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Commander Cocoon has a pretty great life, by changeling standards anyway. Born and raised into his revered rank, he has everything many of his fellow changelings can only dream of: power, muscles, two gawgeous mates and the long-fought spot as the Queen’s number one minion. And yet, greedy and endlessly hungry as every other changeling, all this luxury and tail still isn’t enough.

When returning home to the Badlands colony after a year of conquest, Cocoon expected only to resume his humdrum life, at least until his Queen's next big crusade. He certainly didn’t expect a personal invitation to the royal chambers by Queen Chrysalis herself.

That night, as the colony celebrates their soldiers’ return, Chrysalis makes Cocoon an offer only a brain-dead male would refuse: to stand at her side as her consort, the first changeling prince consort in over a hundred years.

His pelvis already crying out in joy, is Cocoon really prepared to deal with the real problems and even dangers being Queen Chrysalis’s top buck-buddy entails?

A follow-up to A Canterlot Wedding, The Return of Queen Chrysalis, and FIENDship Is Magic #5.

Edited and pre-read by Chaodiurn, SketchyChangeling , Scarheart and Mistermech

Cover art by Mistermech

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Comments ( 16 )

A new changeling fic by Magic Man? Instant like and fav.
From the first chapter, it looks to be a good one too. :pinkiehappy:

6574067 Thank you. I hope not to disappoint. What did you like about the first chapter, if you don't mind me asking?

“and you how I love to make an entrance.”

6576231 Ah, we must have missed that one, thank you for pointing it out. It has been fixed.

I haven't read the comics, but this is pretty interesting.

6574521 It gave me a good laugh, when I was having a bad day.
It was a good read.

Comment posted by doctorpie25 deleted Apr 7th, 2016

Unless they're written by Alan Moore, stories whose main draw is lewdness aren't really my thing, but I still enjoy your ear for snappy dialogue. And Chrysalis written as the living embodiment of self-absorbed, seductive evil is always a treat to read, more so when one adds that touch of care she does show for her minions, though if this follows the comics' continuity in which she threw a drone into an active volcano, less so here.

So I wish for you to be kept entertained writing a new fic, while I anticipate the next chapter of Citizen Weevil.

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(found link on DA) Tracking!

Nice!

Though they aren't really always chaotic evil, there was a friendly one in Slice of Life. Or at least a calm and well-behaved one.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Just to explain my downvote, I feel this could be written almost as easily with humans talented at disguise, and that the characters would make much more sense in that environment. As it is, you've more or less just transplanted that mentality (more specifically, a fantasy that feels more like what you'd expect at a frat house – not something I like even in the "proper" setting) onto the changelings, and it really doesn't feel like it fits in Equestria, even allowing that changelings are going to have a different culture than the ponies'.

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