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Paradise Oasis


Royal librarian of Dream Valley, writer of Ponykind's greatest generation!

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Trying to get a day off for herself and her sister, Princess Celestia has her and Luna disguise themselves as commoners in the earth pony town of Coltonville. But as they make new friends and try to blend in, Luna is left wondering if Celestia had another reason for coming here...

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 41 )

Intresting... I am curious to where this will lead, and politely request you continue this piece of literature. :moustache:

Hmm... and maybe I should catch up on... G2, G3? :applejackunsure:

(Aw, Twilights death brings sadness :fluttercry:)

A crossover with my most guiltiest of guilty pleasures, you are SO watched!:pinkiehappy:

Colour me interested, despite never following this series. I'm for some reason delighted with their country being an America-equivalent to British Equestria, at the same time as Equestria doubles as a generic "Old Country" from some Hammer horror movie.:moustache:

Nice to see a decent My Little Pony Tales crossover. And good to see that you made it fit into the FiM universe along with G1's Dream Valley.
This should be an interesting story, and can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

Celeste, you have no shame?:trollestia:

714336 Shame is for the weak mortals whom abandon you every so often years through death. :pinkiecrazy:

That was a great chapter.

Can't wait for the next one.:twilightsmile:

Oh come on Luna, let your sister expierence the modern technique of having no life!

You know she does have one, but let her see how it is!

Nothing quite like insulting the person/pony next to you without even knowing it! :pinkiecrazy:

And Celestia, you still have that floor cannon at the palace right? :trollestia:

...Celestia did you:trollestia: ohhh you naughty little minx

:facehoof: Celestia, have you no Genre Savy? You're in a moralistic teen comedy! If you did anything like THAT, you will end up in endless trouble!

Ouch! That must have hurt... even though she might have needed to hear it.

Erm...

I have seen this on fanfiction already :twilightblush:

1218926 It's there?! Time to hunt it down! :pinkiehappy:

Edit: Curses! It's just as completed as this. :(

Typo detected.

"Oh, stop teasing him, Teddy," Lance snortted, "But yeah, Lance has alwaysS been here to help us out... but he's there even more for Starlight!"
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Double typo!
(No beggining quotation mark)

Well, she seems like she's on a different wavelength than I am." Celeste looked thoughtful.
Well, it's before the first page break.
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Triple typo!
(Oh, so this is where that missing begining quotation mark went.)

""At least that is one thing I do not have to worry about!" A relieved Lunette sighed.
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:facehoof: Yes, things were going too well. Luckily a person expierenced in creating problems is the one conrtrolling this charade, Mr. Ignorance!

No, you Earth pony monsters! You cant just remove a pony's life like that! Thats cruel!!!!

Oh, the more I get into this universe and the stories the more I fall in love and get into it!

And thus, an innocent trip to the republic to just feel young again, in some way turns into that secret operation Clover was fantasizing about.

Just when my interest is wondering away, you yank it back with a merciless pull with no effort. Now I'm even moreso hooked onto this story! What happens next? I must know!

Wow. I always knew that outside Equestria's borders the lifestyle is more barbaric, but this is cruel beyond reason!:pinkiegasp: The earth ponies of the Republic are even more oppressive than the unicorns and pegasi in Pre-Classical era!:twilightangry2:

...I am never watching "my little pony tales" the same way ever again.

Judging from the guy above me, I wonder if it would be a splendid idea to link this story to some of those videos.
:trollestia:

Oh a cliffhanger...if you excuse me

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

Why do my best stories have such good cliffhangers!

Is it over already? And that last part was funny.:rainbowlaugh:

Dan

"He also almost stole Sweetheart away from you!"

I initially read that as "Stole your Sweet Roll."

Curse those guards! They're seeping into my subconscious!

Dan

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It damn well better not be over. The guilty remain unpunished. They admitted kidnapping and mutilating the children of foreign dignitaries. It's not merely an internal affair. Even if diplomatic protection rules don't exist, such heinous acts against foreign nationals demands swift and decisive response from all pony nations.

The kids need to start fomenting dissent and rebellion.

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I actually picture My Little Pony Tales as the golden age that existed before Discord appeared on the scene and AFTER G1 MLPs. Opposed to Firehoof who has the seasons happen in reverse order.

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I see My Little Pony Tales as being post-Equestria, a few thousand years after the events of "Friendship is Magic" in the Seventh Age of Pony Kind

Luna's speech is a tad off putting.

I'm still looking forward to more.

My sister mooned me! Bwahahaha!

Well you can't blame starlight really. Ah teenage years.

Nice reference to Prince and the Ponies. Yay! The Glow n Shows! I like how you made them as Luna's nieces

Oh my god! You can't let then do that Luna!

Oh! The GnS big fat mouths! Still, they have no right considering what they do to their children.

Glad things got wrapped up

These first two chapters do a good job at setting up the plot as well as the characters. This is important because, sadly, not all people will watch Tales coming into this. This isn't the fault of the communtity but more of the fault of guys like CR where they paint the show into a very negative light. Ignoring all of the good parts of the show (Please see the Nostalgia Chick's review of the first movie) and focusing on the bad. Like for instance, forgetting that the girls do actually have 'some' character. As you have shown through just a few pages worth of dialouge and description.

One thing that will always draw me into this world of yours is the idea that G1 and such takes place in the years after the show, when time is not kind to the world of Equestria. these type of stories will always fascinate me and get me interested, so seeing the world of Tales throught the eyes of Celestia and Luna is quite interesting.

God this is horriying, yet so awesome

Ahhhh, what a wonderufl trip down memory lane that this fic was. I loved the twists and turns that this fic takes, such as the discovery of what Coltonville was doing to the fillies and colts. I may have a few things I personally disagree with (The lack of earth pony magic, but that is mainly because a certain bad fic ruined the idea for me.) but it’s only a small problem compared to the more interesting take on the world.

Found this epic work again
orginally read it on FF.net, but it was unfinshed then.

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kind of ironic now, considering g5, don't you think?

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