Equestria, a land of magic and bending, has lived in peace for centuries. For centuries it was protected by the cycle of Avatars, but when the avatar disappeared, two ponies took it upon themselves to defend their home. They were Celestia and Luna, the alicorns sisters. Equestria was restored under the newly-named Princesses' wisdom and guidance... until that fateful night.
Sunset Shimmer, student to Princess Celestia, is sent forward in time to stop Nightmare Moon. On her arrival, she meets a noblemare named Twilight Sparkle, and her dragon assistant Spike. With her two new companions, she ventures on a journey to stop Equestria’s new queen and free Princess Celestia. As they travel, they learn that they also have to find the answer to a centuries-old question:
What happened to the avatar?
Nit bad of a chapter
This sounds like a really good story. I can't wait to read more.
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Thanks!
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Thanks! A new chapter will be out every 3 weeks or so (hopefully).
Amazing. OuO
I must see this story go on! Well written, funny, entertaining, and amazing throughout! You have my support! =D
PS: Funny idea based on Avatar Abridged!
Random Pony #1: "Was that an iceberg pinata?"
Random Pony #2: "No you idiot! It was obviously glacier candy!"
Random Pony #3: "You're both wrong! It was obviously an event that will lead to a massive written story spanning two or more years with twists, turns, and adventure leading up to a discovery that was obvious from the start!"
Random Pony #1/2: "..."
Random Pony #3: "Sorry, I got into the pink grass again."
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Chapter 1 will be out once my editor gets back to me.
Thanks!
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I must go check that out now!
Please sir (or mame), I want some more!
This was really good, and I look forward to the first chapter.
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Thanks!
I know I'm far behind, but my editor has been having trouble finding the time to read and edit the next chapter (it's over 10k in length). Once I finally get some feedback from her, the next chapter will be out.
Boy scout's honorCross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!6541239
Then I'll keep an eye on this.
So I had to wait for 2 months! Because you forgot to post it?
Well I kind of forgot about this story, but not in till today.
But keep the chapters ridiculous lengths, I love the long chapters for this story!
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Next chapter will be roughly the length of the prologue (assuming I don't make any massive edits). Hopefully my editor can get it back to me by the end of the week, but no promises.
This is definitely promising. Well worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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I'm glad you enjoyed!
You have my attention! Interesting take on the Avatar series!
Crap, Sombra! Things are really starting to heat up!
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Thanks!
I figured that since no one meshed the two universes entirely together, I would! Hopefully I can deliver everything I'm trying to do clearly enough.
So Rainbow's been found, but the journey is just beginning...
I look forward to the next chapter!
You have my attention...EDIT: Well, crap. There went my attempt at being dramatic. Someone beat me to it!
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Don't worry, at least you got my attention!
Wow, I have posted a new chapter in a month in a half...
Looks like I have some explaining to do... and a chapter to finish editting.
Damn... that was brutal!
Interesting idea, blending two shows (both of which I like) while adding a new spin such as Time travel into the mix.
I see this not only a retelling of Avatar: The Last Air Bender but also MLP season 1 premier. With Sombra in the role of either Zuko or Commander Zhao.
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Spot on!
Great work, They've found the pony they were looking for and she rejects the offer. Also is it just me or does this scene feels like something out the Avatar series.
Great work on this chapter.
I hope one day you continue this story, it’s so well written