I N T H I S W O R L D I T ' S K I L L O R B E K I L L E D . . .
All her life, she's been alone. Never had friends. The only ponies she had in her life were her sister and her mother... that is until her mother disappeared one night when she was a young filly and her sister never returned a few nights after.
Skye Mist always had questions about her past, but no one to answer them. When she finds her answers, will she regret it?
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Really interesting. I like it!
I'm going to guess it's Sombra. I mean, who else would be in a shadow form like that?
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As I said before, not telling!!!
6543770 Darn.
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DANG!!! If only they knew! I wanna give both of them hugs!
Okay, finished reading the story.
Grammar: 9/10
Pros: The characterization is going smoothly and the grammar is good. It has a nice touch to it, seeing that there is an Alicorn who has children. The Nightmare Moon thing really adds some tension to the story itself.
Cons: There is the fact you used Alicorns. It’s not a necessarily a bad thing, but it’s an overused concept and people might not even read the story, but they’ll still leave a dislike because of that.
Overall a very fun read. Keep up the good work!
Yay! Update!
And oh gosh! Poor Skye is going to be all alone! 
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We'll see...
Finished it in a few days before Christmas and was like 'Hmm, I'll publish it on Christmas!"
And thanks for commenting on all of the chapters so far. I appreciate it.
6768607 No problem!
I love it!!!
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Thanks!
Dang!
This went from sad, to cute, to sad, and cute again! YOUR MESSING WITH MY FEELINGS MAN!!! 
6789551 Who knows, maybe that's the point...?
Challenge accepted! Uh…the first song is a Barbie song called Always More, but I can't seem to figure out what the second song is.
6794571 It's in the same movie.
6795161 OOOOHHHH!!!!
Alright now I know! It's Right Here In My Arms. Thank you for the hint! 
6795906 Ding Ding Ding!
Ah snap! It's Changelings!
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Get used to it b/c this may or may not be a chapter promoting the sequel. Hint hint wink wink.
Oh! Awesome!
We're getting right to the good stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter! 
6833000 At the rate it's going now, expect the next chapter somewhere between now and next week. No promises, though.
Oh sweet sugar honey iced tea!
It's about to go down next time! 
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, and I'm warning you now, Rainbow might be more than over the top in the next one. I'm not exactly used to writing her; the others are kinda better for me to write.
Mhm
6866584 Yeah it took me awhile to get the grasp of RD she's a character that's stubborn yet compassionate yet agile and a complete fighter though I have met a real person who matches her personality perfectly.
Since no one has commented allow me i really enjoyed this chapter especially how skye mist treated the others like silly foals and resembled her mother then i also like how you are building a ralationship between twilight and skye not the romantic type but a tenuous type that could shift to friends or enemies.
Poor Skye! Having to see her mother act like that.
IT'S NOT FAIR MAN!!! 
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Yeah, I was really aiming for both of those. I'm quite pleased with how this chapter turned out.
6888796 More is to come...
6888813 well you met your mark and good I wait patiently
OOOOooooohhhhh!!!! So intense!
DARN YOU CLIFF HANGER!!! 
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Don't worry, I'll try to finish the next chapter soon.
6911831 Lol I'm guilty of writing cliff hangers as well, although I am not that popular, so yeah I don't get interesting comments like this...
its not that important when you like to write, for the sake of making a story. Even if no one reads it. Comments are only a bonus, however interesting.
6915223 I took a look at your stories on your profile. They look interesting! I will very much like to read them one day when I can!
6918224 ok angel, I hope you like them, when you get around to reading them. Skye Mist is the proofreader, and main feedback provider. So somepony/bunny else with another opinion will be quite interesting.
I'm so greatful for all that skye has done for me shes a great person.
well to comment and answer your question Skye it would be pointless to dodge the beam. Because as you can see when they reveal the second version of the elements you can see it actually homes on to them, so, in theory, the first gen elements would also do the same thing, considering that it's not normal magic, but ancient magic.
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I didn't mean they could counter it, but I mean, you could at least try, right? Standing there yelling 'Nooo!' won't really help you.
I mean, imagine this scenario: an assassin has cornered you and has raised a knife. You could a) stand there doing nothing while they are about to kill you or b) you could try to kick/punch them in the guts when they leave that opening.
Just sayin' but I would go with the choice that leaves me intact. And alive.
...Yeah, definitely that second one more than the first.
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