Rarity's Makeover

An unlucky man is stuck in Equestria. He needs some new clothes, and what better place to go than Rarity's boutique? She wants a favor in return, though...

Contains: transformation, nudity and genderswap

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ferret

ferret #1 · Oct 26th, 2015 · · ·

Boy, someone's on her period!

Why did Twilight say it's all her fault? The magical backlash brought him here it didn't change him into a unicorn.

"Hello, Steve!"
"Who are you and how do you know my male human name?"
"I'm Moondancer and since you forbade her from doing it, senpai assigned me to try and help you and have something to do with you."
"Did you just use the word senpai unironically?"
"Hai! Do you like books? I brought a whole stack!"
"Just a sec. I have go to murder a purple princess."

Something Something Poni

Something Something Poni #2 · Oct 27th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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Even though it wasn't directly her fault, she indirectly caused this problem. And while Steve was a bit of a jerk, I think that Twilight Sparkle is the sort of person who has a very strong sense of responsibility.

I plan on updating my story in the future, but I am a bit busy these days.

Aatxe360

Aatxe360 #3 · Mar 1st, 2016 · 4 · ·

This isn't complete. That isn't even an open-ended conclusion. You just...stop.

Ardent Dusk

Ardent Dusk #4 · Mar 1st, 2016 · · ·

6571431 this is. Of the kind of ending for a one shot. This kind of story is meant to be a series, weighed short or long is your choice.

ZanarNaryon

ZanarNaryon #5 · Mar 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Spike blushed, before taking on a more solemn demeanor. You got it, Rarity! Oh, and bye, Steve! I hope you get some new clothes,” said the dragon as he left the boutique, dress in tow.
Missing "

ZanarNaryon

ZanarNaryon #6 · Mar 7th, 2016 · 1 · ·

6571431 If you plan on updating it, I suppose you should tag it as "Unfinished"

Iron Comet

Iron Comet #7 · May 5th, 2016 · 1 · ·

I can see the issue her for the man, and I can see his blaming Twilight. But in the end the solution is on the problem. He must go through the mirror.

Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #8 · May 14th, 2016 · · ·

The Carousel Boutique was so big on the inside. There were bolts of fabric everywhere with dresses on racks, or “Mane-iquins”.

i generally refer to those as ponnequins.

Telag

Telag #9 · May 17th, 2016 · · ·

I agree. The ending of this chapter isn't the ending if a book. It's left completely open ended, if you were going to finish it with this chapter I would recommend ending a little earlier, like just prior to the transformation. This is well written and I would like to see more of it, just keep it going and don't mark it as completed to soon!!

CelestAI

CelestAI #10 · Jun 19th, 2016 · · ·

This is not complete but it is a good beginning.

ponyatthedisco

ponyatthedisco #11 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · ·

It could use a little work perhaps, but it seems to me like it could be a diamond in the rough, also you should try to get this in th tf/tg group if you haven't already.

Sylica telca

Sylica telca #12 · Apr 17th, 2017 · 1 · 1 ·

Oh my god why is there only one chapter?? This is an awesome first chapter XD!! I wanna read more so badly

JazzyWaffles

JazzyWaffles #13 · May 13th, 2017 · 5 · ·

Geeze girls, it's sorta rude to immediately start using female pronouns. I mean, he still thinks of himself as a guy, and given his reaction to the events I think he'd be pretty peeved at being called "she"... Gotta at least respect the guy-turned-mare, ya know?