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    A group of ponies find themselves in a abandoned building, which has a terrible secret.
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  • 76w, 4d
    Angelswift II ending and Angelswift III to be re-writen.

    So, I've had writers block for a long time now. (End of January) I've been blaming myself for this wanting SO BAD to get back to writing but nothing has worked. However, the last week I've been a temple of creativity. Writing songs and making videos for YouTube, but I STILL couldn't write. Now i think i know why. A change was made to the story of Rise of the Clockwork Stallions which has completely thrown my game off. I'm supposed to be the writer for the story for the game, but when your told that the Clockworks are to be changed from Sci-fi to Steampunk, it can cause a mental block, since my stories now no longer make sense. A lot of editing will be required on my part to fix this, and it's a sad that for Angelswift II, it's almost a total re-write.

    But I've had an idea, i can fix this without having to change Angelswift II. but Angelswift III WILL have to be scrapped. I will be working on a new version of Angelswift III tho, and it's going to be a completly different storyline. How different? Well, lets' just say nothing for now. Chapter 9 of Angelswift II will be rewritten in the coming week and to those who liked the ending as it was, I'm sorry. To those who didn't like the ending, I hope this one will be satisfactory.

    I hope you will support me in this change, because I cannot for see myself working on the current Angelswift III storyline as it now sits since it's not able to follow the Rise of the Clockwork Stallions storyline anymore.

    Nevel V.

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  • 114w, 5d
    Angelswift 2?

    I told myself and EVERYONE that would listen, i wouldn't make a sequel. well... I'm not. But i am. but it's not. Yet it is.

    Lemme start over. I'm planning out a new story, it's based on a MLP game my friends and I are currently working on. My Little Pony: Rise of the Clockwork Stallions. A platform game with about 30+ characters. My friend said he was adding Lance and Cherry to the game as well. I began asking about the story to the game and i felt there was potential for a side story to it. An adventure that wouldn't be told of in the game.

    Lance and Cherry are going to be in this story, and they won't be alone. This is a Brony Awakening project (Brony Awakening is a Forum Community i'm a member of. I consider them my Brony Family)  and i plan on adding their OC's to the story as well. The OC's that are in the game i mean. The game itself will have the mane six as well as dozens of your favourite background ponies, from Lyra to Octavia. but my story will not be based around the mane six. They have problems of their own while my story is going on.

    But yeah, Lance and Cherry are going to be the mane characters of my up coming story but not sure if i can call it a sequel because it doesn't follow the previous story. Or will it? I dunno, it's not supposed to. But then again, Angelswift was definitive. There is no after story. Maybe this will be the after story. The next adventure.

    The story is currently untitled. Probably gonna call it "Awakening" or something along those lines. But yes, if you're a fan of Angelswift, please keep your eyes open. I'm back to writing, i'm better then i was before *cough* Look, i'm not spell checking this. This is a blog post, nothing more.

    Aaaaaanyways, i'll leave it at that.

    Hope i gave you all something to look forward to. Any questions, feel free to ask and i'll respond as soon as i am able.

    Nevel V.

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  • 122w, 6d
    Angelswift is Complete!

    Angelswift is 100%

    The story is complete.

    Everypony. It has been one heck of a journey, many tears were shed and shared. I really hope you've enjoyed reading this story as much as me.

    I've not just put a few dozen hours into this book. I'm a slow typer. read this as slow as you can, so you sound weird. That's how slow I type. I takes me about an hour to type like 250 words.

    A 53,000 word story that's a BAWK load of hours. 3 months, 12 hours each saturday/Sunday every weekend. Weekdays, maybe 2-5 hours, depends if i'm not being harassed on Steam constantly :P

    This has been my golden egg. Nevel can't do anybetter then this. I really hope that it's been worth it :) because if you like it, then it was.

    /] to everyone who's read it and left positive feedback, this story would NEVER have happened without you. Never! You inspired me to do it and i wrote from the heart.

    Stay awesome!

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  • ...

This is a story about a big brother, Lance Angelswift, fleeing his home with his little sister, Cherry Blossom, to protect her from their father. They travel to Ponyville and stay in a house that is on the edge of Everfree Forest. Lance starts hearing about the stories of the forest from the local residents and he begins to worry for the safety of his little sister.

First Published
27th May 2012
Last Modified
15th Jul 2012
#1 · 130w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Amazing, more!:flutterrage:


:fluttershysad: please?

#2 · 130w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Jesus christ this story is so fucking heartwarming. :rainbowkiss:

Write and upload faster dammit!

#3 · 130w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

It was amazing! You should totally finish it, Very Good work indeed. A Quadzillion out of a Quadzillion, Perfect. MUST MAKE MORE!!! PLEASE!! :pinkiehappy:

There was laughs, so many laughs. I demand more!:flutterrage:


I can't belive how good this is, is this even possible or am I dreaming of awesomeness?! :rainbowlaugh:

#6 · 129w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Really Well made :P

Work FASTER! I wanna read more of it! :pinkiehappy:

#8 · 129w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

I agree - :applecry: - Absolutely awesome!

#9 · 129w, 9h ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Marvellous, Make more, Please please please! :pinkiehappy: You write such a touching story ...

#10 · 128w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

It brought tears to my eyes. :applecry: :raritydespair: :fluttercry:

#12 · 128w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

Cherry cherry cherry cherry

Her name is repeated so many times..:facehoof:

#13 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·


Helpful Criticism is always welcome. Upon review, I may have used it more times then was necessary. I have fixed this by replacing her name where possible and without breaking the sentence to pull people out of the immersion of the story. Thank you and I hope that the editing is more pleasing for you.

Nevel V.

#14 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

That Chapter spread warmth to my heart, I cannot explain how good it is, how good you are, truly magnificent!

#16 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

This story is awesome.  Grammar is decent.  Plot is developed.  Quite descriptive too. One qualm though...WATCH CAPITALIZATION!

Other than that I'm favoriting+liking this.

#17 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Another cutie mark crusader?What will go wrong next chapter? :scootangel:

#18 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·


I thank you for your kind words, and i assure you i do my absolute best to get the capitals in all the right places. Just sometimes they do slip through the cracks. I'll continue to try and improve and watch out for those annoyances. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

#19 · 126w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·


#20 · 126w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

Poor Cherry, thats all I can say, poor little Cherry. :fluttercry:

#21 · 126w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

Curse those two. (insert angry face here)

#22 · 126w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

oh man :fluttercry: poor Cherry

#23 · 126w, 7h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

daaww cuteness :rainbowkiss:

#24 · 126w, 4h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

d'awww cuteness...but you really need a proofreader...I saw several when fluttershy says Young man?  You mean young colt?

#25 · 126w, 1h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·


Gah! Thanks mate.  But that mistake can be completely understandable. :derpytongue2:

"How so?"

Well, when I did that bit,. I was imagining her "Stare" voice, and if you go back to the Stare Master episode, she does actually say "Young Man". :pinkiehappy:

Okay, yes, she's saying it to a cockatrice. But that's where the mistake came from and why I repeatedly missed it. I will edit the error, and I thank you for pointing it out. :pinkiesmile: And it's funny you mention proof reader, because I do have one, but he wasn't online when i finished this chapter and I did ask a bunch of friends if they could give it a look over before i published the chapter. But they were all too busy or tired and I was just too impatient to be patient. :applecry: But don't worry, I promise i'll sort something out and try to bring you the best quality I can. Pinkie Promise! :pinkiesmile:

#26 · 125w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>800601 LOLOLOLOL.  Its K.  My fanfic also has errors and I need proofreaders to pick them up.  When I first published my chapters I didn't have a proofreader.  Now that I have two, i am so constantly revising it and rewriting sections to make it more clear that I literally can't seem to start writing the next chapter!!

#27 · 125w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

The Proofreader says: Utterly amazingly epicly awesomely (can I fit any more words in) beautifully (looks like I can) heart touching, infact I think I may need a tissue over here.

Nevel, How can you be this good. I have read alot of books, and this goes right to the top on my list, amazing work. (I'll be online more often. :pinkiehappy: )

ugh Fluttershy your supposed to understand animals clearly your not getting Angels message. Cant wait for the next chapter when is it? :twilightsmile:

>>871923  Well, she has always had trouble understanding Angel for some reason :P The next chapter will be VERY soon. I've beaten my writers block and I'm already working on the next chapter. :pinkiesmile:

#30 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

>>763316 I believe this is the face you're looking for. :twilightangry2:

#31 · 123w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 13 ·

Nooo please let Cherry be okay, Lance just needs to find her cant wait for the next chapter when is it? :twilightsmile:

#32 · 123w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 13 ·


Well, it's almost done. Truth be told, Chapter 13 was supposed to be MUCH longer then this but at about 75% of the way through I noticed the chapter was already 5,500+ words and I'm still not finished. So I cut it in half so I could give you a little something to enjoy. I'd hate to release a 7000+ word chapter. Would be epic but I just think some ppl might put off reading something that long in one go :twilightoops:

#33 · 123w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 13 ·

Uh Oh...THat isn't good.

#34 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·

Ok I read the very last sentance, and my heart just dropped, missed a beat and became extremely heavy all at once, then I went dizzy and I felt sorrow all over my face, a story that can make you feel such powerful emotion like that, your doing well, even though it's sad and scary, it's still good. But seriously man, I couldn't stop reading this story at this point, I would got to the ends of the Earth to read the end, Just promise me one thing, Make it have a happy ending in way or form of another, I don't think the very fibres of my heart can take it if something too bad happens.

#35 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·


WHY :fluttercry:

#36 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

If only my own older brother was like this. :applecry:

#37 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·

Cherry didnt die did she is she okay? :fluttercry: cant wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

good chapter I hope your doing a sequel :twilightsmile:


I... I'm happy that you would ask for that, but i really cannot think of anyway to write a sequel to this. Yes i left a few holes in the story. The father for example. but no. Thank you for your support through this, but i really have no plans at this time for a sequel.  

:rainbowkiss: Stay awesome man.

#40 · 122w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

:fluttercry: Aww.

Lance... what the hell man? :ajbemused:





A Prequel?

That sounds very possible... Oh no :derpyderp2: Stop! My mind is crafting the story line already based on flash back from the story. :pinkiecrazy:

No promises :twilightsmile: at this time i really really just wanna take a break and catch up on my reading... maybe learn to improve my own writing for next time. N-Not that that's a promise there wll be one :twilightsheepish:

>>917183 aha my idea of planting stories in your brain worked :pinkiegasp: brilliance :twilightsmile:

Thanks for a good read!

Keep up the good work. :heart:


Thank you for reading, i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

:yay: UGGHHHHH "yay"

:pinkiehappy: It was Epicly;

:pinkiehappy: Awesomely;

:pinkiehappy: Unbelieveably;

:pinkiehappy: Fantasticaly;

:heart: Heart Stoppingly;

:flutterrage: Win!

Win! Win! Win!

So much Win!

sad it ended.

but the fic is really great. :)


Thank you very much :pinkiesmile: I'm sad it's over too because I really enjoyed writing it.

>>917044 Maybe you could make a extra chapter to fill in those holes.

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