Twilight never really thought about her human counterpart when she was in the human world saving the day.
Unfortunately for her, that counterpart is definitely thinking about her. And how to make her stay gone.
(Note: This is my first story in five years and my first-ever MLP one. Comments are all very much appreciated! I know this might not be the most original concept ever, but a cursory search says no one else has done this particular one. Tags added as necessary- it's not totally planned out yet.)
(3/8/16: Tag changed to Equestria Girls from Human and character tag added.)
Chapters (3)
this looks like a really good story. i love this concept but its underutilized on this site. keep doin what your doin!
This should be interesting. Instant Fav. and thumb up!!
6368792 aaaaa, thanks! it took me a looong time to work up to actually writing and posting this, so it's great to see people liking it
Obligatory musical reference:
6370170 I love that song! (And the show, I've really got to watch volume 2)
6371029 Volume 3 is in production as a tribute to Monty's death earlier this year.
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7006272 aaaaaaaaaaaa
I'm glad you like it!!
This seems kind of interesting. Good luck with it.
7052121 Thanks!
(and, thanks for the fav too!!)
I'm liking it so far! Keep it up!
7107416 thank you! I try to get some writing in where I can, but with school and all, it's a bit tricky.
I'm happy to see that people like it though!
Why is she wearing armor? That seems kinda random.
7261512 It's supposed to be ceremonial armor, like the pony Princesses wear. I wanted her to have that sword in place of an actual unicorn horn (I love Friendship Games, but I'm sorry, an actual horn sticking out of their forehead looks really strange), and then she needed something so she wouldn't just be in her lab coat with a sword hanging down, and then it...kind of snowballed. The pony regalia just didn't seem like it would translate well to person anatomy.
Interesting. Tracking!!
7432776 Oh, sheesh, now I've really gotta finish Chapter Four. :x (thank you!! I'm glad you like it so far ^^)