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Jeweled Pen


Just a girl trying to make it as an freelancer writer. Please check out my stories, both fanfiction and independent works! Any comments are deeply loved and you're all awesome.

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While searching through the Everfree Forest for flowers, Cheerilee comes across a strange young colt. Foul mouthed, vicious and angry, the child is like nothing she'd ever seen. More importantly, he claims that ponies are like nothing he's ever seen. Could this little colt truly be something called a 'drow'?

At the same time, Rarity is preparing to welcome her cousin, a young filly named Silverbelle, to her home. However, the preparations are interrupted by a small colt calling her 'mommy' and of obvious draconic heritage. With three new foals arriving on the same day, could it all be coincidence, or is something far darker on the horizon?

Special thanks to Hillbe for the cover image.

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Considering Drow are part of the Dungeons & Dragons franchise, wouldn't this be a crossover? Also, kudos to, as far as I know, being the first to ponify a Drow and put them into the world of Equestria. I can't wait to see more.

6506952 I'm sure someone has done it in story, probably. Thanks for the crossover catch, never thought about that. :) Thanks for the support.

6510220 Well, seeing as I can't write fanficition to save my life (I can come up with the ideas, but actually putting the metaphorical pen to paper is another story), I might as well help others with theirs. Not letting this story die, like so many other authors have let theirs, will be thanks enough for me.

This is one of the few stories that can cause me to want to burst into spontaneous song when I see it. I don't, because I am absolutely terrible at singing, but I want to.

I want to sing this song...

:raritydespair: MOMMY?
:moustache: PaPa?
:facehoof: Wut?

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:pinkiegasp: That's what you get with those sleep overs in the crystal castle!

:unsuresweetie::scootangel::applecry: cutie mark crusaders MATCH MAKERS YEAH!

:moustache: HONEST! I only touched her a little bit! when she asked!
:raritystarry: Oh I talked in my cushion? Dreaming in my sleep with dragons on my mind?
:twilightoops: DREAMS?!?
:rainbowlaugh: THE DRAGON DIDN'T MIND!
:ajbemused: late night cowboy?
:flutterrage: DISCORD?!
:duck::moustache:
* THINK OF ALL THE ART WORK WITH THE cmc that needs redone!

6510251 I don't plan to. ^^ This little thing is something that has sooo many lil mini stories I could make about it.
6510885 I'd be lying if I denied I hadn't thought that once or twice. >.>
6513301 I find it funny seeing as how that first picture will likely be an accurate representation of later... :P

:twilightangry2: SPIKE GET YOURSELF DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW MISTER! CASANOVA HAS SOME EXPLANING TO DO!
SO THAT'S WHAT SPIKES BEEN DOING AT YOUR BOUTIQUE!HELPING YOURSELF TO MY ASSISTANT
:raritystarry: BUT BUT BUT TWILIGHT?!?
:rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp::applejackconfused:

:moustache: HONEST I SNUK ONLY A FEW GEMS! WUT?:duck:

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this is awesome what's his name Rarity?:raritywink: claw:moustache:cool

“Why don't you ask him, that?” Discord said before snapping his fingers. Cheerilee let out a yelp as she found herself, once again, inside the hospital. How had she gotten here? What was... why was their screaming?

there

:moustache: claw's mine?
:twilightoops: Don't get any ideas Casanova!
:ajbemused: Ride em Rarity! Yee Haa
:rainbowlaugh: Bwa ha ha ha ha ha
:pinkiehappy: I knew Spike & Rarity would. . .
:flutterrage: LOVE ME!
:duck: HE'S NOT MINE yet. . .

:derpytongue2: special delivery

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6523292 Oh heavens no. I'm not sure Equestria would be ready for two claws! Or Claw trying to help raise himself... The horror... the horror!

I am trying to decode the message, but I want to know one thing, are any of the asterisks spaces?

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Spike & Claw fight for the last of the cookies ending Equestria as they know it.

6532790 The asterisks are wherever the ink is smudged, so it can be spaces, periods, letters, etc.
6532920 Sounds about right.
6522933 Thanks ^^ Always good to have some editors. :)

6534843 your 'dear past me' note

spike & rarity smoozed? claw with a mission? Equestria smoozed to death? claw is Sweeties?


what are you a word spider? weaving a web of OH snap!

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6535406 Dang, and here I thought I was being subtle. I will admit at least one of those is right. Cannot spoil it though!

I'm gonna put the following in spoilers, for those who haven't been keeping up with the latest episodes:

The CMC finally get their Cutie Marks, all of which look like shields, and Claw's mother has a shield Cutie Mark. Claw's mother has a white coat, Sweetie Belle has a white coat. Conclusion: Claw is the lovechild of Spike and Sweetie Belle...which explains why Rarity seems a little unhinged.

But wait... If Sweetie is the... What happened to Rarity? Oh, oh this is going to be tragic...

:pinkiehappy: DARTH PINKIE! fear me cause I breath funny !

:unsuresweetie: Claw has other siblings . . .
:raritystarry: Spike!
:applecry: Claw's Sweeties. . .
:moustache: Waaaaaaaaaaaaa.........
:scootangel: But she's the youngest
:raritywink: Stop fibbing
:unsuresweetie: Crystal, T, Lavender, Ruby, Fang, Spike Jr., Sparity, Gem Belle, Blue Diamond Belle, Charity and then Claw :raritystarry: Wut!
:twilightangry2: Rarity what are going to do with My Spike!
:moustache: Future Spike's going to be a very busy Spike!:raritydespair::facehoof:
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:pinkiehappy: Woof!

“Oh, no, it's nothing like that. I just have a lot of chores to get done. I fell a teensy tiny bit behind yesterday, with Discord and all. I need to clean out the otter cave before anything else, that'll take most the morning. I'll be over as soon as I'm dead.”

You... typo'd a little.

6581066 >.> Errr... spoiler? Okay, no really... oops.
6561554 Awww, thankies. ^^ I love the lil pictures. So many of them fit so well. :P
6543427 Just a little bit...
6539406 Eeyup. Just a lil, tiny bit unhinged.

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Spike awoke and saw the mess in the kitchen and started to clean up "Don't want to waste all this great food" scrubbing and munching he set to the task at claw,:moustache:

:unsuresweetie: cooking demolition 101

6581243 Okay do you make these pictures in response to the story or is the story being made in response to your pictures? Because you aren't the one publishing the story these pictures you keep posting confuse me.

6585379 Oh What came first? Scootaloo or the egg.....?

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Does this answer your question?

6586163 But I don't know which is the egg though, that's what I am asking.

6586444 Well, I looked at his deviant art page, a lot of the pictures were already there. I think he's just posting the pictures he thinks suit where the story is at said point. They're having no real impact on the story itself.
6586479 Am I correct in my guess?

6587050 correct,, some are 'stock' others are 'new*':rainbowlaugh:


*not as old:pinkiehappy:

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If the characters are in character the art will fit them too, but I can doodle a quickie if needed.:twilightoops::raritystarry::derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::ajsleepy::moustache:

:moustache: Sweetie or Rarity I'm so confused. . .Help!
:unsuresweetie: heads I win tails you win.
:raritystarry: A toss of a bit?
:rainbowlaugh: beats breakfast!
:facehoof: Spike any pony could be his mother,. . .
:ajbemused: me?
:pinkiegasp: me?
:rainbowderp: me?
:fluttercry: me?please
:trixieshiftleft:I?
:derpytongue2: I'll go see the doctor

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Frankinpony or the Dragon lady of ponyville,

So...wait...Val is going to be in the same class as, I'm assuming, Pre-Crusaders of the Lost Mark Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon?

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6625087 Oh no, this is post that. Sweetie has her cutie mark now. *pause.* Though... is still good. >.>
6609293 Huh, wonder how Trixie got in there... It would explain some things about Claw though.

now spit! ............,,,>\O.o/<,,,..........you're killing us with the diabetic overloadis !

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:moustache::raritystarry: Oh this is the good part!
:twilightoops: SPIKE!
:raritywink: It was quite an adventure!
:moustache: Next we'll try a little romance?
:duck: Of course my precious scales
:twilightoops::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::flutterrage::ajbemused: Wut?!

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:raritystarry: Auntie ? PLEASE!
:moustache: Yeah all aunts are like that. . .
:twilightoops: Precious ? Scales? precious scales?
:moustache: yes?
:raritystarry::facehoof:

Comment posted by josue deleted Nov 22nd, 2015

He started a cult?! That was hilarious! Please keep it up!

6656317 Eeyup. Sounds about right. :P
6656374 The colt has an odd amount of experience with cults. :P

6656378

:moustache: you can have my bed I'll take the couch!
:raritywink: you're my guest
:moustache: but I insist!
:duck: I insist!
:twilightsheepish: That argument lasted for hours but I fixed it with the power of friendship!
:moustache::raritywink: we shared!:facehoof:

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Sharing's caring! :pinkiehappy: You can share too much too you know! :pinkiegasp: Wowzers!

Since hes a warlock, who did he sell his soul to? Seems like demons with the summon but eh.

Oh so when val grows up that's when thongs go bad. :scootangel: won't say more as too not spoil.

so he is from the D.a.D Universe

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and add minc please buttkicking for goodness

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