Smoking Crater didn't ask for a little brother...he got one anyway. Now he has to deal with little Meteor Shower. For a WHOLE DAY! Great...
Written by. ThePortalPonies
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We are two bronies who write in their free time. AraBrony and ThePortalPonies share this account to work on stories together for fun. HAPPY READING!
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This was adorable, and just an overall great story, keep up the good work!
6276419 Thanks, I love feedback it really helps!
Rock on!
-ThePortalPonies
It feels rushed.
6277433 It may be... I was running out of time till the deadline for it.
-ThePortalPonies
6279740 The one for the contest I'm entering it in.
-ThePortalPonies
Well now, looks like you need a lot more views and reviews! Nice story. I love the brotherly bonding there. I had the feels. I love how snarky Crater is. He's like, "Oh no you didn't." Lol, too funny!
To hopefully help you out, I've went ahead and completely edited this story for you, giving you some tips and suggestions along the way. I'll PM you the link.
Awesome job! Keep on writing.
6397469 Dies Senpai...noticed me...
-ThePortalPonies
Oh so cute, I was smiling through it.
6407460 Thanks!
-ThePortalPonies