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Plough and Stars Pony


This autistic brony is a fan of the works of Harry Turtledove. Particularly the "Darkness" hexalogy. Anypony know if there is a group for Turtledove fans?

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This is my anthology of stories derived from Bad Seed 72's immensely enjoyable tale "What Hath Joined Together".
These are one-shots or vignettes loosely tied up in to the arc of how I thought the story was going to go over the months of her Hiatus in 2014. Do not mind if they are in anachronological order.
I wrote them down in an old diary with a favourite Parker pen, sometimes stopping altogether when I ran out of ink, (I live on an island where the nearest W.H.Smiths's is in Oban, sixty or seventy miles away and one cannot buy ink re-fills in the local shops.)
I am not bothered about this getting downvotes because one of the main characters is Flash Sentry. I think that Brad and Flash Sentry are two separate persons.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 26 )

Great to see these up, Baxter. Loved them just as much as the first time. :twilightsmile:

Always nice to hear from Steel and Spear too!

That was very cute.

Here's a tip. Italicize thoughts so that we can tell it apart from narrative. Also, you forgot to capitalize some of the names.

That was heartbreaking, then heartwarming.

At least this chapter italicizes thoughts.

I am so glad this is still on, even if the original fic has been canceled.

That view must be really impressive.

FTL

Good to see someone continuing this story. Will be tracking this one.

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As it happens, keying up a short sop to the readers and followers after eight and a bit months since January 20th. I bow to F.T.L. in being interested.

Like the fimfic and it is so awesome to see you didn't stop writing this fic.

Madame Daguerreo does not use flash powder

Yet, you later say she does.

Once again, this is sweet.

That was a bad dream. Glad Greyhoof was there for him.

Are you just as sad as I am that the author of the original fic quit?

Excellent on Cadence’s caring personality.

“Flash, there is really one question I need to ask: do you have strong feelings for Twilight?”

“Yes!” Flash forces himself to say. He opens his eyes again and made himself continue. “I love her. I love her very much.”

Cadence:
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This is good, but your paragraphs have line breaks in the middle of them. It makes it harder to read.

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Oh, I will correct that, after I fix the character-gobbling error. You know, the error which crops up whenever you are keying up fast, and the error displaces and deletes a character-space as you key it. Do you know how to fix it, Zera? The line breaks happened as I was double-spacing between the paragraphs.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Bad Seed 72's immensely enjoyable tale "What Hath Joined Together".

Where can I read that story?

Comment posted by Plough and Stars Pony deleted Jun 27th, 2020

You can read it on this website, Nova.

This chapter was satisfactory on so many levels, thank you!

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Thank you so much for loving it!. I put a lot of effort in to it. I think Twilight was deep enough in the moment to float with the flow, and not fret and freak out how she could ruin the kisses with Flash..

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