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Goldy 96273

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    Every heart has some darkness and some light in them. When two mysterious ponies come to town, these two embrace sides. However, the one who embraces darkness got there first. It is the one who embraces light to fix his damages that her brother has caused. Note: There is some cussing in this story. Be advised.

    Expect new chapters often!

    First Published
    14th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 24 )

    #1 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm going to send this thing in. Hopefully this story gives me some better rep than my other stories did. :fluttershbad:

    #2 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>746875

    Send it in to where?

    And i like it :D

    #3 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>747278 I posted the comment before moderation; that's what I meant.  And thanks! :twilightblush:

    #4 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>747310

    Ohh :) Ok! And you are welcome!

    #5 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh crap, I just realized something: Dark is a unicorn, and I forgot his horn in the picture :raritycry: :raritydespair: Hopefully that doesn't throw people off. :fluttercry: :applecry:

    #6 · Chapter 4 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm kind of sad that the story didn't get much publicity. I really hoped for more people to read it.

    #7 · Chapter 5 · 49w, 17h ago · · ·
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    New chapter! It's a bit longer than the others, and it also had a bit of foreshadowing. Hope y'all like it! :twilightsmile:

    #8 · Chapter 5 · 49w, 14h ago · · ·
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    random suggestion: you should like two endings to this like an ending where Dark wins the final fight against light and same thing but light beats Dark

    #9 · Chapter 5 · 49w, 10h ago · · ·
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    >>754340 Hm... I might consider that. Great idea! :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    New chapter! I have a few things I'd like to note, though:

    First, there will be only two backstory chapters instead of three. (Next chapter is the second part.)

    Second, thanks to the genius of PimpbabyDragon in a comment from last chapter, there will be multiple endings. I'm not saying how many, but there will be multiple.

    Third, I want your guys' opinion: Should I add a comedy tag? Light  is supposed to act like a teenager, and I do add quite a bit of humor is in this story. What's your opinion?

    Hope you enjoy the chapter! :trollestia:

    #11 · Chapter 6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    thanks to the genius of "ME?" oh you shouldn't have anyway a comedy tag might be good for the referneces like the arrow to the knee joke from skyrim but bad too cause it might throw people off at some points aswell

    #12 · Chapter 6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>769030 I don't care if you don't consider yourself a genius; that idea was brilliant.

    And I've decided not to add the comedy tag, because the whole story isn't a comedy, though it has some bits of humor.

    #13 · Chapter 6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>769162 hehe well if you any ideas you're not sure on ill be happy to see if you should add them or not, well its your fic so dont think ill be chaging your fic based on said ideas

    #14 · Chapter 6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>769513 Yeah, but I love seeing what the readers have to say; the story's for them, not me.

    #15 · Chapter 7 · 44w, 21h ago · · ·
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    After 13 centuries, I finally got off my lazy ass and created a new chapter. :yay:

    Hope y'all like it!

    Here, have a Wuvkip.

    #16 · Chapter 8 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    New chapter tiem :3

    Here's my random picture of the chapter:

    The next chapter will be fun! I've been looking forward to it for a while. I also changed my avaturd from Derpy saying "The number of pony haters is too damn high!" to my OC, Thunder Cloud. She has no story, and I don't plan on making one for her. Or at least publishing one. Maybe I can make one up, but not turn it into a story. I dunno.

    Oh yeah, and spoilers: There will be 5-6 endings. OMFG WHAT. Yes, I am telling the truth. It's interactive! :yay:

    #17 · Chapter 8 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    5-6 endings!? holy shizzle I only thought there would be 3, tops!

    oh yea how ya been? havent heard from ya in a while.

    #18 · Chapter 8 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>964239 I've been good, just really lazy. I was going to originally have 3 endings, but I decided that I would take each ending and split them up into two; two would have similar plots, but the ending of the ending would be changed from sad to not-so-sad. It's crazy, I know. But it'll be so awesome /)^3^(\ :rainbowkiss:

    #19 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...And new chapter is up. No picture, since I'm too lazy to put one up. Have fun reading! :yay:

    ...Or not, since this isn't one of my silly, random stories. It's srs bsns.

    #20 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 5d ago · · ·
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    at first I was like :pinkiehappy: But then I was like :pinkiesad2:

    #21 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...dafuq?

    #22 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>996999 :eeyup: (Don't worry, she returns later)

    #23 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    And just so everyone who favorited this knows, your favorite box will be molested when I publish the next chapters, since I'm publishing 7 CHAPTERS at once. 1 finale + 6 endings. It's insane... And that's why I love it. :pinkiecrazy:

    #24 · Chapter 9 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Okay, I'm going to put this on hiatus for a little bit; schools's starting soon, and I have very little motivation to type up the finale + all 6 endings. (Yup, 6 endings. :eeyup:) I'm going to work on other stories that I haven't made yet. Don't worry, the finale will come eventually.

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