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Habanc

Joined July 2011
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Sometimes I drool onto a page and people read it. Usually said drool has Twilight and Luna in it, or at least one of the two.

Stories (10)

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    My sister is an idiot. Her faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, appears to share her stupidity. Luckily, I am here to lend them a helping hoof. I can't /really/ blame them, though. They're so /adorable/ when they're clueless.

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  • A Clash of Lightnings
    Twilight is angry. Normally, a more calm approach would be useful, but when a pony... When a pony commits THAT, well, the chips are off the table. Justice must be extracted.
    3,426 words · 2,429 views · 294 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Restraint
    For Rarity, the words left unsaid are often the most meaningful.
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    Celestia and Cadence prepare for some revenge, but things don't go quite as planned.
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Princess Luna is sent to learn about the changes in her absence. But soon, with the help of another shy pony, she ends up learning more about herself and her emotions, than the land around her.

The Teen rating is here due to some moments of heavier shipping. Nothing explicit, or even close to that, but just a fair warning.

(This is really old stuff, yo.)

First Published
12th Jul 2011
Last Modified
11th Sep 2012

Comments ( 135 )

#1 · Chapter 2 · 163w, 5d ago · · ·

If there are any formatting mistakes (e.g. Odd indents, random barren tracts of nothing, etc...), I'm sorry. Taking it from OpenOffice and putting on here is bound to create some problems, and even though I attempted to fix them, some may be out of my ability to change.

Enjoy!

#2 · Chapter 3 · 163w, 4d ago · · ·

Man, this is one awesome read. I am a huge fan of Luna and Fluttershy. I just got done reading the third chapter, and I was blown away at the growing relationship between the two. I cannot wait for more!!!

#3 · Chapter 3 · 163w, 4d ago · · ·

Great story... btw... The pic, fluttershys arm is kinda weird. :/

#4 · Chapter 3 · 163w, 4d ago · · ·

>>132

Just noticed that, lol. Oh well, it still matches the scene.

#5 · Chapter 5 · 162w, 5d ago · · ·

What a hearthwarming story. Hope you'll make it just as good in the future.

#6 · Chapter 5 · 162w, 5d ago · · ·

Thanks, although I'm afraid it's almost complete. Just another chapter and an epilogue.

But, I've had such fun writing this, I wouldn't doubt a few more fics in the future.

#7 · Chapter 6 · 162w, 4d ago · · ·

This is fantastic, it's a beautiful and pretty convincing relationship being built between the two, and the finally is sweet.  I enjoyed it thoroughly!

#8 · Chapter 6 · 162w, 4d ago · · ·

I love it! It's well written, and their passion is conveyed so clearly I can almost feel it.

#9 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 4d ago · · ·

AMAZING!!! :D Love it love it love it! Fluttershy x Luna is WIN :D

#10 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 4d ago · · ·

Thanks alot mate, I've always loved that pairing too. It's a pity there isn't many Lunashy fics.

#11 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 4d ago · · ·

Great story!  I don't know whether to be mad at Luna for taking Fluttershy, or Fluttershy for taking Luna!

#12 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 3d ago · · ·

*theatrical bow and clapping*

Very, very well done! AMazing story. Fantastic writing. Had it all.

And could I get a link to the page you're addressing in the bottom?

#13 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 3d ago · · ·

I'm assuming you're talking about the "Dear Dead Frontier's Brony Brigade" comment?

If so, sure. I'll give you a heads up that the page is on Dead Frontier, a Zombie MMORPG. I don't play it much anymore, I'm mostly there for the brony community. You'd need to register in order to see it.

http://fairview.deadfrontier.com/onlinezombiemmo/index.php?topic=568939.0

#14 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 3d ago · · ·

Such a cute story, and I'm sad that its now over. Hope we can get a fresh story from you as well written as this one soon!

#15 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 2d ago · · ·

So much fucking Dawwww :D :D :D :D

#16 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 2d ago · · ·

*still clapping*

#17 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 2d ago · · ·

New picture... Thought it'd help with the D'aww output.

#18 · Chapter 7 · 162w, 21h ago · · ·

>>441 I was thinking the same thing.

#19 · Chapter 7 · 161w, 6d ago · · ·

I like it - not a pairing that I'd ever thought of before, but it makes a lot of sense, and they're a very sweet couple.

#20 · Chapter 7 · 161w, 5d ago · · ·

*applauds*

Well done, well written.

#21 · Chapter 7 · 161w, 5d ago · · ·

Thanks.

I'm currently revising it, so as to get it published on Equestria Daily. The, pre-readers, had, a, problem, with, my, commas, or, something.

#22 · Chapter 2 · 161w, 5h ago · · ·

good story so far nice cliff hanger just one thing  in the 11th paragraph it says people instead of ponies, i don't know if thats intentional or not

#23 · Chapter 4 · 161w, 2h ago · · ·

:pinkiehappy:

#24 · Chapter 7 · 160w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm blown away by this...

*applause*

I've been meaning to read another really good fanfic lately. I found it.

#25 · Chapter 7 · 160w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm glad you liked it.

I'm starting a new, darker story. I thought I'd try my hand at it, and the first chapter was submitted this morning.

#26 · Chapter 4 · 159w, 6d ago · · ·

I can feel.. Da MAGIKS

:coolphoto:

#27 · Chapter 2 · 159w, 1d ago · · ·

BAH, you used "People".... Otherwise I love this story.

#28 · Chapter 7 · 159w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh... Celestia-damn my poor editing skills.

I'll fix up the defacement of ponydom. Thanks for letting me know!

#29 · Chapter 7 · 159w, 1d ago · · ·

Alright. This story is... Dangerous levels of Cute. I mean, just, wow. Already three chapters in I thought that if it got much cuter, kittens would spontaneously come into existence around my computer.

It was an enjoyable story, I can't say I've ever been a fan of the whole "instant love" thing that's so common in fanfics, but it makes for sweet short stories to read so I can't complain!

#30 · Chapter 7 · 159w, 1d ago · · ·

Great story :rainbowlaugh:

Also, IT'S A BEAM! :flutterrage:

>thewisefish

#31 · Chapter 7 · 159w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1721

Fishy, I don't care, because one of us keeps getting banished to the moon by the forum moderators... And it isn't me. >.>

#32 · Chapter 7 · 158w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1730

ouwannaplaythatwayhuh :rainbowhuh:

Come at me bro :flutterrage:

Good job still

#33 · Chapter 7 · 158w, 4d ago · · ·

This I think has to be one of the most beautiful deep and meaningful fanfics I have ever read.

Fluttershy and Luna make the perfect pair and you pulled it off beautifully.

Soo very deep and meaningful Helpfully oneday we will all have a relationship as wonderful as this one is.

#34 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 21h ago · · ·

10/10, for sure. Loved this series, and love this addition!

#35 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 20h ago · · ·

That was beautiful. <3

#36 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 20h ago · · ·

I agree it is a beautiful story

#37 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 19h ago · · ·

First off, this story is amazing and you are amazing. I love the way you wrote this, and the proper spelling and grammar is a very-much-appreciated touch. The only misspelling I noticed was this:

"...and Fluttershy could find it more adorable."

This is the only error I noticed, and I only noticed because I do work around the internet as an editor.

Once again, A+ work, and I sincerely hope to read more from you in the future!

#38 · Chapter 3 · 157w, 8h ago · · ·

it's so beutiful:fluttercry::fluttershbad:

#39 · Chapter 4 · 157w, 7h ago · · ·

:heart:

#40 · Chapter 6 · 157w, 7h ago · · ·

First kiss with tongue.best story ever:heart:

#41 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 4h ago · · ·

I'm glad you guys are liking it. It was indeed a ton of fun to write, even if I did move horrendously slow writing it (It took 5 days to write this bonus chapter).

#42 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 4h ago · · ·

its a good story you deserve to take your time

:yay:

#43 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 4h ago · · ·

needs a sequel.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase:fluttercry:

#44 · Chapter 8 · 157w, 3h ago · · ·

Sequel...

I've toyed with the idea, but to be honest, where could I go with it?

I'd need a whole new problem, and more than likely it'd be adventure. But Adventure stories usually take longer, and longer stories don't sit well with me.

#45 · Chapter 8 · 156w, 6d ago · · ·

Birds chirped and sang happily, as a rabbit grazed amongst the grass Luna hadn't seen something so wonderful, yet basic, in over a thousand

years.

Period???

Instantly, the she felt

surprisingly calm.

WHAT???

Camelot.

Canterlot, Isn't it?

Why

does other ponies have to be so difficult?

Why DO!

Chapter one analysis complete. Please fix these errors as soon as possible. Not sure why other people missed those, But I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi. :pinkiesmile:

#46 · Chapter 8 · 156w, 5d ago · · ·

*Raises eyebrow*

#47 · Chapter 8 · 156w, 5d ago · · ·

I tend to notice huge grammatical errors. No offense.:heart:

#48 · Chapter 8 · 156w, 4d ago · · ·

None taken.

I'm more surprised this stuff got past the pre-readers I had.

Anyhow, fixed it up all nice.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 156w, 2d ago · · ·

:coolphoto: its da magixs

#50 · Chapter 7 · 156w, 1d ago · · ·

Honestly, this is the most romantic piece of literature I have ever read. My sisters are watching me as I continue to cry during this comment... You must have someone make this into a video. This is the best pony romance story I have ever read.:fluttercry:

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