That last line... I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!!!

And with this, the game ends. What a wish.

Now I wish I'd found that game.

Awesome.

That was a hilarious final battle. Discord, killed by the guy jizzing on him!

So does that mean this guy is a literal sex god?

Great end to the story - it's been brilliant. When I finished reading this, I immediately thought 'GAME OVER'.

...........

I think I've never seen a self insert before where one guy fucks all of them... all of them! Normally I'm not a big fan of self inserts, but... ^-^/)(\^-^ *brohoof*

And to think this almost started out as a trollfic.
Very good, sir. I applaud your work. Frankly, I never thought I'd enjoy reading a story about a game of Sex Jumanji with My Little Ponies so much. Well, to be fair, I never imagined I would even SEE that story either, so...

I just want to say that I created an account here due to this story. I'm actually kinda sad that this story came to an end because it was beautifully written and I have never enjoyed a clopfic before, but this one was a literal C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER! Admittedly, I was lead here by the WTF Pony Fanfiction Tumblr, but I am 100% glad I found this story. 9.75/10.

nice work

well guess that's a wrap, but sad that it's finally come to a end.....
Almost started to rage at what discord did to chrysalis, celly, n luna.....>.>...mostly chrysalis.
Wait, if he's literally god-like in their world, then technically he can knockup luna/others now.......well the possibilities are quite a few.....

Luna. i'm coming
and the story's ending.......
gona miss it, too bad there wont be more extra chapters

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Jumanji?

1124173 Sex?

1124179 You seem to have swayed me. I really just can't stand Jumanji anymore. It was okay the first couple of times, but the next hundred were pretty horrible.

An enjoyable read from start to finish.

ok off to the cold shower

diddnt want to read it.... my friends kept bugging me to read it.....
eventually i just thought th01.deviantart.net/fs45/300W/i/2009/143/9/e/Futurama_Bender_by_halosnachtariff.jpg

and now ive read the whole thing i can say. ponyfictionarchive.net/images/gallery/galleries/Animooted/rainbow%20laugh.gif
this be some funny shit though im currently somwhere between laughing and this
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dude you hav earned a watcher

also...
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1117829 the author never there wouldn't be, so can't lose hope that there might be

all i can say is

This...I...UUhhh...Wow...Excuse me whilst I clear my history.

I feel violated after reading this....but very satisfied. Loved it

Everyone who read the title of this clop-fic
Lost the game.

Well played author, well played.

Why is the cover art the Jamunji board?

dude THIS WAS SO AMAZING I WAS LAUGHING AND CRYING ALL AT THE SAME TIME AS BEING EXTREAMLY UNCOMFORTABLE AND THIS HAS BEEN ONE HELL OF A RIDE (no pun intended). and the mane six and myself congratulate you on your achievement

OH! and i almost forgot derpy

Comedy, ClopFic, Romance, Adventure All put together in one Book! Made me smile many times upon reading it!

ITS OVER!!!!!

Oops, comment overloaded Again

2632406 Well, today is May 26th, which is a year to the day that I registered for the site, so I thought I'd share some goodies in celebration.

And no, everything was forgotten. The story will continue as "normal."

2632433 LOVE IT!

needs a sequel; if possible

2633838

that was... um, interesting? XD

truly inspiring my friend. i only have one question, what might that dark ritual involve or be called? justwondering for no reason in particular also where does one purchase said game board and... mystic gem.

2495141 did you even read the story?

2929235 nope

2929465 lol it has dat sexy pony booty in it and dat shining armor dick

2929560 meh

Most fucked up boss battle ever, but still found the story amusing!

I loved it dude please make extra chapters, I know im only 15 but who gives a hell, I love your thought, you are a most excellent author and deserve just as much attention as the guy that wrote mld, I literally cried when luna died

Having read the whole thing:

1 The sex scenes themselves need some work. (I don't know what advice I can give you here - besides reading good authors to learn from them) After Chrysalis I feared the chapters would become too repetitive, and some of them were - fortunately you got several flashes of real creativity (I think Vinyl Scratch chapter was my favourite in this regard)

2 If it was just the sex scenes, nobody would read through 27 chapters. Fortunately, there is everything else You know how to do humor, a bit of drama here and there and sometimes a bit of pure wtf to catch the reader off guard.

3 If there was anything I felt was missing from the story... I guess Fluffle Puff. With the general weirdness she generates (and the tendency of her fur to be much larger on the inside) she could have made for a hilarious high level challenge.

BEST FUCKING STORY EVER

This is like the 4th time I read this and I can't get over it!!!!!

Who else feels like Luna is going to appear everytime they go to take a shower now?

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Time Warpin'!
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4217746 dude....I want that gif.

4141165 *raises hand*

3832839. I get the duke nukem reference (from this statement, you can tell I'm a 'sit on your ass all day and do nothing but game' kind of guy ... and anyone else catch the pun in my statement?)