That was great! I really enjoyed this story, it was a fun read. No worries about your English, I didn't see any problems.

Well, if it means much, I would have had no idea about your English if you didn't point it out.

I just finished reading it! Never thought about that pairing but Cherilee would be someone Twilight would have interesting conversations with, at least!

I wouldn't worry about the English at all, there are a couple of things that I notice from time to time because I suffer from the same thing: using an expression that's not used in the same way in English, but it doesn't take anything off the story, nor does it clash unless you look for them.

Keep up the good work!

AWESOME

Really fun fic.

There should really be more Cheerilee fics, there aren't enough.

Very good

awesome that you put real life, sexual situations into mlp and managed to make it work in a way that didnt disturb or scar me but rather made me laugh

>>19301930

im with you

Love it, especially the part about Deadpool. Why is it that I think Pinkie Pie would be the author of that series in the MLP:FiM universe?

Love this story, although the only thing I would suggest is coming up with a different name for the Jeager.  Imean if we're going to do word play on the names of famous scientists and writers, we could at least do the same for the alcohol mentioned in the story.

But yeah, amazing story, mate.

rating: everyone? wtf...

>>46424642

Hey there! What do you mean?

>>46724672 why is this rated "everyone". it should at least be rated teen. just hit edit

>>47194719 Fixed!

Sorry, this is a new feature that wasn't avaliable when I first entered the website (I am one of the first authors to use FIMFiction). I just fixed that, don't be mad at me

Hmm, they get drunk together and have some fun.

4.5 stars, good job.

Excellent!

We need more like this.

I had a...

Pint of beer and a shot of scotch,

Bottle o wine and a bourbon on the rocks!

I had one glass on me right and another on my left,

I looked that puppet in the eyes and said,

"Give me the test"!

-Brobodigan Bards "Jedi Drinking Song"

It felt so right to add that to the comments

I adored the story!  The relationship between Cheerilee and Twilight was relaxed, comfortable, and natural.  

Your writing is superb, full of rich details.

Well done!

This is glorious.

5/5

Absolutely amazingly awesome 5 stars

That was AWESOME!

haha this is sweet!

I'm a student teacher for a fourth grade class, and the teacher and I do this regularly. Only with less makeouts, which sucks. Still fun, though.

Good work. I loved reading this when I'm bored. Always gives me a smile.  

Hello I am planing on doing a set of readings of racy to smutty pony fictions. I was hopping to garner your permission to use this as a first installment, (if that is all right with you). I plan to have ratings and what not of stories and I do plan to be harsh and use a 10  point system for rating of he fics. If You are interested or would not mind, please respond to this.

From a fan Sean Cloperey

>>101583101583

Definitely! By all means man, go ahead. Don't worry if you are too harsh, I like my reviews to be rough

Thank you, and let me know when it's up!

>>102728102728 You like it rough? That's what she said.  [Sorry, couldn't help it xD]

I think you've never been drunk o0

Nobody, NOBODY get's drunk after a quarter of a bottle of jägermeister. Srsly o0

“‘...But then he grabbed onto the position of powering the exchange between the different members that have come to the chamber in order to signing the treaty’?”

I couldn't agree more with Twilight, I mean Diamond Tiara has terrable grammer.

Nice work man. Keep it up.

>>114754114754

Ok, I can agree with that. But, what if it was replaced with Jack Daniels?

Just saying.

“Alright Twi, now we move onto math.”

“Oh, good…” said Twilight before clearing her scratchy throat. “How many do we have left?”

“Forty.”

“Oh, Celestia…” Twilight groaned as if in pain, “that’s terrible.”

Oh man, did this make me laugh. I didn't think anyone would reference this meme. xD

Also, I meant to ask - where did you get the picture from? I must admit that I really like it.

Twilight's got it bad, got it bad, got it bad, she hot for teacher

Brilliant! Four star!

You had me at "correction fluid"

A pioneer of the Twilee ship. But there have been pretty much no more fics of this pairing. D:

what was Sweeties pic

Awesome I loved it it was funny and sexy ..

do another installment ...

I'm late to the party, I guess. I was looking for some Cheerilight and, this was definitely a good read. Fun stuff.

Oh I accidentally messed up Sweetie Bells drawing but its okay since I can make her do it againjavascript:smilie('');

I LOLed at Sweetie Belle's book report.  

I like this fic and how you ship Twilight and Cheerilee (I haven't think of that, but I'm okay ). And no sadness when they leave, just... good memories

I was saddened by the fact that they were friends with benefits.

‘...But then he grabbed onto the position of powering the exchange between the different members that have come to the chamber in order to signing the treaty

I work as an editor sometimes and this made me cringe.

>>995244995244

Me too

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png

My only complaint would be that Jagermeister/Jagermareeister is bucking awful.

The only alcoholic beverage I don't seem to keep down...

He had a red and black costume, and carried two katanas with his mouth.

Good ol' Deadpool

So they do 'this' more often, yet they never kissed? I'm confused...

awesome re read .. oh no that book that sweetie pie read

Such an old story I see but it was still very entertaining to read. I loved all your puns and the sexy kisses. really wishing I had a stallion friend with benefits. Overall was very enjoyable and pleasant to read.