FIRST! Also, go Gilda! My Fav!

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hmmm... not bad bro. When the dad came in and was like Celestia, I'm tired, I thought he was addressing the mother and I was all like But yeah man. good story writing. :P

Third!

My heart is in pieces on the floor. There's my artery. Oh, and there's my spleen. Help.

FOURTH!

oh and YOU'RE GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY! poor flutters

Tracked out of pure epic.

Interesting. Aww, Fluttershy, that is depressing... Please do continue. I know it's gonna be so awesome.

This story makes me sad. I hope that it makes me happy by the ending.

I like being happy.

This is beautiful. You sir, have gained a follower. Can't wait for more, don't leave us hangin'! I always did imagine Fluttershy's younger years to be slightly traumatic.

>>668564668564 The next chapter's coming soon!

>>668050668050 *Fluttershy hugs you* Um . . . is that better?

I feel sorry for her, wish her abusive mum dead and am favouriting this even though Fluttershy's my second least liked character in the show. Funny how good writing and an interesting concept make one's general opinion obsolete to even them ain't it?

Good work mate, hope to see more.

That story... Gave me a feel... Almost like MLD... Continue.

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So we have ourselves some nice backstory and some nice setup for flight camp.

I am eagerly awaiting chapter 2 (well, I guess it's chapter 1 since this was the prologue )

Anyhow, nicely done, sir

>>668475668475 I'm horrible at writing sad endings, so you can count on something happy.

>>670542670542

Hooray!

An update already? Oh boy!

This made me almost as sad as reading all of My Little Dashie :(

Aw, Dashie standing up for little Flutters... all of my happy, have it all.

On second though, I should save up some happy for when they actually become friends.

>>668777668777

Much. I think I threw away my kidney in the clean up, though.

D'awww, that was cute. Fluttershy's inner doubts about, well, everything, are conveyed rather nicely.

F... friend?

yay

a friend for me, flu-sfhy.

I haven't D'AWWW'd this much since MLD.

Please, continue

On Hiatus?! Damn dagnabbit damnit.

Why do your stories interest me so? This is really good so far, i love how in depth you're going with Fluttershy's back-story. bold move may i add,but portrayed wonderfully. I am beginning to read chapter two,but i must say so far,TERRIFIC job again my friend.

>>957563957563 What do you mean "on haitus" Aw HELL no, not when this story is getting so good! Man i could read these stories for hours. I loved this chapter the most,it showed the true meaning of friendship and gave fluttershy redemption. Salute this man folks,for he has yet again accomplish what would otherwise be difficult to complete. I wanna see his take on a human in equestria!

>>983050983050 Salute this "man?" If you're talking about me, well, I'm a girl . . . but thanks for the salute!

>>987717987717 My bad i thought you were a guy so sorry . Anyhow you're still welcome!

>>988201988201 It's totally fine. How are you supposed to tell if someone's a guy or girl on the internet?

True that,thanks for understanding! For your kindness and good story you get a smiling twilight and moustache!

MORE MORE MORE THIS STORY IS AWESOME

MORE

>>13412631341263 Awww, thanks! It's on hiatus right now, but I might write another chapter soon.

>>13439991343999 yay

That feel when you get a notification for an update, but it turns out to be an edit...

Well, that was a big wave of and a rather vicious take on why Fluttershy's so flutter-shy. Good ol' Rainbow Dash, eh?

The crippling feels...