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Trigger warning: cutesy language

Celestia gives her sister a 'fanfic' about Luna and a lunar guard.
Luna tries to reply in kind.
Will it have its intended effect?

Rated E for 'extra silly'

thanks to all my prereaders for your suggestions

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Comments ( 15 )

Dawwwwww the cute.

Delightful! Or should that be tea-lightful? Tea-and-cake-lightful? Errr, sorry, I forgot what my point was. Loved this! :)

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glad you liked it

Okay, that was adoracute.

Adorable.

I am not quite sure what I just read. . . but I like it.:twilightsmile:

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thank you



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that's okay. I'm not really sure what I wrote :pinkiehappy:

That was a cute and funny story. :pinkiehappy:

Loved it <3!!

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really?!?

wow, you're weird.

:trollestia:

“What...” Luna began, looking up from the paper in front of her. “What is this?”

Exactly my reaction.

“How long did you spend coming up with all these... terms, anyway.”

I want to know that, too!
[The author answered that question in the Author's Note'.]

Drill Sergeant Booming Voice

Well that's a name!


Good story.
Even if I think I don't completely understand the ending.

Okay, that was adorably silly.

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