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    • Playtime
      A cosmic conflict rises between the Royal Sisters.

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    • The Ballad of Sir Spike de Draco
      Adventures and exploits of Sir Spike de Draco, the legendary dragon warrior.
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    • Lovebirds
      Owloysius must stop an evil creature, before it permanently deprives Twilight of her sleep.
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    When a clash of planetary proportions drives the Royal Sisters apart, Twilight Sparkle must find a way to make them reconcile with each other.

    First Published
    27th May 2012
    Last Modified
    27th May 2012

    Comments ( 30 )

    #1 · 51w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Brilliant!!!:pinkiehappy:

    Ezn
    #2 · 51w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Yes! So glad to see this up and marked "Incomplete"!

    #3 · 51w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Love how crass Luna can be. In fact, she minds me of Nightmare Moon a lot more than I expected.

    #4 · 51w, 1h ago · · ·
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    Something tells me that a certain pink party pony from Ponyville is coming to Canterlot!~ :pinkiegasp:

    #5 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    MORA

    #6 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh God, I love this. :pinkiehappy:

    #7 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This should be fun n_n

    #8 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh god, she's going to involve Pinkie Pie. This won't end well.

    #9 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Woohoo, Pinkie Pie time! :pinkiehappy:

    #10 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmm looks promising...

    #11 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Time to break out the big guns! Everything is better with gracious amounts of Pinkie Pie!

    Now, how might Celestia and Luna try to bribe her? :trollestia:

    "Access to a unlimited supply of cake" vs "posting party invitations in the sky, written in stars"

    #12 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Sibling rivalries... Taken to the EXTREME! And a the end there? :trollestia: made an appearance. Poor Twilight. :facehoof:

    #13 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZPwR3NaJlM  :pinkiehappy:

    #14 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh god. Not Pinkie.

    #15 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Holy shit, this promises to be awesome ! Love what you did :pinkiehappy:. Speaking of love, Luna's confession looks like a Freudian slip, hehe :trollestia:

    Some editing :

    "Before they she could have said anything to save face, [...]" Too much words :coolphoto:

    Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

    #16 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wait what's a fiefdom? "Stops there and Looks it up"...fucking take it!

    "I love you twilight sparkle" omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg

    Well I'd be torn between those 2 as well if it was me...let's hope pinkie can solve this

    #17 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Time to bring in the big guns. :pinkiehappy:

    #18 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

    #19 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    So, they're bringing in Rainbow Dash? [/sarcasm]

    #20 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Time to bring out the big guns.

    #21 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>677675

    Mebbe not. She does hate losing, after all.

    #22 · 50w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>677471 Ack, no how in Equestria have I missed that? Thanks for pointing it out! :D

    #23 · 50w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Hahaha! I just adore Trollestia and Lunatic! The madness has been 20% doubled!

    I'm sure that's possible! Right?

    :rainbowhuh:

    #24 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Send in the trolls!  :trollestia:

    #25 · 48w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Here comes Pinkie!!:pinkiesmile:

    #26 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, the good news for Twilight is that there going to be a lot of playtesting already done for the game.  Possibly even some full-up analysis.  Working from that should make the process of balancing and improving, (e.g. fixing the risk/reward of the Nebula), much easier than with a completely new game.

    Now, presuming the new edition of the game is successful and makes both princesses happy:  Does Twilight have it in her to say something like "I seem to recall a number of promises...."

    #27 · 48w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Amazing! I love the characterization and the interplay between the Sisters. Can't wait to see where you are taking this, but it looks very promising.:pinkiehappy:

    #28 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #29 · 39w, 5h ago · · ·
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    This is goodgoodgood, beyond entertaining! It's a shame it doesn't look like you're updating anymore...*hint hint, wink wink* :raritywink:

    #30 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I demand a second chapter!

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