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Spitfire vows to become stronger, even if she breaks herself in the process. Misty Fly, however, suggests she should be more reasonable and believe in herself. Unfortunately, some of Spitfire's old wounds may need to be opened in order to solve this.

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I'm really glad you published your story anyway. I thought it was amazing. :rainbowkiss:

The writing was overall really good and the pacing was also good. What I liked the most were the characters. You did a great job writing Spitfire. Her worries and fears felt convincing and her interactions with Misty Fly were cute. And the ending made me daww.

There isn't really much to say other than: good job. :pinkiehappy:

6372279 Thanks for looking at the story and for the compliments. I'm glad you found it enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

i really don't see why someone would downvote this. i mean, it was amazing.

6429727 Thanks for reading this story. I appreciate your compliment and I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

You are an amazing writer that's all I can say

Rereading this, I don't know why I didn't add this to my Favoritest Fics shelf before! It's a truly amazing story. :twilightsmile:

It was amazing, though sometimes I was wondering who was speaking:twilightsheepish:
And I thought your username was familiar cause I read another one of your stories before:derpyderp1:
Matches Spitfire well, moar:pinkiegasp:

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