So, I usually don't write, buut after reading some of these awsome fan fics, I decided to give it a shot. Wish me luck!
Twilight has ascended into an alicorn, and with that ascension comes new dangers and threats. What better way to hold back those threats than with a new body guard. But Twilight wasn't expecting her new protector to be a wolf, and neither were her friends.
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First! Anyway, this started off pretty well, so I'll be watching. Hope to see more soon.
oooooh boooooooy the next cpt should be "interesting"
am i correct in saying that?
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Lol, no not quite. It's not going to be one of those stories. Sorry to disappoint.
>>SilverWind102
ah well | it was worth a try right?
P.s. i like the idea of a wolf with wings... so awesome
Me like. Me stay. Me wait for new chapter.
The ONLY thing I could say at the end was.
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW SOOOOO CUUUTE
(P.s. this ship has set sail, PERIOD)
I wuv this soooooo much
AND HOW ARE THERE ONLY 51 VIEWS
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Ah why not? Oh well your story is really good cant wait to read more. ❤
i really wish i could have seen that fight...
It would have been epic.
This is still one of the more "interesting" stories I've seen on this site
Keep up the good work, even if its late the remaining (but I don know for how long) 25 of us will be here to see this beautiful piece of work
LoL get Rekt Ponies
6514724 I actually imagined it would be look like that:
0:26 (Couldn't find it in english, but it shouldn't matter for the fighting scenes)
Has shipping commenced? Yassss
6514830 Lol, yeah that's pretty much the way it went.
Looking forward to the image^^
6538320 Okay, it's up now! It's the last line in the chapter
dude I love your story!
6563570 Agreed, this is still one of the more "interesting" fic's I've seen so far
6515343 That avatar looks badass.
NUUUU FANDOM WHY U GIVE LESS VEWS
6613576 Lol, it's fine. I'll rule the world one of these days anyway.
6614789 yes and I will be there till the end
Gonna get his ass kicked if he keeps sleeping with all the mares...
"TENSION, SUSPENSE, ROMANCE AND ADVENTURE AWAIT... in the next chapter"
GOD DAMMIT
Haven't seen a good outsider story in a while. Keep up the good work.
6661092 I tell secrets in the morning. Read to bottom... Wait.... I HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?! FUCK!
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ah well
6670780 welp. This sucks.
Oh well
Expectant Migrains
... fucking heat waves man
There is a difference between being cautious and being xenophobic....they are treading a very thin line.
This is one of the few stories that I only had to read 1 chapter to know that as soon as a chapter comes out I won't wait a second to read it, and if it takes too long in between chapters I would reread the entire thing ( if I forget what happens ), anyway love your work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
6704331 Also unless I missed something, we finally get to know why his wings are metal in the picture
6704333 Thank you for reminding me, I meant to link a picture to the line.
YAY! SHIPPING!
At least you didn't make a villian that is too OP making the struggles of the protagonist(s) become useless or having to rely on cheap deus ex machina that make little sense.
The Admiral is his first mate/wife or something?
6706699 All in good time, my friend.
6704420 accidental helping ftw.
The only thing I can find with something related to crying in the title
I cant decide who your shipping with Silver, Twilight, Luna, Applejack, Rainbow or Celestia
Well an Army Slayer hu? Well that's some protection Twilight's got there. Well I mean its not like he can Kill Luna and Celesta easily right?
Well he seems nice enough at least. But yes Silver is OP but like you said it's not like he can't be killed.
well good chapter.
6728182 Lol, why not ship Silver with all of them? Yes, Silver will get all the mares!!
JK, but things with smooth out eventually.
6728568 Lol, I was actually gonna mention that in the next chapter.
6728913 Just so you know, I vote SilverxTwilight
6729235 SilverXOnyx or Ruppy for me. I just see them being able to handle him when they're fully trained.
he is a wolf
unknow magicc
You got myy interest
I smell this ship