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uhrora


Aurora. College Student. Loves pizza ~

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[Note: this story contains three drastically different parts/arcs.]

In an alternate, human Equestria, one's Clan determines everything. Until Princesses Celestia and Luna enact the Harmony Initiative, a law that establishes integration. The first experiment is Ponyville High School, where members of all Clans are selected to attend. But the Initiative is not exactly popular--for students, parents or the Clanleaders. As tensions rise, Ponyville's melting pot begins to boil over. Can a group of six high school students from radically different backgrounds keep civil war from breaking out?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Interesting. Gonna watch this avidly

Y1

Huh... Amusing enough for the first chapters, though I imagine the more interestng things will come later because this is simply the build up. I'll give this a like for now. I'll need to see more chapters before I fave.
Also your writing style could use a little work, you use character names a little to much. Try occasionly swapping a name out for a brief description like instead of Celestia say "the princess". Just brief descriptors instead of names could help remove any feeling of repetition.

LET THERE BE FLUTTERMAAAAAAAAC
... if that's ok....

I liked how you humanized the characters flawlessly

I DEMAND MORE!!
Uhm......please?:twilightblush:

i couldn't help but notice a lack of a certain dragon fax machine
and you used ponies instead of people sometimes still a great story i really love it :heart:

In love with Spitfire’s act, finally someone thinks Rainbow Dash is the bitch

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