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When a clash of planetary proportions drives the Royal Sisters apart, Twilight Sparkle must find a way to make them reconcile with each other.

First Published
27th May 2012
Last Modified
27th May 2012
#1 · 133w, 3d ago · · ·

Brilliant!!!:pinkiehappy:

Ezn
#2 · 133w, 3d ago · · ·

Yes! So glad to see this up and marked "Incomplete"!

#3 · 133w, 3d ago · · ·

Love how crass Luna can be. In fact, she minds me of Nightmare Moon a lot more than I expected.

#4 · 133w, 3d ago · · ·

Something tells me that a certain pink party pony from Ponyville is coming to Canterlot!~ :pinkiegasp:

#5 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

MORA

#6 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh God, I love this. :pinkiehappy:

#7 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

This should be fun n_n

#8 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh god, she's going to involve Pinkie Pie. This won't end well.

#9 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Woohoo, Pinkie Pie time! :pinkiehappy:

#10 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Hmm looks promising...

#11 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Time to break out the big guns! Everything is better with gracious amounts of Pinkie Pie!

Now, how might Celestia and Luna try to bribe her? :trollestia:

"Access to a unlimited supply of cake" vs "posting party invitations in the sky, written in stars"

#12 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Sibling rivalries... Taken to the EXTREME! And a the end there? :trollestia: made an appearance. Poor Twilight. :facehoof:

#14 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh god. Not Pinkie.

#15 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Holy shit, this promises to be awesome ! Love what you did :pinkiehappy:. Speaking of love, Luna's confession looks like a Freudian slip, hehe :trollestia:

Some editing :

"Before they she could have said anything to save face, [...]" Too much words :coolphoto:

Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

#16 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Wait what's a fiefdom? "Stops there and Looks it up"...fucking take it!

"I love you twilight sparkle" omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg

Well I'd be torn between those 2 as well if it was me...let's hope pinkie can solve this

#17 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Time to bring in the big guns. :pinkiehappy:

#18 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

#19 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

So, they're bringing in Rainbow Dash? [/sarcasm]

#20 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Time to bring out the big guns.

#21 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

>>677675

Mebbe not. She does hate losing, after all.

#22 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

>>677471 Ack, no how in Equestria have I missed that? Thanks for pointing it out! :D

#23 · 132w, 5d ago · · ·

Hahaha! I just adore Trollestia and Lunatic! The madness has been 20% doubled!

I'm sure that's possible! Right?

:rainbowhuh:

#24 · 132w, 1d ago · · ·

Send in the trolls!  :trollestia:

#25 · 131w, 3d ago · · ·

Here comes Pinkie!!:pinkiesmile:

#26 · 131w, 1d ago · · ·

Well, the good news for Twilight is that there going to be a lot of playtesting already done for the game.  Possibly even some full-up analysis.  Working from that should make the process of balancing and improving, (e.g. fixing the risk/reward of the Nebula), much easier than with a completely new game.

Now, presuming the new edition of the game is successful and makes both princesses happy:  Does Twilight have it in her to say something like "I seem to recall a number of promises...."

#27 · 130w, 3d ago · · ·

Amazing! I love the characterization and the interplay between the Sisters. Can't wait to see where you are taking this, but it looks very promising.:pinkiehappy:

#29 · 121w, 3d ago · · ·

This is goodgoodgood, beyond entertaining! It's a shame it doesn't look like you're updating anymore...*hint hint, wink wink* :raritywink:

#30 · 120w, 20h ago · · ·

I demand a second chapter!

#31 · 66w, 4d ago · · ·

this is really good; I loved "HE-MAN AND THE MASTERS OF THE UNIVERSE "reference, I hope you update soon

#32 · 58w, 1d ago · · ·

hope you add a new chapter soon

#33 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·

Please make more!

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