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The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to have a sleepover, and a massive thunderstorm is about to hit. Little does Apple Bloom and Scootaloo know, Sweetie Belle is scared of thunderstorms.

When they find out, they decide to help, and uses some tactics Rarity used to use on her when they were little.

Edited: 10/11/15 For information from Season 5 Episode 18

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Comments ( 14 )

That's sickly sweet.

Sweetie Belle could use that for Spike.

I enjoyed this story. There weren't many errors that I saw, but I did notice that every time Applejack's name appeared you wrote it as 'Apple Jack'. There shouldn't be a space between 'Apple' and 'Jack'. Overall I think this was a pretty good story.

Well this was very cute and well written, but the ending did seem a bit too close to shipping for comfort XD

That was adorably cute!

Dat ending. So much d'awwwwwwwwww.

hmm....My reaction to this reaction might be a little overboard, but I can't find anything else that will fit.

By the way, this is a really cute fic

Cute story but I agree the ending seemed to head towards shipping. Might have been better if Sweetie said "Thanks girls" and they say "not a problem" and the fell asleep

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And that's a problem how? :trollestia:

6975869 cause they are kids. So you don't have a problem shipping kid ponies together?

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:applecry: I can never have fun...

Ehhh no, why? It's not like I'm doing foalcon... yet... do I dare to go down the clopfic path...

6975906 whatever floats your boat but personally in not a fan of shipping kid ponies but like i also said it was a good story

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I respect opinions don't worry.

Comment posted by Haoryu Changer deleted Feb 26th, 2016

I honestly really liked this! It was short and sweet.:twilightsmile:

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