• Member Since 17th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Feb 26th, 2012

DTSSpaz


I'm a 14 year old armature artist and writer. My deviantART is located at: www.dtsspaz,deviantart.com Check it out! ^^

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Grafix, an artistic pegasus, has a project on his mind that he will not miss the chance to create. A less than traditional way to ask a simple question; will it pay off?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

good story, but I'm sorry, cause the entire time I was reading this all I could think of was "We don't need no education, we don't need no thoughts controlled" :rainbowlaugh:

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Lol, I've had tha song stuck in my head all day because of this. Thanks for the feedback, by the way. ^^

good to see it here. oh it's me by the way :pinkiehappy:

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Oh, hey! Thanks for checking this out, it means a lot, actually. :twilightsmile:

puts the original to shame :twilightsmile: this is awesome and loved how you did it too. Was going to the post the original here but.... :derpytongue2:

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I still think that you should! I, personally, don't think that this one was very good... It's jus so cheesy... Idk, but thanks for the kind feedback! Much appreciated ^^

I wish there was more to this story.
Not that it feels incomplete, but I'd like to know more about the couple's life.

I think both Fluttershy and Grafix went too light on Dash. Male or Female, there's no excuse for something like this to happen.
But again: I'm aware that it's just a plot device.

4.5/5

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Thanks for the feedback!
As for their lives, this was really only a fic for a friend that I decided to carry on for another chapter - it was never meant to be this long. >_< Either way, I see where you come from, and I appreciate the feedback, I'll take it into consideration the next time I write ^^

What a great story! Good work man :twilightsmile:

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funny part about that, i had a huge idea where and how the story will go on. like always great job. :twilightsmile:

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