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Haha, even Pinkie Pie didn't like them. I loved that line. Kudos, it was very punny. Yeah I said that, wanna fight about? ![]()
"Nopony pikes your puns," said Rainbow Dash."
This could very well be an episode except Hasbro would likely make Pinkie Pie or Rainbow Dash be the one to make all the puns.
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Oh. Dear. Gods. What have I just read.
You sir deserve this like for making me LAUGH at a story about puns! ![]()
Why can't a bicycle stand on its own? It's two-tired.
What happens when a clock is hungry? It goes back four seconds.
...That's all I got.
Oh oh! I've got it
I don't see why everyone is raging on this story
I thought it was
*puts on sunglasses*
punny
Ha ha ha ha! "I'll have to PUNish you." Well played Bugenhagen. Laughed until my cheeks hurt, can't really ask for more than that from a comedy tag. Kudos! You've won a like from me! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading.
I got to say, i love puns, but you have to use it right for it's an art! You have to use them right, or you'll be left in the shade, but use it right and everyone will get a stroke of laughter.![]()
But then again, you should know your limits, otherwise the mood will have quite a bad contrast![]()
When it comes to play on words, you have to roll them out right, other wise the feel won't come out prop-er.![]()
fine i'll cut with this act
Jeez Twi', somepony's being shellfish with the puns.
Keep this up, and you might oystercize your friends.
To stop her, the others might need a little extra kelp.
And Spike: Neptune, really? Could ya be anymore pacific?
But even though she's annoying, Rarity, no need to be a real beach about it. ![]()
Okay, I'm done. So much puns...oww.
Liked and favorited. I'm a sucker for some cheesey puns. I blame Dead Rising 2![]()
The...puns...
THEY BURN!!!
JK. I thought they were very punny.
...I see what you did there...
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ALL OF MY PUN-RAGE ![]()
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Look at me, reduced to using a ton of emoticons. +1 for you
So many puns!!!!!!
As far as puns go I think that Rarity would be the one to keep her friends in stitches . As long as she
didn't lose the thread of the story she could keep needling her friends. The story would just keep
bobbin along and if one of them got sad she could stop and singer a song until someone put their foot
down. I guess with all these puns I'm going to get a good basting from everyone. The cops will arrive
get out the cuffs and make the collar. OK,OK I'll stop put the rope away.
This was snot funny, i mean come on troll i nose you can write a story that will blow me away.
Ok, occasional puns are funny when cleverly used but if you overkill it like that... it just gets annoying.
Doctor: FIMFICTION, you have punacidous. A disease when there aren't enough puns...
FIMFICTION: Is there a cure?
Doc: Yes. Thankfully it's a one shot
Water you missing in ocean puns scene?... Something about shipping of with some friends to the beach. My mom is the puniest in my family though.
I didn't laugh at all.
Cause' I am a little horse.
No but really I laughed to hard at Fluttershys cx ![]()
That was fun. Good read to start the day
. Puntastic Humour is well done in this story.![]()
I'm suprised you took the time to include Spike sinse this story seemed to kind of...dragon.
What? This story has dislikes. Their PUNy brains must be unable to FANDOM the glory of this story. I reccomend you hire Marel's PUNisher to deal PUNctual and a-PRO-priate PUNishment. I hear he is quite dePUNdable.![]()
CC: Glub glub glub. W) (at's t) (at Twilig) (t? Did you say t) (e trip wouldn't ) (ave a... porpoise? O) ( my glub!
What am I reading
Those jokes were punny before
but no they're just ridiculous
....was excited at first (being a fan of making people groan at puns myself), then disappointed, but then it gradually got better until I couldn't stop grinning at the end. Well done. >w<
I thought this story would rise high but it eventually ground level with my expectations.
I am glad it didn't drag on too long.
Although some shipping would have been nice but I guess the wind left your sails.
I was gald with the type of book Twilight found since your last story was quite cursive.
Tu bad you didn't use musical puns, I would have sheet.
I hope the sand at the beach is not too hot, I'm sure Rarity can dram ap some pillows but I'm not sure how many ponies can fit per cussion.
Unlike some of the puns and amusement park jokes in Sonic Colors (particularly "Did anybody order a clobbering?". That one made me
and was really the only one I didn't find funny on some level.) Almost all the puns made me laugh, especially the one Spike made made at the end. ![]()
Props to you, good spur!
Oh God, this is almost as bad as my dad! I love it!
Also, I can't decide which of these fits better!
so many puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn *the program Blueheartpegasus has stopped responding, do you want to end it now?*
At first I was like: ![]()
then: ![]()
halfway through:![]()
At the end:![]()
Best was when Spike came and said "I mustache you a question!"![]()
puns are a canser to the internet...yet i dont mins sharing its sickness to the highest lv...
I don't get the Neptune one. ![]()
Anyways, looks great, laughed the whole way through. Keep on going.
I was giggling like an idiot the whole way through, right up to where Fluttershy made her pun. That was the proverbial Fatality to any composure I had left. In short, I lost it. Hard. But why didn't spike just shave his question for later?







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