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EXOLIEF
I mainly write porn, it's all in good fun.
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Let me tell you, this story was fucking great. Continuation is of order. And I need to change my drawers...
hmmm this has my interests.....in a way....so ill kepp track and heres a +1 for your efforts
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Already workin on second chapter. Just wanted to upload the first one first :P
Don't read this kind of story too much, but it was pretty good I have to admit! I second the continuation!
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Thanks! I try to uphold some sense of decency and actually WRITE WELL, but I still have fun, of course. I appreciate the warm reception.
New, interesting, and freaking hilarious! I do like the concept of humans being able 'dispense' magic.
655301 ah we meet again good sir
655425 likewise
While reading this I couldn't help but get a slight errection
. I cant wait to read more!
HAHAHAHAHA i LMAO at the letter
. GO ON! I DEMAND MOAR!
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As Twilight would say...YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! Besides being the right mix between lustful, steamy sex, some comedy and a follow-able storyline, you have made a great story here. I wait in all earnest for the next chapters.
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That is indeed what I was aiming for, glad you like it so much :D
Next chapter contains
and 
scenes, for those who are curious :P
Hmmm... this is a first, a clopfic I wouldn't mind following, and I will...
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tracking this story
u deserve a like
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i thought he would go "....what the fuck"
why is everyfic a clopfic
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Umm, they're not? Just guessing, I think the ratio of "fics with sexual activity in them" to "regular fics" is probably like 20:80. For every 1 fic with sexual content in it there's about 4 ones without it. And it's not like you HAVE to read this. I made sure to clearly label it as "Mature" and tagged with "Sex."
Can't please everypony, but I can live up to standards of quality I set for myself
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Excellent...I have a feeling that the Pinkie and Rarity ones will be my favorite
I had a bit of a hard time getting through the awkward princess rape bit, but I see great potential in this fic. I always love a good "human in equestria" fic. Keep up the good work
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I wouldn't use the term "rape" at all, but it's clear he's surprised and unsure of his first encounter.
You know, while people are easily perverted, they're not always so gung-ho about random pony-human sex (that's something most clopfics completely ignore because you know "DURR HURR I CAN WRITE SEXY THINGS, DURR"). It takes some getting used to :P
BONER! WHY DO YOU BETRAY ME?!
Keep Goin'
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You got it. 
Sadly, the second chapter is taking me a lot more time.
Good news is that it's looking like it's going to be TWICE AS LONG.
So, keep an eye out for it soon?
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Twice as long, you say?
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I had to.
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The fact that it was a threesome of sorts turned me off, but reading it shows you have some promising talent for smut. I'll be watching to see where this goes!
Because YOU KNOW DAMN WELL WHAT JUST HAPPENED
Can't wait for more chapters! Besides, you know what they say!
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Ahh, thank you. That warms my heart
WHY CAN'T THIS BE CANON
Cant wait for the next chapter, and man the entire tine I was reading this I felt ashamed of myself for having an erection.
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You make it sound like a bad thing :P
Also, glad you enjoyed it. Took me a good two and a half weeks total to write it. I'm a good writer, I'm just SLOW
Um... I don't know how to put this but... this is actually really interesting, lol. I feel horrible for enjoying this so much. CURSE YOU!
Don't keep us waiting so long for the next update... I wanna know where this ends up!
732542 heh its not a bad thing it just feels weird getting a Bonner to ponies, but for some reason I'm starting to care less.
I like how he is now questioning the situation. It aims to good plot and character development (for a clopfic, heh).
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Thanks, I appreciate it.
A story CAN have adult content in it and still have an engaging plot with strong characters (he IS human after all). I'm glad people still look for quality in places they don't expect
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Hawt.
...Shut up boner...
Nope.
I sense the mares in heat coming up soon...! :3
*looks down* Shut up boner
No
>mfw new chapter
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Anyways, this was absolutely fan-fuckin'-tastic.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Which, doesn't have to, you know, be twice as long as the last chapter.
If that's, um, okay with you and everything.
don't hurt me.
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Heh, trust me, I'll try not to write so much next time. You never know what'll happen though :P
Would've been a little more convincing and believable if he was a little more skittish and awkward about the sex powers reveal and the human 'super pony power-up semen'. It was like he was a little too into it to really be surprised at all. Everything before and after that was A-okay.
The ultimate wish fulfillment fanfic that has ever existed! {picks up a rolled up newspaper} Bad fanfic writer, bad! There's absolutely no proper development and pacing at all!
This is like waifu-fagotry multiplied to the umpteenth degree, and it's another typical HiE story that's been done a million times before. Yawn.
734343 Read Xenophillia. That's how you do character development for a human, not this... whatever it is.
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I hate to disagree, man, but there IS indeed development and pacing. The point of the first day was that it was rushed and overwhelming, cue the response from the lead character of running away when he fully realizes what he did.
Plus, I don't think it's fair to blame a concept for being the downfall of a story, especially if it's well-executed.
I mean, I'm all for fair criticism, but I don't think this story is for you. Feel free to move along
739931 Yeah, Rarity yelling out how much she loves the human on his first day, Twilight giving a blow job while he's sleeping, the princesses are humbled by a human, said human is clueless and needs to be introduced to the ponies we already know; he's living with Twilight; this is a paint by numbers human in Equestria story; this is cliche as cliche get's. Your concept isn't well executed, and you seem to have delusions of grandeur. Even if it's supposed to feel rushed on purpose, that's never a good thing. Ever.
Yeah, I don't like bad fanfics, so I should just mossy along.
The only way this makes any sense is that they're all changelings (they act like cardboard cut outs anyway, so they might as well be changelings), and they're just feeding on him, and he's really in a cave, stuck inside a cocoon or something.
And the lead suddenly turning Sasuke at the end? That should have been what he did at the beginning, but let's crap all over the characters to make way for clop.
I know that this being a HiE story that it takes place outside of the canon, but this definitely needs a AU tag.
Indeed it does, my apologies for not fully setting up the impression of what to expect when reading this.
I'll remain positive though, I get better with criticism than I do without it, so I can thank you for your time, at least.
740022 Fair enough, but I shouldn't be completely negative, so I'll say something nice about the fanfic so you know there's no hard feeling at all:
The lead seems like a decent person, even if he yields and yells a bit to much, his interaction with some of the ponies was cute, and the fic did make me chuckle a few times. You have good skill, but even with over 20,000 words it's a little fast paced. Maybe if this was happening over several months and the ponies actually have taken a liking to him over some time, it would seem a little more believable. I'll even be okay with polygamy if it was paced better.
Anyway, have a Pinkie for the effort:
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Heh, thanks. And yeah, of course, no hard feelings. That kind of criticism I really like because it all applies and is perfectly sound reasoning for why this story has its cons. I'm aware of them, but it comes with the territory and how it's written. It's entirely possible that it can be written better if written by someone with FAR more skill and better planning than I.
For now though, it's just another idea I wanted to get out of my head and make sure that it's at least DECENT. There are much worse fanfics out there, and you know just as well as I how bad they are. Especially trollfics, yeesh.
Also, I'm aware of the silly moments too, I believe that this story is more for casual observers of clop than it is people who take it too seriously and people who are looking EXCLUSIVELY for clop. I just wanted a middle ground where I could still tell a story, ya know?
But in any case, much appreciated NaturalGlitch, and thank you for the Pinkie Pie
Like a story with bits and bobs. Good work line. Adds more to the entertainment value as well as more excitement for waiting for the next chapter!
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