!

When will the others on the ship wake up? They all still cant be sleeping still!

>>11262601126260  I explained that when they landed.  The back-up generator on the ship will keep then in Suspended Animation, until the colony is ready for them.

man, ten stashes to you!

I was sooooooo exited for the new chapter. And better yet, They found a cure! This story and it's predecessor are 100% approved by AWESOMENESS ITSELF!!!!!!!!

Yes!! I love this chapter. Unless something goes wrong though, it seems as if the story is starting to wind down.

>>12007451200745  Hate to say it, but sadly it is.

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Yay!!!!! I read the knew right away and I love it! There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but I'll sure you'll fix those in time. The plot has been excellent through the whole story and this chapter was no exception. I hope that you'll keep this story going for a long time, I want to know what happens.

This chapter is really good I love it

>>13092121309212  Thank you for your kindness.  But, sadly, I don't think the story is going to be continued.  If it is, it will be in the far future.  And as for the errors, I would fix them in Fimfiction would let me.

Not continued? Not continued? The Horror!!!!

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Thank you very much for the fine read,

Nopony In Particular

>>13157521315752   Aww....I don't know what to say.  Thanks!

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>>13157641315764 You are very welcome!(How do you make those emotes?)

>>13157691315769  Greasemonkey add on for Firefox.  Here is the site. Link  But you will need the greasemonkey add on first.

>>13158291315829 Firefox? Oh. Do they have it for Google Chrome?

>>13158381315838  Yes, you just click instal, and it will instal it for you.

>>13158861315886

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>>13160181316018  Awesome.

Dat awesome cliffhanger

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''He showed his a staircase that looked like it had been swallowed by the earth.'' It's ''him'' there. I saw other little mistakes in other chapters too ,but I don't remember where they are now

Alright ,still got 3 chapters to go!

>>13913441391344  Yeah, I know.  For some reason, Fimfiction won't let me change the mistakes.  I change them, then go to hit save, but nothing happens.  I might try again when I get home from school, as it has been a week or two since I last tried.

Yosh! A nice ending for the story ,with them giving the name to the colony! I had the impression that something was going to happen with Lunar and Dash ,but it tourned out it was my imagination going wild again. (not that way of wild lol)

Now that I've catch up with the story, I'm ready for your next one!

>>13918471391847  Thank you for sticking around with it.  (Why does everyone say LunarDash...?)

>>13920321392032

Lunar Dash would be a great name to a pony I think!

It's probably because they did have some more contact when Dash went to pick up some water . The way Dash fleed after ,I had the impression of ... you see?

>>13914671391467

Strange, indeed. If it still doesn't works, perhaps it would be better to report it to a mod?

>>13921601392160  Yes, I see what you mean.  And I think I will try to edit again before I report it.

Loved this story! Forgot how much I liked sci-fi, especially the whole starting a new colony on a new world from scratch idea!

I can only hope for a sequel, but still, this provides plenty of closure, and the very idea of a new colony makes it EASY to expand upon if you so desired another sequel.

Interesting fact that there wasn't any major animal life though.

>>14094821409482  Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.  No idea if there ever will be a sequel, but there might if I feel up to it.  And about the animal life...I was trying to go for a sci-fi story without all the "OMG ALIENS".  I personally thought that would ruin the feel of an empty world they have to fix.  But that is just my opinion.

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P.S. Did you read the prequel to this story, "Among the Stars"?  It would probably help if you didn't understand some parts of this one.