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    Martin is to be knighted by Princess Celestia during spring break and on this momentous day he and Applejack's love for each other has blossomed, but it must be kept a complete secret when on Equestria, however all of these good tidings turn dark when Discord and Queen Chrysalis ally themselves with Jinx The First, eldest brother to the aspects and among the most powerful after he escapes his prison.  

    FRIENDSHIP

    BETRAYEL

    HONOR  

    LOVE

    WE HAVE REACHED THE ENDGAME.

    First Published
    25th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    15th Nov 2012

    Comments ( 73 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Intriguing.:pinkiesmile:

    Awaiting very much further releases.:fluttershysad:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    A great series so far!

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Also chapters WILL now be longer after this one

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #5 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I like How you used the Joker scene from batman :rainbowkiss:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 18h ago · · ·
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    #7 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 17h ago · · ·
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    -_-

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Shits about to get real!!!!!:eeyup:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Am I the only one who got the The Dark Knight reference

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ch.3: death, finally!

    but i wonder,... why bon bon, and lyra?!

    always those two together...

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wow.  Just... Wow.

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1346663

    Nope.  You are not the only one.

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well, that escalated quickly.

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ch. 4 notice:

    The trio rises...:pinkiegasp:

    Nice clearing-up of things, ya' know?

    #15 · Chapter 6 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Intriguing.:pinkiesmile:

    #16 · Chapter 6 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The Xanatos Gambit, also know as Heads I win, Tails you lose. Even if I lose, I win. Because I cannot lose.

    #17 · Chapter 7 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #19 · Chapter 6 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Could you please teach me this xanatos gambit?

    Every time i play risk with my dad, or anyone else really, i end up utterly and completely destroyed.

    I even lose to my little sister, do you know how that feels?

    #20 · Chapter 8 · 34w, 8h ago · · ·
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    #21 · Chapter 8 · 34w, 3h ago · · ·
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    AH Labrinth, One of the Great nostalgia movie no?.:trixieshiftright:

    That got me good.:twilightblush:

    #22 · Chapter 9 · 34w, 3h ago · · ·
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    So let me see get refernces:

    Pirate of cabberian

    the warriors

    and

    sin city.

    You my dear sir are...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I don't have a roid rage emoticon, soooooo here a moustache

    :moustache:

    Also.......First!

    #23 · Chapter 9 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Nice stuff.

    #24 · Chapter 10 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh shi-:pinkiegasp:

    #25 · Chapter 6 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1491524

    You have to start with Australia and work your way up through Asia.

    And as for the gambit, watch some episodes of Gargoyles.  You'll see soon enough.

    #26 · Chapter 7 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What are the odds that random people know who and where Martin is?

    #27 · Chapter 10 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Until it can be proven, that's not Alan.

    #28 · Chapter 10 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    So....sortirus is sorta like....Martin's personal jesus???

    I know religion is not the point of this, but i'm still a little confused.:rainbowhuh:

    #29 · Chapter 10 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1517163

    The point of it is this, Sortitus literally paved their roads as a whole and was always with them one way or another

    #30 · Chapter 8 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #31 · Chapter 9 · 33w, 14h ago · · ·
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    #32 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    ...wow

    #33 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh dear... disharmonized Alan is so savage!:fluttershysad:

    Awaiting further releases.:pinkiesmile:

    #34 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Darn my impatient self, I need more!!

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Aladdin and the King of thieves? Nice:rainbowkiss:

    #36 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm getting a little bored of reading this...:ajsleepy:

    #37 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1567627

    Don't worry the end is coming up.

    #38 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1555879

    oh as a friend of the author. i know... discord diden't touch him

    #39 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #40 · Chapter 11 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #41 · Chapter 12 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Tiss short because the next one's are going to be Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong:derpyderp2:

    #42 · Chapter 12 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very well then.:pinkiehappy:

    Intriguing.:pinkiesmile:

    #43 · Chapter 12 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1571896

    yep he iis my real life friend. he is the one that made me a brony. and discord had a hand in it but dident touch him. might have wispered something to him but no touching. as far as i know. remember tehy also have the aspect and the queen there.

    #44 · Chapter 12 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowdetermined2: kick some ass and some names

    #45 · Chapter 13 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ITS GETTING SO GOOD!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    Though it's amazing in the first place. It's just getting better.:moustache:

    #46 · Chapter 15 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Best story of all time. I mean really, I'm extremely satisfied with how it went.

    Congrats on completion and a thousand thanks.

    :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::moustache::moustache::eeyup::eeyup::moustache::trollestia::trollestia::ajsmug::applecry::derpytongue2::fluttercry::raritystarry::raritydespair::rainbowlaugh::twilightsheepish::yay:

    #47 · Chapter 13 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #48 · Chapter 15 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ...I wished Lupe lived, but ah well; it was enjoyable.:pinkiesmile:

    #49 · Chapter 15 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #50 · Chapter 15 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Bro be rightin a good story and shit.

    End of a saga and shit.

    Me sad as shit.

    ..............shit:fluttershysad:

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