The Power Of I And I - Shadow's Fall

Twilight Princess, you say?

Sweet Celestia, I am such a nerd.

-Tricondon

It's very intriguing. Can't wait to read future chapters to answer some questions you raised. I like the idea.

This has all the makings for a great story. Keep it up!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

I really like it

Now it appears that you forgot to upload the second chapter, be a dear and fix that

Promising so far..

You, my friend, have a lot writing to do...

41 likes and no dislikes on your first story. You seem to be doing rather well.

I like that this is an original concept.... well, sorta.I certainly haven't seen anything like it.

If you could say anything on how long it will be until the next next chapter, I think everyone here would be quite pleased.

It might be a good idea to use italics for character's thoughts, as this is generally accepted throughout FIMFiction so you wouldnt have to explain at the start of the story.

Also, this: "Meanwhile Near the Outskirts of Ponyville" should have a comma.

Cant wait to see more of this!

one word more you must continue

the prince is evil! evil i say! EVIIIIL!

Awsome story! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Forgive me for mistaking the title for a Legend of Zelda game.

Rarity knows that one must never wear the same emotion long enough for it to go out of style.

Do you mind if I use Caesius(i'll probably only use the name as a reference in my fic, if you allow me that is)

>>666992666992

Go ahead.

>>678087678087

  Thank you

OMG NEED MOAR!!!!!

Very intriguing concept, hopefully gets an update soon.

Sorry about the delay! I've been extremely busy lately. Hope you guys enjoyed it. I'll try to update as soon as I can!

-Mekon

7 must be your lucky number

I say! If I could give you cookies I would.

Extremely busy? In future, it is a good idea to mention a delay such as this in the comments. I asked you on the last chapter if you had an estimated time-frame or an explanation as to what is holding you back, even if it is something as simple as work. It would be good for everyone if you were to reply to comments like this. People do actually read the comments on here, you know. I checked the comments 5 times for updates!

Anyway...

THIS IS JUST AS AMAZING AS THE LAST CHAPTER! Why everybody on the site has not read this yet I do not know. This should be in the feature box. People need to stop judging stories by their cover.

This was easily worth the wait, and I knew that, but I would have liked to know what caused the wait. I sort was a bit afraid the story was discontinued. Your lack of comments disturbed me. Anyway, the story is amazing and you have no reason to doubt it. My only suggestion is to reply to peoples comments so they know what is going on.

This should be on the princess twilight group page.

I enjoy it when twilight is handed the keys to godhood... I hope that's what just happened because that always makes for fun times.

Epic.

Oh No Twilight!!!!

So she is a princess? And basically has god-like powers?

EPIC!!!

Wait, wait wait...

So that shadow is EVIL? Huh? I thought shadow was a mix of light and dark- neither of which is evil. It's also common sense that a positive and a positive do NOT make an evil.

I'm confuzzled.

1 word NICE

anyway keep it up

>>741248741248

Haha, I would love some at the moment. I'm so hungry right now, but lunch isn't for another two hours!

>>742043742043 neither of which are inherently evil but both have the capacity. It's a major theme in my most recent story, too

Beware Twilight it is THE GREAT SHADOW... why does Latin make everything sound so much better.

>>742043742043

A concept or power doesn't make something innately evil, its the being that misuses these powers that creates evil. Shadows are not evil, but somepony or something can manipulate them to their ends. The user is evil, not the power.

Ever watched Teen Titans? A main character, Raven, basically has dark demonic powers, but she isn't evil at all. In fact, she saved the world once from her own demonic father. Conversely, a villian named Dr. Light literally uses light to commit crimes. Hence, it is not what their powers are associated with that classifies them as good or bad, it is how they use their powers.

Don't worry, I'll to explain more in later chapters. Hopefully this helps a bit.

>>741252741252

hehe...sorry about that. Didn't mean to alarm. I'm not really used to this website's story format yet, and I keep forgetting that I can post my own comments days after I update to keep everyone informed.

Anyways, I'm flattered that you really enjoy my story and avidly look for an update! I've been occupied with catching up on my other stories (ffnet), my new job, relationship stuff, family visits, thesis and a myriad of other duties. Trying my best to balance them all out.

Oh and  thank you for the very kind comments.

>>742198742198

Right? Latin is so much fun to use! It makes everything sound cryptic and powerful.

>>742337742337 Placere transire butyrum

Whoa will Caesius survive this battle.

>>742348742348

Why of course.

Panem numquid vis aliud?

>>743129743129 non gratias *shoves butter in mouth*

Caesius countered, her horn beginning to glow.      Shouldn't that be his

>>743411743411

Absolutely correct. Edited and fixed. Thanks!

What I read:

“si..si..sisters!???” she exclaimed, unable to believe the idea, “Lies! That's Impossible!”

What I pictured:

“si..si..sisters!???” she exclaimed, unable to believe the idea.

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m22jdjByCT1qjncju.gif

Now this... this is most interesting. Do want. Very much do want.

I am particularly impressed by the worldbuilding you've devoted to this. I'm a bit of a worldbuilder myself, so I can appreciate how much effort it probably took to think it all out.

I look forward to more of this.

>>747642747642

Invader Zim!

>>750290750290

Thank you. I do put a lot of time to creating a background story and establishing a central plot.

I'll try to update as soon as I can! I got some of the 3rd chapter already started.

>>754144754144 You type faster than I do man. much faster. I tip my hat to your expedient mental and literary processing capacity.

I just found this story, and I love it.

WHen do you think you'll have the next chapter out? I can't wait.

>>790466790466

Hopefully in a few days, I'm currently in the process of editing, revising, and re-writing

>>800366800366

One word... Fangasm!

Writer's nightmare....computer crashed...and all doc's lost.

That's why there haven't been updates lately. I took a week break to relax and calm down about it.....but I've started up again.

Hopefully, this won't happen again.

>>886277886277

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png

*Serious note* Life happens and I hope you get everything back in order soonish.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

... 2 in the morning... well sleep can wait. Glad to see this update again.

but Umbra was a as strong,     Delete the A

You must guide Twilight, without both of your there to help her,     you

Who needs sleep anyway?

Ah... that reaction there... priceless.

'Super secret flower club that goes around the world keeping the balance with their magical powers!' That's right Twilight, you're the Avatar! Now go beat the fire lord.

Keep up!

*4 in the morning*

Welp time to hit the hay- Oh wait.. *starts reading*

Great chapter!

I saw this updated and was like

Image: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-JlZsPCRltKI/Tx1c2Z5jAmI/AAAAAAAAAEI/nxmb-7Jxt84/s320/rainbow%2Bdrool.jpg

You did not disappoint. Good job.

A wild update has appeared!

You used Read!

Wild Chapter was defeated.

Won't Midna be mad that Twilight took her title?

Awesome chapter, i love the part

>>934478934478

Haha whoops! Got right on that. Thanks!

Sleep what is sleep?

>>934393934393

Sleep?

Thanks!

>>934506934506

Freaking out Twilight is funniest Twilight.

>>934887934887

Haha I a lot at that pic.

Thanks so much!

Great update is Twilight up to being the princess of the well twilight?

so good! want MOAR!

>>937835937835

Quite! That is the joke after all.

>>938479938479

Already started!

congratz on making the first Alicorn OC I actually liked and at the mention of Trixie without using her name

>>939732939732

Why thank you!

A little splash of 'the great and powerful Trixie' never hurt anypony.

>>934988934988

Reminds me to add in a pokemon reference later!

i know another thing that rarely mixes pinkie pie and the laws of sanity and physics

anyway keep it up

What's this! An update so soon?!? As in less than a week!?!

Hope you guys enjoy!

Had a good laugh from a few parts in this chapter. Nice update, was a bit surprised it came so soon. You plan on doing that more often?

I was just thinking that. No way he coulda updated twice in one week, but here it is! Thanks for the update, but you're spoiling us.

When can we have more?!

Surprise alicornation may not go down well with some people, but I am not one of them.

Anyway, back to buisness...

SQUEE!

Still amazing writing quality, I get fangasms every time this updates. I cant wait to see where this goes!

Trollestia strikes again.

Well... Twilight freaked as expected. She has to live up to expectations after all, and with the extenuating circumstances... yeah.

AHHHH I can't wait for more! I love these kind of stories!

I request for more, sir.

Where is the pokemon reference that I was promised?

she found it strange that the floor seemed to be closer than she expected    

Shouldn't that be further away? Seeing as how she's taller now?

Freaking Out Twilight is best Twilight.

>>957247957247  

You misunderstand. Since her legs are longer and her bed is the same height at the moment, the floor would appear to be closer than she expected since her legs are that much longer, hitting the floor before she expected to.

Though, you do have a very valid point.

I admit it is partially my fault. That part isn't the clearest. I'll go back and adjust accordingly to provide for both parts.

>>957887957887 Maybe you should just say her bed seemed shorter

and now twilight faints again what is this the 5 time now anyway keep it up

Well now, it doesn't seem to be stated, how much taller is Twilight? I know not a big thing I am just curious

Soooo, this is the only thing I can think of right now: I have no strong feelings one way or the other!

>>956525956525

Haha it surprised me too. And maybe. I'll have to see.

>>956592956592

Soon enough soon enough hopefully. I do feel so much better when I update sooner.

>>956631956631

Surprise Alicorn Time

Thanks so much!

Celestia is such a troll.  What will happen now?

>>956650956650

Trollestia!

>>956759956759

Of course! It is Twilight after all.

>>956797956797

Could be happening sooner than you'd expect.

>>956784956784

Thanks so much! Glad you're liking it so far!

>>957149957149

Soon. Very soon.

>>958776958776

Fainting and Twilight just seem to go so well together!

>>970000970000

I'm desperately throwing my money at the screen but nothing is happening! D:

Oooh what a nice way to start the day, under the promise of another chapter soon.

Thanks you!

>>970035970035 Well which is it? Is it soon or very soon?

>>971877971877

It's not going to be in the next chapter(since it's finished ) but I am planning on adding it to the chapter after the next! So I suppose that would be 'soon'.

>>968719968719

Indeed! I have so much fun with her!

I can't sayyyy! But you'll find out soon!

>>971912971912 I... suppose that is satisfactory

100 Favs or ups or something

You guys are craazzzyy!!

Once I get out of this car, I'll post an update in celebration!!

>>982012982012

That would be 'likes'. Hit the stats button to see favs, which are at 149 at the time of this post.

>>983063983063

Ahh! Both are amazing to me! and here's the update!

And it's really early! Enjoy! And I hope you're all enjoying the Olympics too!

Aww, so cute.

Though I would like to mention the scene with her friends was a bit sub-par compared to the rest of the chapter due to it mostly being a short response from each followed by Twi's reply.

>>983901983901

Ah you think so? Well I did rush a bit on that part since it was a bit of a segway. But! It's time to go back then! Thanks for the opinion!

>>983901983901

Well I've re-edited and added some parts in! Hopefully it's better.

>>984092984092

Yes, more variation in the bits for each character helps a good bit.