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Celestia orders a jelly donut from Pony Joe.

Then, she eats it.

Actually, we don't even see her eat the whole donut.

We just see her eat like, a couple bites.

NOT A COMEDY

Takes place in the Obamaverse (see my user page), but should make sense as a one-shot. Just accept that Celestia's nuts in this universe, okay?

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Comments ( 10 )

That ending little bit has always been my thought on those who want to rule the world. It can get so... boring at times.

I love horror stories. Keep up the good work.

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For flesh or donuts? :p

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Well, if you want to read hundreds of thousands of words of varying quality exploring the consequences of that thought, I've got you covered. And most of my other one shots are horror. :p

Seriously, though, thanks. My stories in this universe don't get too much attention, so it's nice someone enjoyed it.

gg good game

11/10 good fanfic - IGN

I feel like this should get way more attention than it has, but I guess that's just how it goes.
Great work!

...evil Celestia is terrifying pony.:raritydespair:

Nice to see on my return to fimfiction that you're still writing stories! Its style and execution like this that reminds me I'll never be a better writer than you...

Hmm. Starting to think you're part of the reason I stopped writing. The Obamaverse is still alive?! I have been gone far far too long

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I was wondering where you had went! I thought you had stopped following the series cause Obama Returns had gotten so boring :p

I forgot, were you around for the big retconning? That's the only really important thing you've missed, I think. Other than that, you've probably come back at just the perfect time.

Like, you remember when you were irritated at that "the meaning of this chapter will be revealed sometime next year"?

Next. Week.

Although I can't guarantee the "answer" won't raise more questions than it answers. We aren't quite at the part of the plot where everything is going to be explained straightforwardly… :p

Starting to think you're part of the reason I stopped writing.

Now I feel bad. Maybe I'll try reading Deadpool Kills the My Little Pony Universe :p

7364226 :pinkiegasp: Oh you remember me! :3 :applecry: :fluttercry: so sweet...

Yeah, It wasn't really that obamaverse got boring, I think it was because I stopped watching the show aaand took care of a lot of personal things, you know typical stuff. The sort of stuff that robs you of years of free time you know the one. When I left I thought the obamaverse got axed actually, I remember it was around when you posted a blog that you wanted to write stories that don't involve hooves and whatnot I figured writing fan fics was starting to drive you crazy soooo that might also be a reason why I jumped ship.

Yeah, about Deadpool kills, It's my magnus opus sure. But, it's also the very first story I've ever written so its chocked full of SO many errors, bad grammar, bad pacing, bad ideas in general I cringe a lot really when I read it back it was just so abysmal... SOoo its not a recommended read from me. Plus I haven't written a chapter in years. Did I even mention that story before? I had no idea you knew.

Great to be back, I'll just check out that post first and catch-up with what else has happened but oh my god you're really giving me a run for my time... so many stories to read... and self-references my god... Its beautiful :fluttershyouch:

Sorry. I talk a lot. I came back at just the perfect time! :pinkiehappy: as you say :raritywink:

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