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Blossomforth, during a visit to her friend Rarity's place for a dress fitting, mentions the pain in her back. Rarity needs a second to go with her to the spa. Circumstances lead to the two going together. Will the trip turn Blossom's recent bad mood around?

Written as a contest prize for Jondor. Thanks to him for the concept and prereading!

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Good work and it's a plausible shipping. Now if I could just get a vote bar.

Nice and calm and I loved reading the way blossomforth thought.

That was a cute, fun read. I adored the way you characterized Rarity and Blossomforth throughout the story. Anyway, excellent work as usual! :twilightsmile:

I like it. Though it reads like it's skirting the boundaries of the rating a bit

I'll ship it.

Ship accepted

bulkyshy or flutterbiceps?

That was a really cute read! I like this ship, and I loved Blossomforth's characterisation and the narration of her thoughts.

:twilightblush:Well Blossom Rarity's even into dragons she's hugged and kissed Spike lots of times!
:eeyup: Bulk buddy we need to talk
:raritystarry: Oh my Twilight!
:pinkiegasp: Macflitterbulk!
:moustache: Believe me you want a touch of a gentle drake getting pounded hurts I know.
:twilightsheepish: Poor Spike was stiff all over after being pounded
:raritywink: My Spikey stiff?
:facehoof:

6333489 - The most common shipping name is Flutterbulk.

6333489 I'm going with bulk shyceps

That was adorable! I loved it.

That was a great story, very cute and quite funny, too. I really enjoyed the way you took the 'X was Y' framework and used it to express Forth's slightly scatterbrained and really rather amusing stream of consciousness. It wasn't a ship that I'd come across before, but you really made it work - all the characters felt like themselves and the interactions felt natural.
Thanks for writing, and keep up the good work!

If I could give you ten likes, I would.

Much like Blossomforth, I couldn't find much to complain about in this story. It was cute. The only nit pick that I have is that Blossom’s personality felt a little unrefined. She thinks of herself as a smart arse, but only really showed it once. Likewise for her fits of awkwardness. She didn't have enough interaction with other characters to really show the audience who she was, we're forced to just take her own impression of herself at face value, and that makes it difficult to really know what kind of mare she is.

But that aside, this was a cute story. And Blossomforth stories are scarcer than a virgin in a brothel, so I enjoyed it gretly overall.

Cheers!

6334302 with this fandom Shipping is always in bulk quantity :pinkiegasp: (I'll go back into my box):facehoof:

6336198 I prefer Flutters and Big Mac... shipping bulk biceps (snow flake) with anypony is just.... *horrified shiver*

6336925 :yay::eeyup:agree flutterMac :pinkiehappy: Look what Bulk did to Spike in Castle Sweet Castle!:pinkiegasp:

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Bulk shipping has it's hazards:facehoof:

PHR

On this hallowed day, a new ship has sailed. Let the Blossity and Rariforth groups assemble! Let the sequels and spinoffs be written, and let the art be drawn! Set sail anew into these freshly discovered waters! Go 'Forth and multiply!



All half-joking aside, nice job with this fic. I, like a lot of other commentators, like how you portrayed Blossomforth's thoughts. It's too bad we didn't get to hear Rarity's side; for one thing, I suspect she knew all along exactly how intimate preening is, and used the opportunity to coax out their feelings toward each other.

I'm also kinda bummed that this fic ended so soon, right after this ship left port. They didn't didn't even kiss yet! :applecry:

This requires a sequel with Rarity helping Blossomforth do her deepest stretches.

6336925 slanderer! FlutterBulk is adorable!

6338457 it really isnt, its creepy as hell...

6336977 I am not saying he doesnt deserve a ship, but he really doesnt deserve fluttershy :rainbowlaugh:

6338958 Swoll people need lovin' too.

D'awwww
Loved the story. Also love the way you write, such creative wording.

Like "basemented" :rainbowlaugh:
Both funny and inventive!

Fav'd :twilightsmile:

That probably should be "with him"

Thunderlane, the dork who had tried to get her to play Stallions and Stalactites with her

Finally read this. Loved it. Love you. Do more.

And I won that contest! Where's my fic?

Absolutely adorable!

Blossom, please hold yourself. You are making a mess. :pinkiehappy:

This feels like the beginning of a longer story. :twilightsmile:

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