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TheAshenKnight


I'm a knight. Covered in soot. I'm not very good at this job.

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It has been over seven hundred years since the banishment of Nightmare Moon. They say time heals all, but some wounds cut too deeply to ever heal the scar. Celestia is reminded of this every night.

Then she finds a book.

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Thanks to these awesome fellows for looking over this and pounding my grammar mistakes, repeat of words, and general problems into oblivion!... Well, mostly. I'm not perfect. :twilightsheepish:

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PheonixStarr

Story inspired heavily by this wonderful song (Original) (Animated <-- This one is incredible). If you haven't heard it, go take a listen!

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Nice. Besides a tiny double-space, you're good to go.
EDIT: I guessed the link correctly :pinkiehappy:
Now, time to write a fic inspired by this, Ashen.

6380403 Fixed it! Thank you!

6380403 Concerning your edit: That's an interesting idea... I'll definitely keep it in mind.

A nice read. I'll be waiting for more stories from you. :twilightsmile:

That was AWESOME!

I wrote a critique/review of this story; it can be found over here.

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Thanks for something constructive to go off of!

I plan on going through this soon and attempting to fix some of the problems. I sent this in to EQD, and many of the issues you highlighted they also picked out. Maybe this will never be that great, but at the very least I can use this type of stuff to improve later writing. Thanks again! :twilightsmile:

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