I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011
Ten year old Anton MacLeod after losing his mother runs away from his cold and cruel aunt. Luna who had been keeping an eye on him through his dreams sees he had nowhere to go and no one else to go to decides to bring him to Equestria where she hopes the Mane Six and other residents of Ponyville will fill in the empty void in his heart that longs for a family.
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great job sweetie
Not bad at all.
I'm guessing the whole religious duty thing was from Stephen King's IT. Nice start.
Huh. Intriguing.
Awesome start
Abusive families are just 1 of the many thing in society that make me sick
, I really hope you kill that bitch aunt at some point
(or at the least have her and her son rot in the Canterlot dungeon
).
Fascinating. I should check them out.
Anyway, this is getting good. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Man.. I approved this story
, but it leads me a question,
How does Twilight manage to know about humans, and more importantly, how does she knows about bicycle?
6525939 If this was written during or after Equestria Girls, Twilight knowing about humans would make sense.
I'm really like the direction you are taking this and I say keep going with it. However, just a few comments/recommendations.
First: your grammar isn't terrible, but I think you should find someone to proof read or edit. Some punctuation seemed off.
Second: like what I said earlier, I like the direction you are going with this, but the pacing seems a bit rushed. Just slow it down a little.
Third and finally: how do they know what a bike is? I have seen unicycles in equestria and scooters, but I can not recal seeing bikes.
I'm gonna give this story a follow because I want to see where this is going. Keep at it.
great job sweetie I liked it
I can actually imagine Spoiled Rich and Anton's aunt working together.
6546130 That does not sound pleasant.
6546134 Well for Spoiled she would do it to get rid of him and for status and for Katrina she would want the inheritance money that Anton's mother had left him and give her an excuse to belittle and torture him emotionally.
Anton's taking being in another world of talking ponies surprisingly well, then again being in a new world means he'll never have to see that big fat, stupid, nagging, bitching, ugly hag face aunt, and her monster son again.
The storytelling style reminds me of James and the Giant Peach.
6546318 Precisely. To him right now anything's better than being back living with those two
That's explains my last comment
Yep, this has vibes of James and the Giant Peach.
6588427 Huh, I never saw that
great job
6588427 Now that you mention it, it actually does.
I was half expecting it to be what Spike was wearing in ticket master.
This feels very rushed.
Cute
great job sweetie
I don't see alotta snarky child protagonists. I like Anton.
6628864 Yeah I was always under the impression if the child protagonists isn't sweet and loving then it's a bad character idea. But I like to be real and play by what a child at that age would actually act like instead of either being just plain good or just plain bad.
6628974 We're more likely to see kids like Anton than Toby because the former is more realistic, personality wise.
6629098 Probably
6524495 "IT" As in... 'The Boy Called "IT."'?
6628974 Can my OC, George Cunningham be in this story?
We need Luna to give Katrina and Rodney some nightmares as a form of retribution on Anton's part.
I'm really loving this. Keep it up.
Seance the CMC's having their cutie marks, I'm guessing Tiara isn't a bully anymore in this story, still I feel there will be somepony that's gonna give Anton a hard time.
6720635 Indeed there will be and it'll remind him of how badly his cousin treated him.
6720648 Will it end with said pony picking his/her teeth of the floor?
6720657 That's for you to find out.
awesome
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(Noddes head) So it's agreed. Luna, commence with the nightmares.
(Muffled sounds of Katrina screaming in the distance)
More! More more more more...
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If Luna gave Rodney a nightmare, this would be his including Anton antagonizing him.
6736907 I was thinking along the lines of FNAF actually.
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I pictured more... I don't know. But this is better. LOL
The long awaited chapter! And it is awesome!!!
Awesome chapter
Despite Uppercut's talent obviously being boxing, I bet he'll get his ass handed to him from Anton.
pensuka (me): man uppercut is a asshole that is stubborn as a mule *turns to a mule that was next to him* no offense there dude
mule: none taken i never did like that uppercut kid he was so rude even insulted me called me a "mutated pony" nerve of him
pensuka: wonder if i should use that corncorb prank i picked up
mule: corncorb prank??
pensuka: oh you dont know well ill give the water down detail version for you *whispers it to the mule which the donkey then turn completely pale*
mule: that is evil where did you learn that!!
pensuka: from another dimension a perk of being a dimensional researcher and explorer is that you learn things manage to be given a copy of a autobiography of the dude who made the prank got to say he had as the title said "a dramatic life"
mule: mind if i read it sometime im curious of it
pensuka: sure i keep spare copies just in case of it get stolen *gives the autobiography to the mule*
mule: thanks
6783259 corncob prank?