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#1 · 133w, 5d ago · 3 · · Rarity ·

The title made me lose the game. :raritydespair:

So, before reading, some kind of Jumanji-esque thing you got here? I'll be sure to take a look at it.

#2 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>658357

about the game [youtube=CEgh8TUlpQc&feature=related]

And this fic seems good. I like

#3 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>658366

lol...

I treat it as more of a joke than anything else. But... lol...

#4 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

After reading. SexJumangi......

[youtube=m5RtlpXsl8k&feature=related]

#5 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>658368

[youtube=paw_2EJBzFs&feature=related]

#6 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

Yeah, gotta agree with Sorren. I liked the concept at first, but sex Jumanji... er, no thanks. Not my cup of tea.

#7 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

Jumanji, but sexual...

Well, at least it's original.

#8 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

I can dig it.

Gets better everytime Discord shows up. :rainbowlaugh:

Though "I'm Bi" felt like a cop out to avoid a struggle with Big Mac.

But all was good when Granny Smith was next.:ajsmug:

#9 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>658390 In all honesty, it was supposed to be a way to have as many sex-capades with as many characters as possible while still trying to have something resembling a story.

#10 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

An interesting premise, and I look forward to more. Let's see, there's only Applejack and Rainbow Dash left out of the Mane 6. I look forward to those.

#11 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Rarity ·

Wow... Should I feel ashamed of myself for reading this???:rainbowderp:

Oh well... This is good keep it up:trollestia: that's what she said:facehoof:

#14 · 133w, 4d ago · 1 · 1 · Big Macintosh ·

well, this IS gay :X

#15 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>660538 :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! YOU'RE SO FUNNY!!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#16 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Pinkie Pie ·

“Okay, said Pinkie

Should be “Okay," said Pinkie

#17 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>660845 Microsoft Word can be an asshole sometimes.

#19 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>658371 You know something? YOU suck!

#20 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>662448 Hey now, I hit the like button. Just becasue I don't like the prospect does not mean I can't upvote it for the writing style. Don't be too quick to hate me.

#21 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>662526 You reference Billy Madison, I reference Billy Madison. You see how that works?

#22 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>662539 Oh bleh, now I do. As a matter of fact. I have that very clip. here.

[youtube=22YWYAtcyEA&feature=related]

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: that is the best portal ever

"OH FU-":rainbowlaugh:

#25 · 133w, 4d ago · · · Rarity ·

next chapter is going to be epic

#26 · 133w, 3d ago · 2 · · Big Macintosh ·

If that happened to me:

*See's Big mac*

0_0

#27 · 133w, 3d ago · · · Rarity ·

>>667113 You lost the game. Literally.:pinkiesad2:

But seriously, that was one of one of the funniest responses I've seen on my story.

Dayum. That was intense.

And d'awww. Crying Chrysalis just sounds cute. Odds are she won't be hungry anytime soon.

So, who's next? Celestia? Luna? Both at once? :twilightblush: Maybe even... Discord himself? :twilightoops:

>>658378 BTW, how do you get to make YouTube videos as comments like that? I MUST know.

>>668352 "Odds are she won't be hungry anytime soon."

And frankly, neither will he. :ajsmug:

Comment posted by The sad mare deleted at 3:18am on the 17th of June, 2013

those portals just make me rethink the universe  

#33 · 133w, 3d ago · 1 · · Big Macintosh ·

“I’m bisexual.” “I’m bisexual.”........“I’m bisexual.”  

  MIND FUCK!

#34 · 133w, 3d ago · · · Rarity ·

My reaction from start to finish:

Oh cool, Jumangi! :pinkiehappy:

*reads a little bit*:rainbowhuh:

HUH!?

Then I skipped to 'Rarity' for... reasons:moustache:

"Granny Smith's pussy" :rainbowderp:

I immediately regret coming here.:derpytongue2:

Take care of yourself, goodbye!

>>669267 Me and my 22 likes and 47 favorites will do just that. :ajsmug:

mmm... Kinky...

#38 · 133w, 1d ago · 1 · · Pinkie Pie ·

how long is this fine gentleman's penis exactly?

>>677288 You might want to re-read Chapter 1.

Upthumbed JUST because of the tumblr that featured the boxer-unbuttoning scene :rainbowlaugh:

>>686174 Where is this? I must see it.

>>686180

WTFponyfanfiction

I got featured in this tumblr too, for "But... the gaaaaay, Dashie! The gay!" :rainbowlaugh:

>>686241

Actually I've been featured TWICE, both for audacious moments that were meant to be how they were- but neither have links anymore. I'm glad I got to follow the link on yours :ajsmug:

Fuck yeah, I love the Princest.  This fic has been awesome so far.  Are you by any chance going to put the CMC in this fic?

awesome side effects, yo

*ahem* This may have been brought up before, but you suffer from 'Wall of Text' Syndrome. You don't seem to know how to break paragraphs up.

EVERY time a different person speaks (like switching between the protagonist, Discord, Celestia, or Luna), you need to make a new paragraph. It's a fundamental rule of writing. If you ignore such basic rules, you trade quality for speed in putting the chapters out. Though, really, how hard is it to hit the 'Enter' key every time you switch speakers?

Also, I noticed that your tenses slipped up a couple of times between past and present tense.

I know you're probably enjoying writing this, but for the love of Celestia, get somepony to proofread these chapters before you post them! This is a good story, and I hate to see it degraded by poor writing skills!

This guy is right^

But I prefer the wall of text as he/she puts it so do what ever you want :scootangel:

Cos this is good:trollestia:

“It was just a group of horny bronies in some town in a place called Louisiana who casted some kind of black magic spell on a Jumanji board game and some of these My Little Pony figurines.  And voila, you now see the finished product.”

:pinkiecrazy:....

:pinkiecrazy: I wonder how many human sacrifices will be needed to build this game.... Hopefully none...

:pinkiehappy: Challenge accepted!

:pinkiecrazy: If you guys need me I will be busy with my dark magics, after all there is no rest for a Necromancer.

yummy thats all i can say

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