FIIIRSSST!!!!!!! shock-and-awe!

Finally get to see this online! woohoo!  

Hmmm... a secretive, half-dragon colt, found in the middle of the Everfree Forest on death's door. Seems Legit.

Poor Cerberus.  Applejack is HONESTLY being a jerk.  I was kind-of hoping that Fluttershy would break-out with The Stare to get AJ to stop being so mean to Cerb..  So Applejack is disgusted by a pony-dragon cross-breed huh?  I guess that it's obvious that she's never been to Xanth, or herd of the infamous Xanthian love springs.

>>4440044400 Well, yes, but look at how she - in fact, ALL of them - reacted to Zecora. I'm guessing that she just doesn't like to well, 'like' something strange before getting to know it I seriously doubt that even she could be so low brow the entire time. But, that's up to the author. Post moar, Plz!

Pretty good. A few technical and grammatical errors, but other than that, this story is moving along. The track you have set, though, appears to be a bit bumpy. At points it moves fast, but at other places, it seems to move slow. Try to maintain a balanced speed throughout, and people will be more likely to read it. Well done. 4.25/5

for another good chapter.

>>4765247652True.

>>4857548575 The next chapter will involve new characters. I do better when working with OCs, so expect improvements in pace.

>>5056650566 Oi, dude. When Can we expect it?

>>5327453274 Hopefully by the end of the week.

Great so far. Work on transitions, though!

Fluttershy, Y U NO go all Flutterage on Applejack's ass?

The next chapter involves more of the mane 6, so you have that to look forward to.

War,Famon,Pestalance and Death. All that good stuff.

wait if NNM is his mm whos the dad?>>6378863788 wait di I just misspell mom?

>>6378963789 All will be revealed in due time.

when can we expect more

>>6490364903 The next chapter is a long one. Give me a week to two weeks. Maximum.

>>6491564915 FINISH SOON!!!

Just so you all know, we're up to 7 pages and counting for the next chapter. Told you it was long.

Uploaded a new one. It's the FIRST PART. It was getting way too long for its own good.

Part 2 will be uploaded soon.

woot woot!

It says to read Flames: Eclipsed first, but I disagree. Read both at the same time. Flames actually starts a chapter behind Dragon of the Eclipse.

when shall this be updated, good sir? I request an update as soon as equinely possible!

>>8834688346 I really mean that, too. I cannot publish my next chapter until this one is done! And that is not so very good for me, because I have been waiting for almost a week to update my side. PLEASE get the next 2 or three chapters done soon!

I genuinely apologize for the delays on my part. This Christmas break was busy as all hell. I've got a whole chapter prepped to release alongside another, which is about halfway done. This will break away from the relatively lighthearted part of the story and go into the drama.

When ever they say "Cerberus" or "Cerb" I feel like its directed to me because I go by Cerberus or Cerberusx on every site I join. But I'm loving this story. But does Cerberus have sharp teeth?

>>109780109780 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ft7zHARLUs0 I'll elaborate on that later in the story.

>>109780109780

... He's got fangs.

Woo! 2 more chapters, and I can update!

Oh, and I like how you kept my changes. I know I already told you, but that's seriously awesome.

Lol guard cockblock

In all seriousness, this is starting to add to the waterwork factor

. Plz continue.

moar please..., there must be more

pretty awsome so far

>>201790201790 What does that have to do with anything?

*jaw drop* that... was... amazing! nice cliffhanger there at the end by the way cant wait for future chapters

>>214035214035 I love a good cliffhanger! The next chapter's a doozy, and you should know - Pinkie Pie would be FREAKING OUT about it.

SWEET! looking forward to it especially if pinkie would FREAK about it

>>212982212982

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New chapter, now up!

What do ya think, eh, my pretties?

*Cough, cough, cough* Well, still sick. Curry time!

Editor Here! Hey, hey! We got it up! Woo!

I think you'll like this one. A minimal amount of touch-ups were needed, so, here it is! The long awaited ninth chapter! woo!

Great chapter, I especially like the "Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull" reference.

>>249736249736 Thanks. It was a lot less understandable when it was passed to me for editing, but... I like it now.

i hope celestia is humbled in her foolish attempt to kill twilight cause i dont think she woulda survived if cerberus hadnt come and distracted twilights internal conflict

eitherway commens the slaughter

this is gonna be awsome i love twilight but its so unlike celestia to even think of killing twilight let alone attempt it its ... its unthinkable i hope to get a good reason for why celestia would do this to twilight. sry its just so oocharacter for her not even an internal struggle. oh well sry bout that just so strange.

o and still good sooo take my staches all of them.

>>249205249205 Celestia trying to kill twilight was like a slapping the cannon in the face.... I LIKE IT!!!! But we all know celestia is going to die now

>>252116252116 Celestia has chosen that her hate for halfbreeds is stronger than her love for her favorite student. It's evil, but in her eyes, justified.

>>252211252211 Shh!!! Celly might hear your treasonous slander!

>>252592252592 ok good enough hopefully tho twilight can strap her down and teach her a lesson on tollerance

thx fr the explanation and if celestia doesnt realize her mistake and apoligise she'll realize how powerfull her student has become from the little filly she used to be and how much of a nightmare it is to have that power turned back on her elements or not.

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>>252592252592 WHO CARES!!! LET MY VOICE BE HEARD ALL AROUN- (This user was banished to the moony by: TrollSunTyrant026)

..... Houston we have a problem....

>>249205249205 This one should clear up any confusion from my last two pictures!

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Stop children, whats that sound? everybody looks whats going down!

>>252858252858 Oh. Now I get ya! I understand completely what you are saying with those pics! American tourists are piss-depraved werewolves that are trying to control the world through Super Bowl rings! It makes perfect sense!

>>252924252924 ....................... DID YOU REALLY JUST SAY SUPER BOWL RING????????????? SOMEONE GET MY KNIFE DIS CRACKER GOING DOWN!!!!

>>253256253256 Oh, thank Celestia! Please kill me!

>>253263253263>>253256253256 You guys are freaks.

>>254407254407 You know it!

>>254407254407 I agree with the flaming Unicorn

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j0.

This is so awesome

but it's 3am here and I need to go to bed

Please don't stop this fic

you have another follower now and I want to see the end of this story

>>286832286832b I won't stop until it's finished. You see, I'm only good at writing at certain parts of the day, so I only write when inspiration is high and I don't want to rush the chapter, otherwise you get something less than stellar.

We had to expect SOMEONE to not accept Ceberus' existence.

Out of all the ponies, your choice surprises me the most.

Somepony*

little girlish squee in my mind when i saw this and this chapter did not disappoint and just strengthened my resolve to not stop reading this story for whatever reason  until its finished basically im just sayin another great chapter and there is no way in equestria that i would stop reading.

might i add first...

Dear Bob, so much

Love the pic at the end, woot! Though there is a bit of an error with the last paragraph. I suggest taking out Twilight's question about the bucket. It's out of place, atm. She asking that after he's choked up the letter. And she was already hugging Spike when he began to shudder from the pain, but the line "She was by his side in seconds" is still in there, being all redundant. Please fix!

And then the Dragons Fus Ro Dah Celestia into the Sun.

THIS IS BEYOND EPIC

I DEMAND MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

... Woo...? First? Seriously? And this has been up for a few hours. Huh....

ee, we accept our fate at your lives." He

I think that should be 'your hooves', not 'your lives'.

and I am second?

wow, this must not be popular

but I just have to say...

I THIS FIC

PLEASE DON"T END IT ANY TIME SOON

>>348184348184 Eh, we can't end it soon, anyhooves. Gotta build up, and we've only just laid out the foundation. And a good foundation it is, too. This house - to continue the analogy - is going to be a good one. I personally can't wait to see it pan out, myself.

>>351219351219 "Our house, in the middle of our street!"

>>351231351231 It's on the net, 'cause it is so 1337!

If you wish to be swept off your feet, stand 'pon that spot in the midst of the street and strike a pose and send a tweet and let your feelings fly in the fleet and-

Tha's enough rhyming for now :P

I fully expect Applejack to get a full on Flutterage plot-kicking for that racist crap she pulled.

NOT COOL AJ. NOT COOL.

Remind everyone never to piss off fluttershy

Yes.I did just read this Bro.you read it with me....that's strange

I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTT

I Gets The REFRENCE

P.S. Great story

If you would excuse me i have to call 911 To get my mind off the walls and floor and computer screen cause it just got blown the buck up

>>376245376245 What reference? The chapter title?

>>376821376821 what blew your mind?

Nice story. Very moving, and very interesting characters.

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>>376971376971 Hello BoA here The comment i left about part chapter seven

“Rainbow Dash! Yours is the hoof that will pierce the heavens!” thought you where referring to gurren lagann http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OzpY6pLIMQs 4:30

And for my other comment Stages of my head being blown

1 Celestia trying to kill twilight then being saved by Cerberus

2Them saving Luna from being drained of her magic by Celestia  

3Luna falling in love with a dragon and having a foal on the Moon

4 The Note

Well i hope this helps

P.S. When i say you responded to my comment i was all like

P.S.S Great Fic one of the Best I've ever read

for some reason it seems like you are rushing the last part of the chapter

Yay update!

But why during my vacation

I like it, but the romance chapter here seemed a little rushed.that okay, just a little nitpick.

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Might be my fault. He wanted this to be more romantic then clop, you know? And... it's kinda hard to make it one or the other without even writing any details.

>>434055434055>>433636433636 I didn't want to include any actual clop, it would distract from the romance. However, I do want to go back in there and add something.

>>435021435021 Help me out with this, Mac. Add small details or whatever to extend that chapter.

>>435038435038 I'll try, but I might need to add some sensual clop.

I'm liking this very much! I'm gonna continue reading.

Also, thanks again for the drawing!

AJ, WHY?!

Also, getting interesting, man. Will read on.

Woo! Lucky colt, dragon hybrid. At least he gets the respect he so finally deserves.

Also, my favorite pony is a jerk in this story.

Great chapter!~

What a very interesting set of characters we have here. Also, love the drawings! But I can't help but wanna smack Judas for that 'hick' comment...

Will continue on! Tally ho!

Wooo! The party has arrived! Even though I utterly despise parties, I'd defiantly go for the PON3!!!

Great chapter, man.

Well, shit sure went down. Not sure if it's good or bad for me to fully comprehend every word Heretic says.

Once again, great chapter.

BE AFRAID SIS.BE AFRAID

the suspense I cant wait squee

its official this is my new favorite story out of everything i have ever read

applejack you are a bitch of nature

strange i called applejack a bitch last chapter and fluttershy calls her a bitch i mean good job fluttershy

wait she's sisters with octavia my mind has been blown away

i love heretic he's my favorite after cerberus

i laughed so hard at the end i fell straight on my ass

that letter fucking scares me fuck celestia i will have her head and where it as a hat RAHHHUHHHHHHHHH

THIS STORY ITS JUST PURE GOLD I MEAN MY FUCKING COMPUTER JUST TURNED TO GOLD WHILE READING THIS