Grafix, an artistic pegasus, has a project on his mind that he will not miss the chance to create. A less than traditional way to ask a simple question; will it pay off?
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Grafix, an artistic pegasus, has a project on his mind that he will not miss the chance to create. A less than traditional way to ask a simple question; will it pay off?
good story, but I'm sorry, cause the entire time I was reading this all I could think of was "We don't need no education, we don't need no thoughts controlled"
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Lol, I've had tha song stuck in my head all day because of this. Thanks for the feedback, by the way. ^^
good to see it here. oh it's me by the way
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Oh, hey! Thanks for checking this out, it means a lot, actually.
puts the original to shame this is awesome and loved how you did it too. Was going to the post the original here but....
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I still think that you should! I, personally, don't think that this one was very good... It's jus so cheesy... Idk, but thanks for the kind feedback! Much appreciated ^^
I wish there was more to this story.
Not that it feels incomplete, but I'd like to know more about the couple's life.
I think both Fluttershy and Grafix went too light on Dash. Male or Female, there's no excuse for something like this to happen.
But again: I'm aware that it's just a plot device.
4.5/5
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Thanks for the feedback!
As for their lives, this was really only a fic for a friend that I decided to carry on for another chapter - it was never meant to be this long. >_< Either way, I see where you come from, and I appreciate the feedback, I'll take it into consideration the next time I write ^^
What a great story! Good work man
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^^ Thanks!
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funny part about that, i had a huge idea where and how the story will go on. like always great job.
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Thanks!